|Idea| So, if you have me as a contact on MSN...

Joot · 09-03-2008

You'll know I've been considering rewriting Pursuit. But some of you don't know what that is. It's a story about two guys chasing after a kid in a forest, one being a big idiot, and the other being a small scrawny guy with a nasally voice that exploits the bigger guy's stupidity. I wrote it while I was taking a break from writing the first version of VA. If you don't know what VA is, then you're a loser.

Anyway, I'm making this thread to ask... would anyone even read it? You won't have to worry, the story's incredibly short, so I'd get it done. Here's a link to the old version, the rewrite will be way different, but with the same premise, I guess.

Pursuit

**JAIF** · 09-03-2008

Yeah, I'd read it. If you're going to re-write it, then I'll not bother reading the old version. Was it finished? Or was it a one-shot story?

Joot · 09-03-2008

It's a finished story. Like four chapters... It was alright. But a bit melodramatic and the ending was stupid.

09-03-2008	#1 (permalink)
Joot (20) Super Saiyan 2 Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: City of Angels Posts: 1,245 Blog Entries: 1 Rep Power: 30	So, if you have me as a contact on MSN... You'll know I've been considering rewriting Pursuit. But some of you don't know what that is. It's a story about two guys chasing after a kid in a forest, one being a big idiot, and the other being a small scrawny guy with a nasally voice that exploits the bigger guy's stupidity. I wrote it while I was taking a break from writing the first version of VA. If you don't know what VA is, then you're a loser. Anyway, I'm making this thread to ask... would anyone even read it? You won't have to worry, the story's incredibly short, so I'd get it done. Here's a link to the old version, the rewrite will be way different, but with the same premise, I guess. Pursuit

09-03-2008	#2 (permalink)
JAIF Moderator Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Piercing the Heavens and stuff. Posts: 5,852 Rep Power: 63	Re: So, if you have me as a contact on MSN... Yeah, I'd read it. If you're going to re-write it, then I'll not bother reading the old version. Was it finished? Or was it a one-shot story? __________________ Empty until further notice.

09-03-2008	#3 (permalink)
Joot (20) Super Saiyan 2 Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: City of Angels Posts: 1,245 Blog Entries: 1 Rep Power: 30	Re: So, if you have me as a contact on MSN... It's a finished story. Like four chapters... It was alright. But a bit melodramatic and the ending was stupid.