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(29) Great Lord of Worlds
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Joker wasn’t paying any attention to Naruto until he heard the soft whistling of the wind being sliced in half. With a still perplexed look, the young male turned towards the ninja.
Hardly even thinking of what to do, Joker lowered the gravity around himself and Naruto before jumping up and at an angle, thus maneuvering out of the child’s path. Now, the young blonde kid was aiming straight for the arena wall with no gravity pulling him down. At the same time though, the gravity around the two clones greatly increased, a weight that could crush that of a human’s body. Once gravity was reapplied around him, Joker dropped back to the floor, his eyes back on the trident. “Really now. I was sent all the way around the world and sent into multiple forests and this piece of lumber is still attached? What kind of wood do these ninjas use nowadays?” The blonde warrior asked, although not sending the question directly at anyone.
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Last edited by Pyro Bastard; 01-17-2008 at 02:08 AM. |
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I like the eye patch.
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I skimmed through it too, I gotta say though... both of you are VERY similar, but I'd say Pyro has got the edge, barely.
So Pyro GMV.
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(29) Great Lord of Worlds
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>_> Editting to make it smaller now. Didn't know Word increased the size.
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Wench
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Pfft, writing your posts out in word? You crazy roleplayers and your...spellcheck. =J
The quality of detail in pyro's posts was better in my opinion. Although some of the action was hard to follow at times, but Pyro still gets my vote.
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(25) Kami of Earth
Join Date: Aug 2007
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Naruto under performed due to your writing style. Good fight, liked Joker PB, first time seeing or reading about him. PB wins by default of Naruto's character.
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(15) Super Namekian
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Also have to give it to Pyro.
I was the one who told Pyro about FoR so I take credit for his character >_>. I thought he portrayed the character well and his RPing was a step up from Inuyasha's.
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(16) Exequias
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Despite how well played Inuyasha's character was, it seemed Pyro was one step ahed of him throughout the fight. That and I lol'd at some of his character's antics, although I've never really heard of Joker before.
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(20) Super Saiyan 2
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Hmm... a good match between the two of you, both played well. I think my vote will have to go to Pyro though... I'm not sure why, his posts just entertained me a little more. Good work PB, and you did a good job, Inuyasha. Congrats!
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