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Old 04-21-2008   #1 (permalink)
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Default The World of Emeffjee

The World of Emeffjee is basically a story based on the forums, but in a sort of medieval setting. It's like medieval times mets Naruto, I guess I can say. Here's the character list, I listed everyone that will appear in the story whether they're significant or not, which is why some people have shitty bios. Namely the "knowledgeable guys," lol. Some of the bios should explain the plot a bit more.

Ace - Most public of the rulers. Master swordsmen.
Sharky - Most private of the rulers. Commander-in-chief.

Goku - Founder of the Royal Guard. Head of Magical Arts department. Part of the Legendary Three. Rose through the ranks and is now future ruler of Emeffjee. Specializes in most forms of magic.

Engel - Head guard of Ace and Sharky. Most skilled mage in Royal Guard. Part of the Legendary Three. Celestial mage.
Punxx - Second-in-Command of Royal Guard. Mentor of Joot, Stray, and Vivi. Most renowned mage of Emeffjee. Lightning specialist.
Machiavelli - Higher-up guard. Best physical combatant of the Royal Guard. Weapons specialist.
Lazlo - Higher-up guard. Machiavelli's rival, sparring partner and best friend.
Teecee - Higher-up guard. Guard for hire but is very demanding pay-wise, doesn't see much action. Good friend of Kei's. Conversion specialist.
Raven - Lowest ranked of the higher-ups. Very perverted. Skilled wrestler.

Stray - Punxx's top pupil. Has began his elemental training. Beginning wind mage.
Vivi - One of Punxx's pupils. Still in basic training. Interested in the Dark Arts, much to Punxx's dismay.
Joot - Punxx's least skilled pupil. A smartass. Interested in learning Lightning magic from Punxx.

Manic - Once part of the Royal Guard, was suspended indefinitely. Was exiled from Emeffjee for trying to overthrow Emeffjee. Earth specialist.
Halcyon - Partner of Manic. Renowned criminal. After escaping prison, helped Manic in plan to overthrow Emeffjee. Was exiled as well. Wind mage.

Superior and Duo - Best friends. Both were ranked slightly lower than Goku. After a disclosed power struggle, both were released from their duties. Although never officially exiled, both left Emefjee. Superior is Fire specialist. Duo is Lightning mage.

Amerowolf and Ranny - Lovers. Renowned mages. Amerowolf trained under Engel. Ranny is Kei's ex. Amerowolf is a Celestial mage. Ranny specializes in manipulating plant life.

Dino - Was ranked just above Goku. Didn't like how he was treated. Abandoned his duties and fleed from Emeffjee.
Roze - Part of the Legendary Three. Guard for hire like Teecee. Ice mage.
Crayne - Knowledgeable guy.
Island - Knowledgeable guy.
Sloth - Knowledgeable guy.
Andrew - Fire mage.
Vicky - Andrew's wife.
Baylavim - Wind mage.
Carl - Joot's "best friend." After Joot went into training with Punxx, they sort of lost touch. Scholar.
Kei - Comedian. The reason Ranny's gay. Good friend of Teecee. >_>

Nikushimi - Very powerful mage. Considered too dangerous and was exiled from Emeffjee. Wants to overthrow Emeffjee. Despises Goku and Punxx. Has his eye on two of Punxx's pupils. Practices the Dark Arts. Main villian.

Also. Notice how some people have specialist next to their element and other have mage. Specialist means that's what they specialize in, but are skilled in other areas too. Mage means that every spell they know and every time they use magic, it's related to that element. That doesn't necessarily mean that a mage beats a specialist. Punxx is a lightning specialist and Duo's a lightning mage. Punxx >> Duo, but Duo solely focuses on lightning, so there.

I'll probably add more members as I further develop the plot.
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looks extreamly intresting there hope to read it =)
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Oh, bad ass. I get to play the bad pupil. Woot!
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Looks intresting. Knowing you, it'll probably get five chapters out and then drop though. >_>
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Where's MY character? D:

Eh, sounds pretty cool and I'll read it... I assume this is more serious than JAIF's MFG Chronicles? Good luck, sounds interesting...
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<3 I can be the nagging wife, riiight? xD but seriously, as I said on MSN, this looks like it should be fun~! ^_^

Keep it goingg~! =D lol
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Hmph, sitty role. To be expected from. >_<


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Your role's important. It's just... I can't really go into detail without giving shit away. But you're very knowledgeable in magic... a certain type of magic.
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I don't think this will be anywhere near as epic as JAIF's fic, and knowing Joot, he'll probably drop it in no time, but it has potential.
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...just how epic is JAIF's fic?
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...just how epic is JAIF's fic?
It was mildly entertaining, at best. Well written, very much so. But hardly funny. Plus Nikushimi was the main character, so it got 11/10 on average scores.
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...just how epic is JAIF's fic?
As Shiro said, it was pretty much the most epic thing ever.

It's called "The MFG Chronicles"; it's probably on Page 2, if you want to read it.
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Well, you said it was hardly funny. This isn't supposed to be funny... so what are you gonna think of this? =(
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Well, you did create a pretty big ruckus about this, what with this topic and the one in the Gas Chamber. Good luck trying to live up to the expectations, now =/.

As for Island, don't mind him. He'll probably cry his way out of your story after one or two chapters.

As a side note, do remember to spell "villain" correctly. Magnified time and time again in Nikushimi's quote, it sort of became painful to look at >_>.

That said, why am I not in this? Oh well, I'll take my revenge in Chronicles, when I continue writing it.
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No, I wouldn't because Joot is actually a good writer. D=
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