Akatsuki_Encore

Ey, I didn't say it was fine with rape... I just said that cannibalism throws me off, and rape doesn't neccesarily throw me off as it's in fiction form, but reading a sentence like: "The man stood bent over the long-haired lady's body, and took a chunk of her."

>_>



That would be sick. Disgusting...

Nikushimi

CN's as good at writing as- if not better than -me. R&R is excellent. It's just that some people might be deterred by the title.

I think Hal had/has the same problem. Members see his "Constipational Anecdote Sublimities" kinda titles and say "WTF?". Probably the only reason EU even HAS readers is because it's been around the longest and members have seen it day after day when they come here, and some finally said "Y'know, I think I'll check this out".

R&R is EXCELLENT writing, people. There is HARDLY ANY repetition in terms of description, and it hooks you easily once you read 2-3 paragraphs of it.

But CN, again, your ginormous (gigantic+enormous) block-paragraphs probably intimidate some of your potential readers. So cut 'em down, and try not to stuff so much into one chapter.



Well, now that I've said that, it's about time for me to post Ch. 7 of Elite Union. Read and comment when I do, please.

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Gosan

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Akatsuki_Encore

A fanfiction based onto the events of Golden Sun would be totally intresting. DBZ(2) was a good fiction, put it on MFG4 and you'll sure get many readers, both matured readers that STILL LIKE DBZ and some n00bish comments like: "lol nice chapter"

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And (JC).... LAND OF THE GODS!!! SEND ME ZE EDITED #2!!!

Gosan

I know Encore but my ‘expectations’ of myself since then has changed a lot since DBZ(2)’s early stages, as well as my writing overall as well as style had changed drastically over the year I’ve been on MFG.

It’s hard to believe that people thought from the first chapter of DBZ(2) that it could be in the ranks with Piv’s DBGT remake … that chap was ‘horrible’ now I look back at it, man was I such a noob …

I’ll going make the fan-fiction a sequel to Golden Sun 2, just need some conflict to resolve … I can’t think of anything now .. maybe making the ‘Chosen One’ the evil mastermind or something I dunno …

But my first priority is to get ‘Face to Face’ done so I can at least get a completed RPG fiction done, as my stepping stone back to fan-fiction writing, I hope even Josef gets back on to give me criticism, lol

As for ‘Land of the Gods’ when will I come out? Will it EVER come out? I can’t remember how long he had been waiting for it to be posted and what circumstance would we see a chap posted? Too lazy to check on MFG3 >_>

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Xyex

I know the feeling. Though, thankfully, not with anything I've posted here (though I do dislike several parts of Cell 2.0). Elsewhere I have a semi-large fic (around 70k words) that was praised fairly well but... god, now that I look at it... ick. I only let it continue to exist so I can look back and see how far I've come...

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Akatsuki_Encore

Land of the Gods have never been published. And you guys have been waiting for it REALLY long now. Ultimatesaiyajin (JC) wrote the first chapter of the briliant RPG fiction, and I wrote the 2nd chapter - currently waiting for (JC) to review it, yeah? .. it's got Brutus.

And Kerroi, Kaejer, Rock Lee.. >_>

Joot

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Blacklisted

Yup, ou've improved so much that it required you to edit a single post FIVE times and you only have a single sentence. >.</ Heh, nice to see ya I guess. Still haven't gotten that oneshot yet...



[Lmao.. I can see why u edited ..]

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(Just in case, my sex is MALE)

Joot

You can see the editing?

Bullshit!

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Akatsuki_Encore

Now Blacklisted can see everything.



Back on topic, I'm seriously gonna kill you if you don't post Valor Academy over again and continue the Elite fic.

Go get it at Version 3.0 at the following link; http://old.myfavoritegames.com in the fanfic area. DO THAT.

>_>

CIEL-NOIR

Ah, I knew the paragraph thing was an issue. Ok, I'll see if I can edit that up abit. Thank you though, JC and....uh......guy whose name I cant remember at the moment. I guess comments aren't EVERYTHING, but I didn't want the whole front to be covered in the story.....it make it look slightly unattractive. *Yeah JC...sorry but EU's huge fortress of chapters urked me a little.* As for the newest chapter, don't worry. It wont be as long as the last one. In fact, chapter one and chapter two were supposed to be all Chapter 1, but then I was like.....this is gonna be way too long....So yeah.

About LOTG.....I dunno why you guys hyped it so much...it really does seem like a lost cause. To be honest, I stopped caring about it a month or two ago....>_>

Joot

Two problems with that: first out, link doesn't work; and secondly, if I do re-write VA, it won't be the VA you all loved, it will be different, but probably still will use created characters.

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Josef

*sigh*

Same old MFG.



Good to be back for the summer, ah feels like home *is yelled at already*.. good ol' mfg.

Akatsuki_Encore

OMFG Valor Academy has returned guys. If you haven't signed up... STFU and do it already. =/



Too bad I hafta leave and cannot see the VA fic itself. *cries in corner with Josef*