Writers of MFG / General Discussion - Page 6

.Wayne31 · 08-09-2005

I have one, if you wanna look at it http://anime.myfavoritegames.com/forum/ind...ndpost&p=416487

.Blacklisted · 08-09-2005

Hmm...i say..by far..i like both the writing styles of MC and JC...

MC's imagination and writing style is somewhat catchy, and real easy to read, with bolded names and such...and his imagination is limitless. And his characters moods and expressions are brilliantly caught through what they say and do in the story.

JC's plot is flawless, and as close as anything gets to perfect. It's got a brilliant storyline, and hass been done over time and time again, to its current, perfect piece. The way he uses to express quotes and a person speaking has been done before, but none have been as successful as his style and cmfort with the technique.

Both are skilled writer, that have hooked me to reading their pieces, and i cant wait to read more. If you havent yet read their stories (JC- Elite Union) and (MC- Journey Intre), then please do so when u get the chance, and you'll get what i mean.

They hook you to wanting more...more....MORE....trust me, its worth the time to go over to FAN FICTIONS, and checking thses two out.

Nikushimi · 08-09-2005

o.o'

Thanks...a lot. Never expected anyone to think it was perfect, nor close to it (until the Cojin vs. Eagle fight after the next time skip, heh heh). The compliment is very much appreciated, though you're an excellent writer yourself. Always nice to get acknowledgement from a fellow writer. [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/thumbup.gif[/img]

Anyway, has anyone read Valor Academy by Jay Joot? It's real good. He's got plenty of characters collected from the minds of about a dozen or more members of MFG, most, if not all of which are writers themselves. So it's almost like a collaboration fic between him and a dozen members. I just wish he'd get on with chapter 2. Curse you, and all of the suspense your fic creates! >.<;

Xyex · 08-09-2005

QUOTE
Hmm...

Well, I was going to use only original characters. Do you have an original fic?

Well, I have some original characters in my Fanfics. And I do have a couple finished entirely original shot stories...

Akatsuki_Encore · 08-09-2005

I have problems coming up with original characters. They always get so boring.

.Blacklisted · 08-09-2005

No problem JC, and thanks, but I'm nowhere up to your level...not yet...but watch out someday..hehe.
And, I'm using my own, original characters. It's not all that bad. Givem a life, personality, and their own characteristics. Each character can hold a key elemant of your story, such as it could be one character's role to bring commedy, and laughs. Another, to be the hero, or heroin and save the day. Another could bring romance. You have to adjust your character to the type of story you are writing, so that way, they cant be boring...

And if it's hard coming up with a character, use this method.

Think of your favourite anime shows, and your favourite chacters. Think about what u like about them, and their personalities...Then, combine some of the characteristics, give ur person a name, and picture an appearance. That's one of the easier ways of doing it. But original characters help you improve your writing spark, so atleast try to not make them boring, and bring them to as close to as life as u can [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/happy.gif[/img] .

As they say, let your stories come to life.

Nikushimi · 08-09-2005

Yup.

Also, try to make their personalities as different and distinct as possible. And don't forget to give them a nice, dramatic background. Always helps to get the story flowin'.

Recon · 08-09-2005

QUOTE(strife99 @ Aug 9 2005, 01:21 AM)
Hmm...i say..by far..i like both the writing styles of MC and JC...

MC's imagination and writing style is somewhat catchy, and real easy to read, with bolded names and such...and his imagination is limitless. And his characters moods and expressions are brilliantly caught through what they say and do in the story.

JC's plot is flawless, and as close as anything gets to perfect. It's got a brilliant storyline, and hass been done over time and time again, to its current, perfect piece. The way he uses to express quotes and a person speaking has been done before, but none have been as successful as his style and cmfort with the technique.

Both are skilled writer, that have hooked me to reading their pieces, and i cant wait to read more. If you havent yet read their stories (JC- Elite Union) and (MC- Journey Intre), then please do so when u get the chance, and you'll get what i mean.

They hook you to wanting more...more....MORE....trust me, its worth the time to go over to FAN FICTIONS, and checking thses two out.

[snapback]416687[/snapback]

Thanks, but yours is abut as good as mine or better in my opinion.

ps- And yes I recommend Valor Academy.

.Blacklisted · 08-10-2005

[img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/happy.gif[/img] Thanks, again, MC.

Nikushimi · 08-10-2005

Yeah. I dunno why you're so impressed with us. Sanctuary is excellent. Very few mistakes grammar/spelling-wise, and it's pretty deep.

Recon · 08-10-2005

QUOTE(Ultimatesaiyajin (JC) @ Aug 9 2005, 03:20 PM)
Yeah. I dunno why you're so impressed with us. Sanctuary is excellent. Very few mistakes grammar/spelling-wise, and it's pretty deep.

[snapback]417321[/snapback]

That's exactlly what say too.

Nikushimi · 08-10-2005

WHOMFG PHAIL'D

Meh...

New chapter of EU is up. Gallack owns all, yadda yadda yadda, etc., and so on........

Anyway, when will Jay Joot be updating VA? It's taking too long... >_<;

Vivi · 08-10-2005

Eh hem, new fic...short one...read...

.Blacklisted · 08-10-2005

Thanks you guys, but i dont appove of praising my own work. Dont wanna get too over confident over anything. [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/happy.gif[/img]

Lol OMJ, are u talkin bout the 'Dull, Gey Blob'?

[img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/laugh.gif[/img] Yeah, damn, i forgot to recommend that. Read 'Dull Grey Blob' damn it soo frikin exciting, u gotta read it, im tellin ya. Great Work OMJ.

And yes, I too have read Valor Academy, and its great. A must read for all fanfic goers!

Nikushimi · 08-10-2005

QUOTE(strife99 @ Aug 9 2005, 07:20 AM)
Thanks you guys, but i dont appove of praising my own work. Dont wanna get too over confident over anything. [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/happy.gif[/img]

Lol OMJ, are u talkin bout the 'Dull, Gey Blob'?

[img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/laugh.gif[/img] Yeah, damn, i forgot to recommend that. Read 'Dull Grey Blob' damn it soo frikin exciting, u gotta read it, im tellin ya. Great Work OMJ.

And yes, I too have read Valor Academy, and its great. A must read for all fanfic goers!

[snapback]417389[/snapback]

Naw, gettin' overconfident and boasting about yer work is a blast! Try it, it's fun! Heh heh heh......

And yeah, "Dull Grey Blob" is good. I dunno why. It just is. Like that "Napolean Dynamite" movie. [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/mellow.gif[/img]

08-09-2005	#76 (permalink)
.Wayne31 (9) Namekian Warrior Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 123 Rep Power: 4	Writers of MFG ... I have one, if you wanna look at it http://anime.myfavoritegames.com/forum/ind...ndpost&p=416487

08-09-2005	#77 (permalink)
.Blacklisted (18) Artificial Human Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 904 Rep Power: 4	Writers of MFG ... Hmm...i say..by far..i like both the writing styles of MC and JC... MC's imagination and writing style is somewhat catchy, and real easy to read, with bolded names and such...and his imagination is limitless. And his characters moods and expressions are brilliantly caught through what they say and do in the story. JC's plot is flawless, and as close as anything gets to perfect. It's got a brilliant storyline, and hass been done over time and time again, to its current, perfect piece. The way he uses to express quotes and a person speaking has been done before, but none have been as successful as his style and cmfort with the technique. Both are skilled writer, that have hooked me to reading their pieces, and i cant wait to read more. If you havent yet read their stories (JC- Elite Union) and (MC- Journey Intre), then please do so when u get the chance, and you'll get what i mean. They hook you to wanting more...more....MORE....trust me, its worth the time to go over to FAN FICTIONS, and checking thses two out.

08-09-2005	#78 (permalink)
Nikushimi Naruto Ranked (30) Akatsuki Leader Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Singing Enka with Killer Bee and shaking my Goddamn Wustenrot. Posts: 13,644 Rep Power: 179	Writers of MFG ... o.o' Thanks...a lot. Never expected anyone to think it was perfect, nor close to it (until the Cojin vs. Eagle fight after the next time skip, heh heh). The compliment is very much appreciated, though you're an excellent writer yourself. Always nice to get acknowledgement from a fellow writer. [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/thumbup.gif[/img] Anyway, has anyone read Valor Academy by Jay Joot? It's real good. He's got plenty of characters collected from the minds of about a dozen or more members of MFG, most, if not all of which are writers themselves. So it's almost like a collaboration fic between him and a dozen members. I just wish he'd get on with chapter 2. Curse you, and all of the suspense your fic creates! >.<; __________________ Bow to the King.

08-09-2005	#79 (permalink)
Xyex (17) Super Saiyan Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 693 Rep Power: 5	Writers of MFG ... QUOTE Hmm... Well, I was going to use only original characters. Do you have an original fic? Well, I have some original characters in my Fanfics. And I do have a couple finished entirely original shot stories... __________________ AH Saga 6: Read Altered History: Saga I Saga II Saga III Saga IV Saga V

08-09-2005	#80 (permalink)
Akatsuki_Encore (28) Lord of Worlds Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Norway Posts: 7,321 Rep Power: 11	Writers of MFG ... I have problems coming up with original characters. They always get so boring.

08-09-2005	#81 (permalink)
.Blacklisted (18) Artificial Human Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 904 Rep Power: 4	Writers of MFG ... No problem JC, and thanks, but I'm nowhere up to your level...not yet...but watch out someday..hehe. And, I'm using my own, original characters. It's not all that bad. Givem a life, personality, and their own characteristics. Each character can hold a key elemant of your story, such as it could be one character's role to bring commedy, and laughs. Another, to be the hero, or heroin and save the day. Another could bring romance. You have to adjust your character to the type of story you are writing, so that way, they cant be boring... And if it's hard coming up with a character, use this method. Think of your favourite anime shows, and your favourite chacters. Think about what u like about them, and their personalities...Then, combine some of the characteristics, give ur person a name, and picture an appearance. That's one of the easier ways of doing it. But original characters help you improve your writing spark, so atleast try to not make them boring, and bring them to as close to as life as u can [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/happy.gif[/img] . As they say, let your stories come to life.

08-09-2005	#82 (permalink)
Nikushimi Naruto Ranked (30) Akatsuki Leader Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Singing Enka with Killer Bee and shaking my Goddamn Wustenrot. Posts: 13,644 Rep Power: 179	Writers of MFG ... Yup. Also, try to make their personalities as different and distinct as possible. And don't forget to give them a nice, dramatic background. Always helps to get the story flowin'. __________________ Bow to the King.

08-09-2005	#83 (permalink)
Recon Naruto Ranked (19) Sanbi Join Date: May 2004 Posts: 1,068 Blog Entries: 1 Rep Power: 11	Writers of MFG ... QUOTE(strife99 @ Aug 9 2005, 01:21 AM) Hmm...i say..by far..i like both the writing styles of MC and JC... MC's imagination and writing style is somewhat catchy, and real easy to read, with bolded names and such...and his imagination is limitless. And his characters moods and expressions are brilliantly caught through what they say and do in the story. JC's plot is flawless, and as close as anything gets to perfect. It's got a brilliant storyline, and hass been done over time and time again, to its current, perfect piece. The way he uses to express quotes and a person speaking has been done before, but none have been as successful as his style and cmfort with the technique. Both are skilled writer, that have hooked me to reading their pieces, and i cant wait to read more. If you havent yet read their stories (JC- Elite Union) and (MC- Journey Intre), then please do so when u get the chance, and you'll get what i mean. They hook you to wanting more...more....MORE....trust me, its worth the time to go over to FAN FICTIONS, and checking thses two out. [snapback]416687[/snapback] Thanks, but yours is abut as good as mine or better in my opinion. ps- And yes I recommend Valor Academy. __________________

08-10-2005	#84 (permalink)
.Blacklisted (18) Artificial Human Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 904 Rep Power: 4	Writers of MFG ... [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/happy.gif[/img] Thanks, again, MC.

08-10-2005	#85 (permalink)
Nikushimi Naruto Ranked (30) Akatsuki Leader Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Singing Enka with Killer Bee and shaking my Goddamn Wustenrot. Posts: 13,644 Rep Power: 179	Writers of MFG ... Yeah. I dunno why you're so impressed with us. Sanctuary is excellent. Very few mistakes grammar/spelling-wise, and it's pretty deep. __________________ Bow to the King.

08-10-2005	#86 (permalink)
Recon Naruto Ranked (19) Sanbi Join Date: May 2004 Posts: 1,068 Blog Entries: 1 Rep Power: 11	Writers of MFG ... QUOTE(Ultimatesaiyajin (JC) @ Aug 9 2005, 03:20 PM) Yeah. I dunno why you're so impressed with us. Sanctuary is excellent. Very few mistakes grammar/spelling-wise, and it's pretty deep. [snapback]417321[/snapback] That's exactlly what say too. __________________

08-10-2005	#87 (permalink)
Nikushimi Naruto Ranked (30) Akatsuki Leader Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Singing Enka with Killer Bee and shaking my Goddamn Wustenrot. Posts: 13,644 Rep Power: 179	Writers of MFG ... WHOMFG PHAIL'D Meh... New chapter of EU is up. Gallack owns all, yadda yadda yadda, etc., and so on........ Anyway, when will Jay Joot be updating VA? It's taking too long... >_<; __________________ Bow to the King.

08-10-2005	#88 (permalink)
Vivi (25) Kami of Earth Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: In my room contemplating life and existence. Posts: 4,358 Rep Power: 40	Writers of MFG ... Eh hem, new fic...short one...read... __________________

08-10-2005	#89 (permalink)
.Blacklisted (18) Artificial Human Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 904 Rep Power: 4	Writers of MFG ... Thanks you guys, but i dont appove of praising my own work. Dont wanna get too over confident over anything. [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/happy.gif[/img] Lol OMJ, are u talkin bout the 'Dull, Gey Blob'? [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/laugh.gif[/img] Yeah, damn, i forgot to recommend that. Read 'Dull Grey Blob' damn it soo frikin exciting, u gotta read it, im tellin ya. Great Work OMJ. And yes, I too have read Valor Academy, and its great. A must read for all fanfic goers!

08-10-2005	#90 (permalink)
Nikushimi Naruto Ranked (30) Akatsuki Leader Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Singing Enka with Killer Bee and shaking my Goddamn Wustenrot. Posts: 13,644 Rep Power: 179	Writers of MFG ... QUOTE(strife99 @ Aug 9 2005, 07:20 AM) Thanks you guys, but i dont appove of praising my own work. Dont wanna get too over confident over anything. [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/happy.gif[/img] Lol OMJ, are u talkin bout the 'Dull, Gey Blob'? [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/laugh.gif[/img] Yeah, damn, i forgot to recommend that. Read 'Dull Grey Blob' damn it soo frikin exciting, u gotta read it, im tellin ya. Great Work OMJ. And yes, I too have read Valor Academy, and its great. A must read for all fanfic goers! [snapback]417389[/snapback] Naw, gettin' overconfident and boasting about yer work is a blast! Try it, it's fun! Heh heh heh...... And yeah, "Dull Grey Blob" is good. I dunno why. It just is. Like that "Napolean Dynamite" movie. [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/mellow.gif[/img] __________________ Bow to the King.