Halcyon

Quite a few mistakes in that post for being a perfectionist.

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Gosan

Ah crap! Got hammered hard by Halcyon on Christmas Day … nothing to be proud of …

*thinks of a way to counter, he assumes*

All right, I better choose my wording carefully when you’re reading

I meant perfectionist as in ‘presentation wise’ … yeah ... that’s right …

Animation, banner, colour, music, explosive sounds etc …

I admit my writing abilities of English are pretty average compared to everything else

My grammar & spelling plain sucks at times too … *slowly walks away backwards*

PLEASE DON’T PWN ME NO MORE, I BEG YOU !!!!!! j/k.

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Akatsuki_Encore

Uhh.. can't be assed to write this night. Too hooked up with Pop: T2T.

And besides, tomorrow.. it'll be more playing and fun with friends, yeh.

Machiavelli

The next chapter to -The Phoenix Tears- will be up today. I'm trying something new with this fic. It will be told in 1st person, alternating between the main characters each chapter. If you guys don't mind, give me some feedback as to how I execute it, and how it's working out.

EDIT: I've decided against the 1st person view. I won't be able to put as much detail and description into it that way, so it's all going to be 3rd.

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Xyex

AH Saga 5 updated yet again.

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Read Altered History: Saga I Saga II Saga III Saga IV Saga V

Machiavelli

Hmmm...I do believe there will be another chapter up either later today, or early tomorrow. I'm leaning towards later today, depending on when I go to the gym and all. The pace of the story will probably be picked up soon, as I need to introduce some key characters and events. First big battle is coming soon, so stay tuned for that.

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Nikushimi

I'm working on EU's latest chapter, but due to the fact that I got both Supersonic Warriors 2 AND DBZ Budokai Tenkaichi, it's a safe bet that it may take a while.

*sits there with his DS, smashing teh craps out of people with Broleh (Broly)*

<(@.@)>

But I'll be working on the EU chapter as much as I can... Meaning whenever my hands start to go raw from hours and hours of SW2. But don't read it 'til it's finished! Patience is the key... [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/sleep.gif[/img]


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*goes back to playing SW2*

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Machiavelli

Another chapter is up. Next chapter is the first big battle, should be interesting. One of my favorite characters is also introduced.

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Punk

Well, it looks like I finally got my suspension lifted...since when I checked on the board earlier I was unbanned/suspended. So that is cool.

Expect a new fiction from me in the coming days...or whatever.

It is nice to be back, I guess. I shall' be checking on some fic's that I need to read up on. So, also expect some reviews from me in the coming days as well.

Oh, and JC I'm happy your still working with EU...that is probably the longest running fic on MFG.

-J.T

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Nikushimi

Halcyon's comment wasn't exactly the new "*Mr. T walks up and kicks him in the nads*", strife... >_>


And W00Tness! Yeah, Superior PMed me about that about a week ago. He said your Shadow Gohan account was unbanned as well, and that you could choose one and stick with it. Guess you chose "Demon Saint".

Anyway, you owe us a truckload of DKA! And also, READ ELITE UNION!!!


*runs away, scared of the lunatic Predator mumbling something about medicine* [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/blink.gif[/img]

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Hey Demon Saint, nice to see ya back.

Anywhu, I've written another poem, please check this one out and tell me what you think. It's a weak piece of writing, but a sad story indeed.

Click on link below,
http://anime.myfavoritegames.com/forum/ind...30&#entry539610


Or find it on my blog

Punk

QUOTE(Blacklisted @ Dec 28 2005, 09:09 PM)
Hey Demon Saint, nice to see ya back.

Anywhu, I've written another poem, please check this one out and tell me what you think. It's a weak piece of writing, but a sad story indeed.

Click on link below,
http://anime.myfavoritegames.com/forum/ind...30&#entry539610


Or find it on my blog



I have been reading your fic, it is very, very good. Way better than any of the stuff I have thrown out. Your mechanics (spelling/grammar) are very good. Your description is good too. Also, you have a compelling story which makes me want to read.

Great, great job. Your probably one of the best writers I have seen on MFG. And that is saying alot since I was here a long time ago when Hell's Birth was the #1 fic around here.

Anyways, I will check out your poem.

My fic is coming along nicely. Probably not my best, but I guess it will do at the moment. [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif[/img]

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.Blacklisted

QUOTE(Demon Saint @ Dec 28 2005, 07:54 PM)
QUOTE(Blacklisted @ Dec 28 2005, 09:09 PM)
Hey Demon Saint, nice to see ya back.

Anywhu, I've written another poem, please check this one out and tell me what you think. It's a weak piece of writing, but a sad story indeed.

Click on link below,
http://anime.myfavoritegames.com/forum/ind...30&#entry539610


Or find it on my blog



I have been reading your fic, it is very, very good. Way better than any of the stuff I have thrown out. Your mechanics (spelling/grammar) are very good. Your description is good too. Also, you have a compelling story which makes me want to read.

Great, great job. Your probably one of the best writers I have seen on MFG. And that is saying alot since I was here a long time ago when Hell's Birth was the #1 fic around here.

Anyways, I will check out your poem.

My fic is coming along nicely. Probably not my best, but I guess it will do at the moment. [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif[/img]




Wow, I'm flattered to hear that, But I am not the best. There are still writers farbetter than I am, and your work too is of very high calibur itself. I try not to let such remarks get to my head, because I hate getting over confident. My work is nothing compared to some I've seen here, and I still have a long way to go. And even when I do become the best, there's always gonna be room to improve.

I write stories on one side, while I try to develop my skills in poetry and rhyming... My stories and ideas are still developing, and my rhymes need a hell lot of work. But thanks for the comment. Appreciate it [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/happy.gif[/img]

.Pivitor

QUOTE(Ultimatesaiyajin (JC) @ Dec 28 2005, 02:08 AM)
Anyway, a sports fic? Interesting. I may check it out, but I don't usually like sports unless I'm the one playing. I've always found sports manga to be boring as f**k, and I can't stand reading past the first few pages. But if you say it'll deviate, or even be incredibly unique, then I'll be sure to give it a read. Just...hurry back to DKA. And read Elite Union. =/



Check out "Hajime No Ippo" (you may find it as "Fighting Spirit" in the U.S.). It's one of the best mangas I've read, sports or not. It's boxing, so it's as much a fighting manga as it is a sports. You'll like it [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/wink.gif[/img]