Writers of MFG / General Discussion - Page 12

The Game · 08-29-2005

I've been thinking about making another story too, that'd probably be updated every Saturday or Sunday. I was thinking of another fiction with a serial killer, but I've worn those down. XD

My other idea was a mix of humor and seriousness. It'd be based on Batman and Aqua Teen Hunger Force. The four main characters would be Batman, Robin, Joker (Frylock, Meatwad, and Master Shake; in that order), and Twoface (Carl). I'd probably throw in a few other characters like Penguin, Catwoman, et cetera sometimes too.

Good idea? Would you read it? Et cetera...

EDIT: I chose humor because it seems to be my strong point. =P

.Twitch in Stereo · 08-29-2005

Your fan fiction humor was only occaisional, although some members of certain caliber thought it to be funny constantly. I can't say I'd read, but then again, I rarely read any fan fictions.

If anything, just go with something original. Adult Swim s**t is being beaten into the ground like a crack baby turned common criminal during a drug bust.

Akatsuki_Encore · 08-29-2005

In my opinion that sounds funnier than a clown on crack, BJ. So go ahead, lol.

SpanktheMonkey · 08-29-2005

I find clowns scary to tell the truth lol

I have been thinking of getting back into my stories but I cant find the time.. sorry to those who read them but with out the time to do it I cant find the inspiration needed.

I wrote a new chapter for Blazing Sword about 3 weeks ago but cos it was rushed the caliber was nothing like the rest of the story... actually I may see if i can reteive it and work on it to night

Akatsuki_Encore · 08-29-2005

Spank, I can remember your writing beeing good. Try writing this One-Shot, lol.

**Nikushimi** · 08-31-2005

I've already written the prolouge and chapter 1 of my next story. Though I won't post it until I've gotten to chapter 20. It's coming along quite nicely; possibly enough to give Elite Union a run for its money. [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif[/img]

**Crayne** · 08-31-2005

Great. Another fic coming to compete for the elite name.

Yep, chapter 23 of Fatal Decision out, the Elite voting about to end.. and seems to me that Valor Academy is already a sure winner.

Joot · 08-31-2005

Yes indeed it is. [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/thumbup.gif[/img] The victory is kinda bittersweet though, because of all this , "I think Piv should win," and this, "There are better fics up there than VA." Don’t get me wrong, I know that I wasn’t the better fic up there, but winning when there are people who thought you shouldn’t have won feels weird, I feel that if I win, everybody should be swayed my way, I don’t mean I get every vote, but I mean that there isn’t one person that doubts me nor my fic.

**Engel** · 08-31-2005

i havnt voted in ages... havnt read many fics so i dont usually vote because of that. Probably will in the next one though... >_>

basically i dont mind your story, some parts could be better. It seems to be pretty hot (big bonus is that your usuing other peoples characters which draws in more readers) at the moment.

Personally i think its a lil too early to say its elite... but thats just my opinion and has nothing to do with your writing ability. Either way just make sure you finish the story lol.

Though i havnt finished many of mine... >_> still gotta get the next chap of Tier up. I know what i want to do with it and have all my ideas and sweet fights...but they're all set for later on XD

**Nikushimi** · 09-01-2005

Joot, even though you're one of my favorite writers, and even though VA is pretty good, it's still in the beginning stages and hasn't moved on to anything major yet. And also, when you become elite after this election (and I'm pretty sure you will), don't think you can just slack off on VA. In fact, I'll rant 'til I'm blue in the face if you don't DOUBLE the frequentness (is that a word?) of each chapter. Though it seems like there aren't many good writers making more chapters recently. Demon Saint is one of the few who has a fic better than mine and updates just as much as me (the combination of the two; plenty of people meet the criteria for the former).

Anyway, speaking of Demon Saint, I PMed him a sample of my new story. He said it was pretty good. I've shown it to a few others, and one of them said it actually beats Elite Union. [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/mellow.gif[/img] I really hope it isn't better than EU, though. EU is supposed to be my absolute trump card. Though I'm positive EU is better once it gets into motion and they- ...Nope. Won't spoil it. Anyway, it seems my new idea was a hit after all..............................

PH34R M3!1!11!1!!1! [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/emotw00t.gif[/img]

Joot · 09-01-2005

Why does he get a sample but not me? >_> Yeah, I see what you're saying and I agree. I won't slack off, but I post faster either.

Akatsuki_Encore · 09-01-2005

Joot; congratulations with the estimated victory. And JC, could you PM me too?

.Blacklisted · 09-01-2005

OMG JC!! I'm one of your more frequent daily readers, yet you don't PM me a sample?Tsk Tsk Tsk. LOL. I can't wait to see an installment from you that tops EU.

**Nikushimi** · 09-01-2005

QUOTE(strife99 @ Aug 31 2005, 06:20 AM)
OMG JC!! I'm one of your more frequent daily readers, yet you don't PM me a sample?Tsk Tsk Tsk. LOL. I can't wait to see an installment from you that tops EU.

[snapback]446389[/snapback]

*shakes head* Unh-uh. No Way. Not once Gallack gets his telekinesis back. Nothing will top EU then. And when a certain character comes back (he/she has been mentioned in EU already, and had a few lines), he/she is probably gonna be the new favorite character over Gallack. Not in terms of coolness, but for comedic purposes. Something tells me that eveyone who hears what he has to say will want to hear more. >_>;

Also, Strife, I'll send it to ya right away.

Akatsuki_Encore · 09-01-2005

I recieved the story from Joot, JC. And I'm gonna read it soon. Seems promising.

08-29-2005	#166 (permalink)
The Game (23) Final Warrior Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 2,799 Rep Power: 7	Writers of MFG ... I've been thinking about making another story too, that'd probably be updated every Saturday or Sunday. I was thinking of another fiction with a serial killer, but I've worn those down. XD My other idea was a mix of humor and seriousness. It'd be based on Batman and Aqua Teen Hunger Force. The four main characters would be Batman, Robin, Joker (Frylock, Meatwad, and Master Shake; in that order), and Twoface (Carl). I'd probably throw in a few other characters like Penguin, Catwoman, et cetera sometimes too. Good idea? Would you read it? Et cetera... EDIT: I chose humor because it seems to be my strong point. =P __________________ ORIGINAL SIG IS ORIGINAL.

08-29-2005	#167 (permalink)
.Twitch in Stereo (17) Super Saiyan Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 747 Rep Power: 4	Writers of MFG ... Your fan fiction humor was only occaisional, although some members of certain caliber thought it to be funny constantly. I can't say I'd read, but then again, I rarely read any fan fictions. If anything, just go with something original. Adult Swim s**t is being beaten into the ground like a crack baby turned common criminal during a drug bust.

08-29-2005	#168 (permalink)
Akatsuki_Encore (28) Lord of Worlds Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Norway Posts: 7,321 Rep Power: 11	Writers of MFG ... In my opinion that sounds funnier than a clown on crack, BJ. So go ahead, lol.

08-29-2005	#169 (permalink)
SpanktheMonkey (26) Great Elder of Namek Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: 'Straya Posts: 4,505 Rep Power: 16	Writers of MFG ... I find clowns scary to tell the truth lol I have been thinking of getting back into my stories but I cant find the time.. sorry to those who read them but with out the time to do it I cant find the inspiration needed. I wrote a new chapter for Blazing Sword about 3 weeks ago but cos it was rushed the caliber was nothing like the rest of the story... actually I may see if i can reteive it and work on it to night __________________ "We dont stop playing because we grow old. We grow old because we stop playing." Wii - 0842 2192 4313 4590 Brawl - 0860-4671-9126 360 Gamertag: SlyAudio

08-29-2005	#170 (permalink)
Akatsuki_Encore (28) Lord of Worlds Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Norway Posts: 7,321 Rep Power: 11	Writers of MFG ... Spank, I can remember your writing beeing good. Try writing this One-Shot, lol.

08-31-2005	#171 (permalink)
Nikushimi RPG Team Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Bidding farewell to the Killer Bee Posts: 13,280 Rep Power: 129	Writers of MFG ... I've already written the prolouge and chapter 1 of my next story. Though I won't post it until I've gotten to chapter 20. It's coming along quite nicely; possibly enough to give Elite Union a run for its money. [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif[/img] __________________ Bow to the King.

08-31-2005	#172 (permalink)
Crayne (28) Lord of Worlds Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Winland Posts: 7,151 Blog Entries: 9 Rep Power: 39	Writers of MFG ... Great. Another fic coming to compete for the elite name. Yep, chapter 23 of Fatal Decision out, the Elite voting about to end.. and seems to me that Valor Academy is already a sure winner. __________________ NO WAI

08-31-2005	#173 (permalink)
Joot (20) Super Saiyan 2 Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: City of Angels Posts: 1,221 Blog Entries: 1 Rep Power: 23	Writers of MFG ... Yes indeed it is. [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/thumbup.gif[/img] The victory is kinda bittersweet though, because of all this , "I think Piv should win," and this, "There are better fics up there than VA." Don’t get me wrong, I know that I wasn’t the better fic up there, but winning when there are people who thought you shouldn’t have won feels weird, I feel that if I win, everybody should be swayed my way, I don’t mean I get every vote, but I mean that there isn’t one person that doubts me nor my fic. __________________ Look at my avatar. That's Plugz, my Elekid. Isn't he cute? You said no? Good. Because he isn't. He'll whoop your ass. Thanks goes to Teecee.

08-31-2005	#174 (permalink)
Engel Super Moderator Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Oz Posts: 6,485 Rep Power: 22	Writers of MFG ... i havnt voted in ages... havnt read many fics so i dont usually vote because of that. Probably will in the next one though... >_> basically i dont mind your story, some parts could be better. It seems to be pretty hot (big bonus is that your usuing other peoples characters which draws in more readers) at the moment. Personally i think its a lil too early to say its elite... but thats just my opinion and has nothing to do with your writing ability. Either way just make sure you finish the story lol. Though i havnt finished many of mine... >_> still gotta get the next chap of Tier up. I know what i want to do with it and have all my ideas and sweet fights...but they're all set for later on XD __________________ My DeviantArt ಠ_ಠ

09-01-2005	#175 (permalink)
Nikushimi RPG Team Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Bidding farewell to the Killer Bee Posts: 13,280 Rep Power: 129	Writers of MFG ... Joot, even though you're one of my favorite writers, and even though VA is pretty good, it's still in the beginning stages and hasn't moved on to anything major yet. And also, when you become elite after this election (and I'm pretty sure you will), don't think you can just slack off on VA. In fact, I'll rant 'til I'm blue in the face if you don't DOUBLE the frequentness (is that a word?) of each chapter. Though it seems like there aren't many good writers making more chapters recently. Demon Saint is one of the few who has a fic better than mine and updates just as much as me (the combination of the two; plenty of people meet the criteria for the former). Anyway, speaking of Demon Saint, I PMed him a sample of my new story. He said it was pretty good. I've shown it to a few others, and one of them said it actually beats Elite Union. [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/mellow.gif[/img] I really hope it isn't better than EU, though. EU is supposed to be my absolute trump card. Though I'm positive EU is better once it gets into motion and they- ...Nope. Won't spoil it. Anyway, it seems my new idea was a hit after all.............................. PH34R M3!1!11!1!!1! [img]style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/emotw00t.gif[/img] __________________ Bow to the King.

09-01-2005	#176 (permalink)
Joot (20) Super Saiyan 2 Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: City of Angels Posts: 1,221 Blog Entries: 1 Rep Power: 23	Writers of MFG ... Why does he get a sample but not me? >_> Yeah, I see what you're saying and I agree. I won't slack off, but I post faster either. __________________ Look at my avatar. That's Plugz, my Elekid. Isn't he cute? You said no? Good. Because he isn't. He'll whoop your ass. Thanks goes to Teecee.

09-01-2005	#177 (permalink)
Akatsuki_Encore (28) Lord of Worlds Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Norway Posts: 7,321 Rep Power: 11	Writers of MFG ... Joot; congratulations with the estimated victory. And JC, could you PM me too?

09-01-2005	#178 (permalink)
.Blacklisted (18) Artificial Human Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 904 Rep Power: 4	Writers of MFG ... OMG JC!! I'm one of your more frequent daily readers, yet you don't PM me a sample?Tsk Tsk Tsk. LOL. I can't wait to see an installment from you that tops EU.

09-01-2005	#179 (permalink)
Nikushimi RPG Team Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Bidding farewell to the Killer Bee Posts: 13,280 Rep Power: 129	Writers of MFG ... QUOTE(strife99 @ Aug 31 2005, 06:20 AM) OMG JC!! I'm one of your more frequent daily readers, yet you don't PM me a sample?Tsk Tsk Tsk. LOL. I can't wait to see an installment from you that tops EU. [snapback]446389[/snapback] shakes head Unh-uh. No Way. Not once Gallack gets his telekinesis back. Nothing will top EU then. And when a certain character comes back (he/she has been mentioned in EU already, and had a few lines), he/she is probably gonna be the new favorite character over Gallack. Not in terms of coolness, but for comedic purposes. Something tells me that eveyone who hears what he has to say will want to hear more. >_>; Also, Strife, I'll send it to ya right away. __________________ Bow to the King.

09-01-2005	#180 (permalink)
Akatsuki_Encore (28) Lord of Worlds Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Norway Posts: 7,321 Rep Power: 11	Writers of MFG ... I recieved the story from Joot, JC. And I'm gonna read it soon. Seems promising.