DBZ Af episode 1 The newest warriors

SSJJason · 03-21-2008

Valten looked at his friend's cold blue eyes. "Maybe we should go" said Valten . Patrick , looking at the blue sky said " We can stop at the candy store on the way back!" Race ya'" yelled Patrick turning super sayian and flying off . Valten , turning super sayian flies off after him.
Patrick flies straight first into a wall. " owww" he said
" OH-NO its June !" June was pan's daughter and had a crush on both
Patrick and Valten , she says that she'll kiss them one day.

Valten and Patrick zoom across the sky using almost all their ki to
get away from June but a ki blast hits them.

" What the heck just happened ? " said Patrick giving a common Vegeta pose
" I dont know said Valten " We were flying at the speed of light there's only one possible exclamation ... said Valten thinking
Valten was the kind hearted friend, plus he always got A+
this gave him the rep of a geek. Patrick was the cool friend who got
B's on everything , when everyone teased valten Patrick
sticks up for him. Their fathers Goten and Trunks were best friends and so were they.
"Patrick watch out!" yelled Valten
A spaceship zoomed out the sky and opened to let out
Bojack, freezia cell , Janemba, Raditz , plus Razor and Faho.
Valten and Patrick froze..." Wait a sec... said both Valten and Patrick
Freiza attacked first " DIE!!!
" HAAAAAAAA!!! yells Valten turning super sayian
Patrick goes Super sayian also " HAAAAAAAA!!
Cell steps out and clones him self, and then yells "KAAAMEHAMEHA!
Valten lets out a bio electric force field , Valten was born with the ability to control electricity and it also worked in conjunction with his ki . Patrick was born with the ability of ice , which like Valten protects him and makes him stronger.
" Kaaamehameha! yelled SS Valten and Patrick
Cell grows into a giant and so Valten and Patrick do a technique that has been not used in 2 decades : Fusion.
" Fusion " Ha!
A bright new warrior appeared ... Valtrick !
Valtrick was the strongest fusion at the time and instead of goofing around he really fights.
Thats it ! said Valtrick
Valtrick charges his electricity into his hand... Final electric kamehameha!
The blast blows killing cell with it...Valtrick and frezia now go at it, fighting and fighting. Valtrick then sees his uncle Gohan ( well Valten's uncle) Gohan goes ss4 then does a kamehameha wiping away everyone except Razor.
Valten and Patrick say" lets get him!
razor smirking yells " Death zone hole ! "
It swoops at gohan sucking him in but Valten yells " darn it he's gone and more importantly we cant move !

Valten cries which revershes the speel on him and Patrick
NOOOOOO!!! yells Valten
HAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Valten inherited his uncle's dormant power
Valtens muscles get bigger his hair get spikier and then his hair turns
blue...
After the exploson clears Valten stands there with blue strikes on his arms and blue lines under his face and white fur on his body
SS4 Valten moves at a blazing speed ... then yells " DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE!" Valten then flips back and his fist turns yellow then he yells
" Dragon fist! The attack "kills" Razor, Valten falls down to the ground.

Valten awakes and finds he's home... with his mother valesse coming in. " How do you feel honey?'' "Im fine mom." smiles Valten
Valten flies down stairs to see his father " Did you sense the battle ?" asks Valten
Goten nods " Im proud son", you really did go ss4?
" Yeah i can show you" says Valten
" This is super sayian " says Valten
HAAAA!!
"This is ss2" says Valten
HAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
" this is ss3 , and now to bring it beyond!
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
This is ss4. says Valten
Patrick lands on the grass " Valten , June's coming!
Lower your ki! says Valten
Then the horror came... June lands right there Valten and Patrick bump into each other ... June tackles Patrick then kissing him
Valten then jumps on her to get her off of Patrick
June then starts kissing Valten .." Yuck i have to wash my face for a week! The thing about June is that even though Valten and Patrick dont like her she still kisses them.
Patrick then barfs " Yuck !

As the trio keep " playing" Razor is sielently watching from a tree.

~~Dark Skywalker~~ · 03-21-2008

Not bad i like it

SSJJason · 03-21-2008

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Originally Posted by Dark Skywalker

Not bad i like it

Thanks. Episode 2 is coming soon...

~~JC#1~~ · 03-26-2008

if the title says "episode 1' in it then does that mean you're gonna make a new thread for each episode? That would be kinda lame, no offense, it just isn't smart. But it is a very good story, nice job :)

SSJJason · 03-30-2008

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Originally Posted by JC#1

if the title says "episode 1' in it then does that mean you're gonna make a new thread for each episode? That would be kinda lame, no offense, it just isn't smart. But it is a very good story, nice job :)

I haven't thought about that yet... Im waiting for more people's opinions
that will determine if Im going to countine.

~~JC#1~~ · 03-31-2008

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Originally Posted by SSJJason

I haven't thought about that yet... Im waiting for more people's opinions
that will determine if Im going to countine.

I suggest you continue your story in one single thread, or else it would be like fifty threads for one fic and that would be kinda unnesecary and annoying.

SSJJason · 04-07-2008

Dragon ball AF episode 2 Razor's attack! Protect june!
As we left off, Valten and Patrick watch in horror as Gohan
is killed. Valten's power suddenly explodes and turns into
Super sayian 2! Does Patrick have any hidden potential?

Valten's phone rang. " Hello... he sat on a log
Pan quickly replied " how's it going valten?
" Good, u?
" Im on my buisnness trip ill be back in time for christmas"
"WHAT"!! Valten wanted to yell but said "ok...see ya then!
" I need u three to get the supplies for the party"
Mistletoe
lights
pie
ham
green beans
potatoes
bananas
apples and blueberry's.
Valten let his brain memorize the list" Ok bye Mrs.Son!
Patrick stoped doing his push ups when he heard the bad news.
" How could she?! A whole week?! Thats bizzare! "
" Hey even though its virturally impossible it could be worse!
"yeah well it's still bad since we gotta spend the week with - HER said patrick pointing to June who was starring at a tree
" It's not polite to point , Pat "
" Whatever".
" Well we better call her over here...the problem of the situation is that ...Valten stopped when he sensed a intense power level near by
" Valten someone's watching us...
" Always stating the obvious , eh?"
" shut up"
A ki blast shot across the land making it snow
Whoa!
We got bigger problems to worry about !
Oh no! June! they both shouted
Razor appeared and then grabs June
" Noooooo! yells June
The stress and pain razor put her in transformed her into a super sayian!
HAAAAAA!!! screams June
Patrick and Valten stood floating in the air
Valten shields them with a field of electricty
When the three flashing lights disappear
Patrick and Valten cant sense Razor's power level
" Wait is he really gone?
I doubt it said Valten
SS June stood there in her tomboyish stance
June then teleports snuffing

razor then charges up the
Son family's signature teadmark move - KAAAAAAAAA....MEEEEEEE.... HAAAAAA... MEEEEEE....Ha ! Razor is thought to be killed but like his father baby
he can possess people's bodies.
Razor goes in though a cut in june's pants ...June black eyes go pupiless and she has black marks on her face
" MWHHAAAA"! I toke over her body! I will kill SON goku and anyone who tries to stop me!
Razor-June flies to Valten and patrick ...plotting to take over Valtens body and to kill Son Goku!

Will a possessed June be successful in taking Valtens body ? Will he-she kill Son goku? What will Patrick and Valten do to stop Razor without killing june?
Next time on DB AF!

The Electron Zone · 04-07-2008

shorter this time, how come.

SSJJason · 04-08-2008

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Originally Posted by The Electron Zone

shorter this time, how come.

ARE U KIDDING ME?! I HAVE TO TYPE IT ALL OVER AND EP 3 was the longest!
ok ill make an authors note explaining...thanks for sharing your view.

author's note: Sorry for the really short chapter im sick so i've been doing some naping around my house.
I promise next chapter will be longer. Another reason is that i thought it be good to end there because it really seemed to me that the part when razor took over june's body and his plot to take over valten's body and kill son goku. I wanted
to build up the suspense . Sorry.

SSJJason · 04-08-2008

Dragon ball Af episode 3 A truffle's revenge!

After taking over June's body ,Razor plots to take over valten and get
to son goku for his Revenge! Will he succecced? Valten dosen't hope so

" Hey wait a second says valten
" Yeah somethings wrong Valten smirks
" Yet again you always have to state the obvious eh?
" Yet again you better shut up before ill will! Valten looks at patrick
Razor stands there looking at patrick and valten
Then Valten gasps " get out of June! "
Charging Valten kicks Razor which shocks him.
Ahhhh!!! he says in June's voice
In a flash of a light a explosive wave hits Patrick
and in a blink of a eye, he exits her body and goes into patricks
" darn it!!
Then Razor-Patrick puts his hands on his forehead " Solar flare!
" I cant see!
" Man he seems to be going after grandpa....I have to go there before he does !
And just at that Valten dashes up to the sky and flies off.
When he gets there he discovers a shocking discovery!
Videl and Grandma Chi-Chi are dead !
Valten screams " NOOOOOOOO!!!!!
His Hair gets pointy his eyes sting with lighting and he more musclar . With this newfound power and hatred , Valten flies off To the plains just in time for battle thats starting.
In the Plains SS4 goku is pounding Patrick
" I got more to show you SON GOKU!!!!!!!
His muscles get bulger and he get red yellow boots , jacket , gloves and wrist pads.
Final form Razor sqweezied out of Patrick making him look like a pancake .
Valten arrivies just in time and yells "I WON'T FORGIVE YOU MONSTER ! ILL KILL YOU IF IT'S THAT'S THE LAST THING ILL DO! Charging, Goku and Valten pummel Razor
and are soon joined by patrick.
SS Patrick , SS2 Valten, SS4 Goku all charge up a kamehameha and let razor escape to his ship.
NOW!!
Letting go the Massive wave , it shoots Razor into the sun!!
Well thats taking care of" says patrick
" Well i guess so...
Because of how good you guys did im gonna take
you to the amusement park!
YEAH!!!!!
C'mon lets go!

Sneak peak for next epiosde:
A black haired boy came back from the tunnel entrance, smiling.
" well the coast is clear!
A girl, A boy, A boy, A boy, A girl snuck out the tunnuel with weapons

Author's note: Ill try to make the chapters longer but
like i said i dont feel good. I also try to include more sneak peaks. cho!@

SSJJason · 04-11-2008

DB af episode 4 Escape!: Sayains VS Savors

William quickly dashed behind the strret pole. " Rats, I've been spotted!
Having no other choice, the teen dashed out with two knives and sliced and diced the monster in half and quickly disseapared.

William had the ability of teleportation. This ability could eleport him for 30 minutes and is apart of his attack. His weapons were two red-black kineves that were hard to dodge.

Jason zoomed across the water then stopping and pulls out his katana
and slashes the monster. " Score one for the good guys.
Putting the katana away he gets ready to move out." Super speed!
Leaving a yellow trail behind , Jason quickly dashes back to the hideout. Jason wielded the katanna blade and had sper speed and clones.

Kari used her ability to turn invisible to get into enemy base.
'" I need to get inside there....but how?
Quickly noticing the window open , she went invisible and was ready to wipe out any guards in the way.
Tripping over a rock,, kari alearts a guard who alearts others.
Having trainning from jason to unlesh her powers, she uses telekenisis to wipe the gurad out and to read his mind. ' Cell 435 56 degrees to the west , forth corrider make left to right , ran kari.
Her weapons were her powers and her nunchuckes.
She had the most abilities of the group and was 3rd most powerful.

Timothy ran through the plains searching. His mission was to get the enemy's plans. His eyes shot across everywhere looking for hidden guards. Ahhhhhh! Timothy had a vision telling him were the plans were. Lazor arrow! The ki arrow shot across to the rope , cutting it and opening a secret passassge.

Meanwhile.... Valten, Patrick, Jake, Micheal, and joe walked ssensing a power level.
Ya sure you sensed it? We've benn looking for awhile.
Hey wait over there!
the five saw a teen Dodging fire aand shooting back.
Hey lets help!
The five approach,but timothy's sense of smell and vision made him always aware of things.

" Hey who are u and what are u doing? ask Jake
" You five get out of here now its dangerous...im on a misson.
" A mission for what?!
" Ok here''s a deal , if you can defeat me ill tell u what im doing and what am and whats my mission . and other info u wanna know.
The five are eager to find out so they accept.

SayiansVs Savor:
Jake charges at timothy but timithoy shots feilene shot. A purple barrier get around timothys hand and he shoots at jake knocking him out. 1 down 4 to go. Valten's next who charges electricicty but Timothy dodeges already knowing. What? Preconginition? Hmmmm...this is gonna be challenging.
Timothy shoots at patrick who blocks and returns, but timothy jabs his claws in patricks ice hand making patrick yel WAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!
Timothy kicks shooting patrick into the tree. 2 down.
Micheal quickly get knocked away , so its now valten who charges at Tim... Darn it there must be a blind spot....wait is that it.
He sees a glowing spot and puches it but it dosent do anything .
Quickly punching , Timothy grabs valten and digs his claws in and throws him. Those are savor insticnts.
Ok you didnt win but ill tell anyway.
SO there's this way going on that was started when me and my cousin jason and our friends discovered a virtial world , lyoko, and a virtial virus / spirit , Xlavier . He escaped to the real world disgused as a genearal. Me and my friends live in a underground tunnel system, which is our base. We all are gifted esspically me a Jason.
We spend our days trying to over come the loss of our moms and dads , families. We all have a deep disure for revenge but ot can over come us. This is one of the less secured enemy bases, but its still highly guarded. Which is why the fighting here could....
In that sentence ... troops lowed out of the base.
Timothy dashes slinging his claws slashing and Felines shots.
He jumps and pounds the blockade and hacks into the computer turrent to get inside.
Once inside, Timothy has a vison which shows the plans . He runs down the LONG hallway running and running hard on his paws.
Timothy sneered his feleine half cat teeth. feline shot!!!
He grabs the plans then flies out the opened window.
Kari jumps to Jason" Wow back so soon? Kari smiled with her eyes closed he loved when she did this.
Forced to bring Valten and the others with him , TIm teleports back to base.

SSJJason · 04-14-2008

Db af episode 5: Patrick makes his move!

At the base, Kari senses timothy and the others" Wha- who are they?
"Kari, i had to bring them along. They know way to much,besides
they could be working for the enemy.
" Ok i guess your right, but we won't have enough food for them.
Thanks to 2 people who raided the kitchen last night!" Kari put her hand on her forehead
" Thats not much of a problem, I can catch more , plus the turkey was good- oops.." Kari smacked the fire out of timothy
Who elese was apart of this? Spill it !
Um....William and Jason. William walked into the "living room"
" Well well look who it is... kari crossed her arms
William hated when she was in her mean side , it just didnt seem right . " yeah....hi well there's a problem - when on my mission, an enemy
almost saw the entrance , and i knocked him out cold but lets just hope he cant remember where he almost saw it "
" William - come closer and i ll give you a kiss... at that thought Kari turned green but quickly back to her smooth color. William closed his eyes but as soon as he did Kari punched him right in the gut.
What was that for ? william asked rubbing his gut aka stomach
For eating all the food!
Jason was in his and kari's room sleeping . It was his 12 pm his "sleeping hour" Any slight movement woke him up, he always slept with his katanna at his sight.
Back at with timothy and the others...
" Cool! patrick said jumping
The other sayians went to go to the bathroom,Valten studied the base .
"Your quite the hyper one, just like me when i was your age. Timothy contined to show Patrick around.
"Ahh-huh whatever. Patrick stood with a vegeta pose.
"Hey...father used to pose like that...Timothy frowned at the thought of his father.
Timothy and Patrick walk into the room , Patrick's mouth hung open
" Wow ! Patrick whistled
Studing the girl, Patrick couldn't pull his mouth shut. He looked at her legs , her shirt and her-he was interrupted by timothy
Oh , yeah thats kari . Shes the one who keeps us "on track"
in our free time. Shes hot aint she? Only problem is...Timothy gets slapped by william. " Are u crazy?! Remember what happened last time? " Ok fine...Patrick walks away
Patrick follows the girl who is walking slowly " BYAKUGAN!"
Turining around , she has her hands up ready but stops when she realizes who it is.
" Oh im sorry -DEACTIVATE! i didnt realize it was you.
Oh hhhhi.. Kari eyes him making him blush
So you must be apart of that group Timm was talking about?
Well , in order to know right away show me what u got!
Kari VS Patrick
"BYAKUGAN! Her eyes turned pale white with stress marks around her eyes and on her hands.
"HA! Patrick goes ss
" What?! A ss?! Impossible!
Dissapearing , Ss patrick makes his move . But sensing it , Kari side steps and attacks " Gentle fist: 6 palms of furry!
Moving her hands quickly she stabs Patrick hard 6 times aimed at specipic areas.
" Whoa ! Patrick turns back to normal
" Heh you did good! Kari kisses Patrick on the cheek
Patrick stands there frozen
" Whoa Patrick don't even bother! Valten says laughing up a storm
" oh please like you would have better luck!Patrick laughs back
"Open your eyes ! The girl's fourteen ! Surely with those good looks she has got to have a boyfriend.
" Yeah i do , and ill give you a hint : Next time whisper.
" Whats his name? asks patrick
" Jason. I got to go its time for trainiing.
Her words sunk Patrick's heart but his arm glows white with bolts of electricity then he turns super sayian.
Dashing past Valten , Patrick teleports to Jason's room.
Who's there? Jason woke with his katanna.
SS Patrick dives with a fist ready " Haaa!!!!
" Oh it's you...No matter! Super sprint!
Moving as fast as lightining , Jason slices Patrick cutting him badly
" What do you want? Don't mess with me when im cranky , ya' got that?! We can befriend each other if you stop this maddness right now.
"You stole her from me! Kari was mine! Ss Patrick kicks Jason in the chest but he recovers .
" HAAAAA!!!! " Big tree ......Cannon
" Saringan! Dodging it, Jason dashes ' Big. tree....cannon!
It shoots at Patrick who teleports And dashes at Jason
Jason jumps back and punches Patrick . Then , Jason kicks him up and punches him down and pins Patrick knocking him unconsius
Jason brings him in to kari but a girl sees him..
" Jason why in the *** do you have him in your hands.
Not the best way to talk to your older brother but he attacked me first. Oh yeah its still your "sleeping hour" , so thats why hes damaged so badly...katanna marks and a few brushes , I think he'll be okay. Patrick wakes up on the couch " Where am i?

~~Dark Skywalker~~ · 04-14-2008

Saringan? What is that?

SSJJason · 04-14-2008

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Originally Posted by Dark Skywalker

Saringan? What is that?

There u go your getting off topic. It's a savior technique.

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SSJJason (19) Mastered Super Saiyan Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Humping sakura in my bed Posts: 1,155 Blog Entries: 3 Rep Power: 42	DBZ Af episode 1 The newest warriors Valten looked at his friend's cold blue eyes. "Maybe we should go" said Valten . Patrick , looking at the blue sky said " We can stop at the candy store on the way back!" Race ya'" yelled Patrick turning super sayian and flying off . Valten , turning super sayian flies off after him. Patrick flies straight first into a wall. " owww" he said " OH-NO its June !" June was pan's daughter and had a crush on both Patrick and Valten , she says that she'll kiss them one day. Valten and Patrick zoom across the sky using almost all their ki to get away from June but a ki blast hits them. " What the heck just happened ? " said Patrick giving a common Vegeta pose " I dont know said Valten " We were flying at the speed of light there's only one possible exclamation ... said Valten thinking Valten was the kind hearted friend, plus he always got A+ this gave him the rep of a geek. Patrick was the cool friend who got B's on everything , when everyone teased valten Patrick sticks up for him. Their fathers Goten and Trunks were best friends and so were they. "Patrick watch out!" yelled Valten A spaceship zoomed out the sky and opened to let out Bojack, freezia cell , Janemba, Raditz , plus Razor and Faho. Valten and Patrick froze..." Wait a sec... said both Valten and Patrick Freiza attacked first " DIE!!! " HAAAAAAAA!!! yells Valten turning super sayian Patrick goes Super sayian also " HAAAAAAAA!! Cell steps out and clones him self, and then yells "KAAAMEHAMEHA! Valten lets out a bio electric force field , Valten was born with the ability to control electricity and it also worked in conjunction with his ki . Patrick was born with the ability of ice , which like Valten protects him and makes him stronger. " Kaaamehameha! yelled SS Valten and Patrick Cell grows into a giant and so Valten and Patrick do a technique that has been not used in 2 decades : Fusion. " Fusion " Ha! A bright new warrior appeared ... Valtrick ! Valtrick was the strongest fusion at the time and instead of goofing around he really fights. Thats it ! said Valtrick Valtrick charges his electricity into his hand... Final electric kamehameha! The blast blows killing cell with it...Valtrick and frezia now go at it, fighting and fighting. Valtrick then sees his uncle Gohan ( well Valten's uncle) Gohan goes ss4 then does a kamehameha wiping away everyone except Razor. Valten and Patrick say" lets get him! razor smirking yells " Death zone hole ! " It swoops at gohan sucking him in but Valten yells " darn it he's gone and more importantly we cant move ! Valten cries which revershes the speel on him and Patrick NOOOOOO!!! yells Valten HAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Valten inherited his uncle's dormant power Valtens muscles get bigger his hair get spikier and then his hair turns blue... After the exploson clears Valten stands there with blue strikes on his arms and blue lines under his face and white fur on his body SS4 Valten moves at a blazing speed ... then yells " DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE!" Valten then flips back and his fist turns yellow then he yells " Dragon fist! The attack "kills" Razor, Valten falls down to the ground. Valten awakes and finds he's home... with his mother valesse coming in. " How do you feel honey?'' "Im fine mom." smiles Valten Valten flies down stairs to see his father " Did you sense the battle ?" asks Valten Goten nods " Im proud son", you really did go ss4? " Yeah i can show you" says Valten " This is super sayian " says Valten HAAAA!! "This is ss2" says Valten HAAAAAAA!!!!!!! " this is ss3 , and now to bring it beyond! HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!! This is ss4. says Valten Patrick lands on the grass " Valten , June's coming! Lower your ki! says Valten Then the horror came... June lands right there Valten and Patrick bump into each other ... June tackles Patrick then kissing him Valten then jumps on her to get her off of Patrick June then starts kissing Valten .." Yuck i have to wash my face for a week! The thing about June is that even though Valten and Patrick dont like her she still kisses them. Patrick then barfs " Yuck ! As the trio keep " playing" Razor is sielently watching from a tree. __________________ PSN : Fizzykid49. YO ' Momma so fat she make a sumo like skinny! STFU noob. or face Tha ' Guru!

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~~Dark Skywalker~~ Banned Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: New York Chillin Like A villain Posts: 1,504 Rep Power: 0	Re: DBZ Af episode 1 The newest warriors Not bad i like it

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~~JC#1~~ Banned Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 1,806 Rep Power: 0	Re: DBZ Af episode 1 The newest warriors if the title says "episode 1' in it then does that mean you're gonna make a new thread for each episode? That would be kinda lame, no offense, it just isn't smart. But it is a very good story, nice job :)

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SSJJason (19) Mastered Super Saiyan Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Humping sakura in my bed Posts: 1,155 Blog Entries: 3 Rep Power: 42	Re: DBZ Af episode 1 The newest warriors Dragon ball AF episode 2 Razor's attack! Protect june! As we left off, Valten and Patrick watch in horror as Gohan is killed. Valten's power suddenly explodes and turns into Super sayian 2! Does Patrick have any hidden potential? Valten's phone rang. " Hello... he sat on a log Pan quickly replied " how's it going valten? " Good, u? " Im on my buisnness trip ill be back in time for christmas" "WHAT"!! Valten wanted to yell but said "ok...see ya then! " I need u three to get the supplies for the party" Mistletoe lights pie ham green beans potatoes bananas apples and blueberry's. Valten let his brain memorize the list" Ok bye Mrs.Son! Patrick stoped doing his push ups when he heard the bad news. " How could she?! A whole week?! Thats bizzare! " " Hey even though its virturally impossible it could be worse! "yeah well it's still bad since we gotta spend the week with - HER said patrick pointing to June who was starring at a tree " It's not polite to point , Pat " " Whatever". " Well we better call her over here...the problem of the situation is that ...Valten stopped when he sensed a intense power level near by " Valten someone's watching us... " Always stating the obvious , eh?" " shut up" A ki blast shot across the land making it snow Whoa! We got bigger problems to worry about ! Oh no! June! they both shouted Razor appeared and then grabs June " Noooooo! yells June The stress and pain razor put her in transformed her into a super sayian! HAAAAAA!!! screams June Patrick and Valten stood floating in the air Valten shields them with a field of electricty When the three flashing lights disappear Patrick and Valten cant sense Razor's power level " Wait is he really gone? I doubt it said Valten SS June stood there in her tomboyish stance June then teleports snuffing razor then charges up the Son family's signature teadmark move - KAAAAAAAAA....MEEEEEEE.... HAAAAAA... MEEEEEE....Ha ! Razor is thought to be killed but like his father baby he can possess people's bodies. Razor goes in though a cut in june's pants ...June black eyes go pupiless and she has black marks on her face " MWHHAAAA"! I toke over her body! I will kill SON goku and anyone who tries to stop me! Razor-June flies to Valten and patrick ...plotting to take over Valtens body and to kill Son Goku! Will a possessed June be successful in taking Valtens body ? Will he-she kill Son goku? What will Patrick and Valten do to stop Razor without killing june? Next time on DB AF! __________________ PSN : Fizzykid49. YO ' Momma so fat she make a sumo like skinny! STFU noob. or face Tha ' Guru!

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The Electron Zone Naruto Ranked (25) Rokubi Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Between The Wakes Of What Seems Death And Life Posts: 4,298 Blog Entries: 7 Rep Power: 58	Re: DBZ Af episode 1 The newest warriors shorter this time, how come. __________________

04-08-2008	#10 (permalink)
SSJJason (19) Mastered Super Saiyan Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Humping sakura in my bed Posts: 1,155 Blog Entries: 3 Rep Power: 42	Re: DBZ Af episode 1 The newest warriors Dragon ball Af episode 3 A truffle's revenge! After taking over June's body ,Razor plots to take over valten and get to son goku for his Revenge! Will he succecced? Valten dosen't hope so " Hey wait a second says valten " Yeah somethings wrong Valten smirks " Yet again you always have to state the obvious eh? " Yet again you better shut up before ill will! Valten looks at patrick Razor stands there looking at patrick and valten Then Valten gasps " get out of June! " Charging Valten kicks Razor which shocks him. Ahhhh!!! he says in June's voice In a flash of a light a explosive wave hits Patrick and in a blink of a eye, he exits her body and goes into patricks " darn it!! Then Razor-Patrick puts his hands on his forehead " Solar flare! " I cant see! " Man he seems to be going after grandpa....I have to go there before he does ! And just at that Valten dashes up to the sky and flies off. When he gets there he discovers a shocking discovery! Videl and Grandma Chi-Chi are dead ! Valten screams " NOOOOOOOO!!!!! His Hair gets pointy his eyes sting with lighting and he more musclar . With this newfound power and hatred , Valten flies off To the plains just in time for battle thats starting. In the Plains SS4 goku is pounding Patrick " I got more to show you SON GOKU!!!!!!! His muscles get bulger and he get red yellow boots , jacket , gloves and wrist pads. Final form Razor sqweezied out of Patrick making him look like a pancake . Valten arrivies just in time and yells "I WON'T FORGIVE YOU MONSTER ! ILL KILL YOU IF IT'S THAT'S THE LAST THING ILL DO! Charging, Goku and Valten pummel Razor and are soon joined by patrick. SS Patrick , SS2 Valten, SS4 Goku all charge up a kamehameha and let razor escape to his ship. NOW!! Letting go the Massive wave , it shoots Razor into the sun!! Well thats taking care of" says patrick " Well i guess so... Because of how good you guys did im gonna take you to the amusement park! YEAH!!!!! C'mon lets go! Sneak peak for next epiosde: A black haired boy came back from the tunnel entrance, smiling. " well the coast is clear! A girl, A boy, A boy, A boy, A girl snuck out the tunnuel with weapons Author's note: Ill try to make the chapters longer but like i said i dont feel good. I also try to include more sneak peaks. cho!@ __________________ PSN : Fizzykid49. YO ' Momma so fat she make a sumo like skinny! STFU noob. or face Tha ' Guru!

04-11-2008	#11 (permalink)
SSJJason (19) Mastered Super Saiyan Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Humping sakura in my bed Posts: 1,155 Blog Entries: 3 Rep Power: 42	Re: DBZ Af episode 1 The newest warriors DB af episode 4 Escape!: Sayains VS Savors William quickly dashed behind the strret pole. " Rats, I've been spotted! Having no other choice, the teen dashed out with two knives and sliced and diced the monster in half and quickly disseapared. William had the ability of teleportation. This ability could eleport him for 30 minutes and is apart of his attack. His weapons were two red-black kineves that were hard to dodge. Jason zoomed across the water then stopping and pulls out his katana and slashes the monster. " Score one for the good guys. Putting the katana away he gets ready to move out." Super speed! Leaving a yellow trail behind , Jason quickly dashes back to the hideout. Jason wielded the katanna blade and had sper speed and clones. Kari used her ability to turn invisible to get into enemy base. '" I need to get inside there....but how? Quickly noticing the window open , she went invisible and was ready to wipe out any guards in the way. Tripping over a rock,, kari alearts a guard who alearts others. Having trainning from jason to unlesh her powers, she uses telekenisis to wipe the gurad out and to read his mind. ' Cell 435 56 degrees to the west , forth corrider make left to right , ran kari. Her weapons were her powers and her nunchuckes. She had the most abilities of the group and was 3rd most powerful. Timothy ran through the plains searching. His mission was to get the enemy's plans. His eyes shot across everywhere looking for hidden guards. Ahhhhhh! Timothy had a vision telling him were the plans were. Lazor arrow! The ki arrow shot across to the rope , cutting it and opening a secret passassge. Meanwhile.... Valten, Patrick, Jake, Micheal, and joe walked ssensing a power level. Ya sure you sensed it? We've benn looking for awhile. Hey wait over there! the five saw a teen Dodging fire aand shooting back. Hey lets help! The five approach,but timothy's sense of smell and vision made him always aware of things. " Hey who are u and what are u doing? ask Jake " You five get out of here now its dangerous...im on a misson. " A mission for what?! " Ok here''s a deal , if you can defeat me ill tell u what im doing and what am and whats my mission . and other info u wanna know. The five are eager to find out so they accept. SayiansVs Savor: Jake charges at timothy but timithoy shots feilene shot. A purple barrier get around timothys hand and he shoots at jake knocking him out. 1 down 4 to go. Valten's next who charges electricicty but Timothy dodeges already knowing. What? Preconginition? Hmmmm...this is gonna be challenging. Timothy shoots at patrick who blocks and returns, but timothy jabs his claws in patricks ice hand making patrick yel WAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!! Timothy kicks shooting patrick into the tree. 2 down. Micheal quickly get knocked away , so its now valten who charges at Tim... Darn it there must be a blind spot....wait is that it. He sees a glowing spot and puches it but it dosent do anything . Quickly punching , Timothy grabs valten and digs his claws in and throws him. Those are savor insticnts. Ok you didnt win but ill tell anyway. SO there's this way going on that was started when me and my cousin jason and our friends discovered a virtial world , lyoko, and a virtial virus / spirit , Xlavier . He escaped to the real world disgused as a genearal. Me and my friends live in a underground tunnel system, which is our base. We all are gifted esspically me a Jason. We spend our days trying to over come the loss of our moms and dads , families. We all have a deep disure for revenge but ot can over come us. This is one of the less secured enemy bases, but its still highly guarded. Which is why the fighting here could.... In that sentence ... troops lowed out of the base. Timothy dashes slinging his claws slashing and Felines shots. He jumps and pounds the blockade and hacks into the computer turrent to get inside. Once inside, Timothy has a vison which shows the plans . He runs down the LONG hallway running and running hard on his paws. Timothy sneered his feleine half cat teeth. feline shot!!! He grabs the plans then flies out the opened window. Kari jumps to Jason" Wow back so soon? Kari smiled with her eyes closed he loved when she did this. Forced to bring Valten and the others with him , TIm teleports back to base. __________________ PSN : Fizzykid49. YO ' Momma so fat she make a sumo like skinny! STFU noob. or face Tha ' Guru!

04-14-2008	#12 (permalink)
SSJJason (19) Mastered Super Saiyan Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Humping sakura in my bed Posts: 1,155 Blog Entries: 3 Rep Power: 42	Re: DBZ Af episode 1 The newest warriors Db af episode 5: Patrick makes his move! At the base, Kari senses timothy and the others" Wha- who are they? "Kari, i had to bring them along. They know way to much,besides they could be working for the enemy. " Ok i guess your right, but we won't have enough food for them. Thanks to 2 people who raided the kitchen last night!" Kari put her hand on her forehead " Thats not much of a problem, I can catch more , plus the turkey was good- oops.." Kari smacked the fire out of timothy Who elese was apart of this? Spill it ! Um....William and Jason. William walked into the "living room" " Well well look who it is... kari crossed her arms William hated when she was in her mean side , it just didnt seem right . " yeah....hi well there's a problem - when on my mission, an enemy almost saw the entrance , and i knocked him out cold but lets just hope he cant remember where he almost saw it " " William - come closer and i ll give you a kiss... at that thought Kari turned green but quickly back to her smooth color. William closed his eyes but as soon as he did Kari punched him right in the gut. What was that for ? william asked rubbing his gut aka stomach For eating all the food! Jason was in his and kari's room sleeping . It was his 12 pm his "sleeping hour" Any slight movement woke him up, he always slept with his katanna at his sight. Back at with timothy and the others... " Cool! patrick said jumping The other sayians went to go to the bathroom,Valten studied the base . "Your quite the hyper one, just like me when i was your age. Timothy contined to show Patrick around. "Ahh-huh whatever. Patrick stood with a vegeta pose. "Hey...father used to pose like that...Timothy frowned at the thought of his father. Timothy and Patrick walk into the room , Patrick's mouth hung open " Wow ! Patrick whistled Studing the girl, Patrick couldn't pull his mouth shut. He looked at her legs , her shirt and her-he was interrupted by timothy Oh , yeah thats kari . Shes the one who keeps us "on track" in our free time. Shes hot aint she? Only problem is...Timothy gets slapped by william. " Are u crazy?! Remember what happened last time? " Ok fine...Patrick walks away Patrick follows the girl who is walking slowly " BYAKUGAN!" Turining around , she has her hands up ready but stops when she realizes who it is. " Oh im sorry -DEACTIVATE! i didnt realize it was you. Oh hhhhi.. Kari eyes him making him blush So you must be apart of that group Timm was talking about? Well , in order to know right away show me what u got! Kari VS Patrick "BYAKUGAN! Her eyes turned pale white with stress marks around her eyes and on her hands. "HA! Patrick goes ss " What?! A ss?! Impossible! Dissapearing , Ss patrick makes his move . But sensing it , Kari side steps and attacks " Gentle fist: 6 palms of furry! Moving her hands quickly she stabs Patrick hard 6 times aimed at specipic areas. " Whoa ! Patrick turns back to normal " Heh you did good! Kari kisses Patrick on the cheek Patrick stands there frozen " Whoa Patrick don't even bother! Valten says laughing up a storm " oh please like you would have better luck!Patrick laughs back "Open your eyes ! The girl's fourteen ! Surely with those good looks she has got to have a boyfriend. " Yeah i do , and ill give you a hint : Next time whisper. " Whats his name? asks patrick " Jason. I got to go its time for trainiing. Her words sunk Patrick's heart but his arm glows white with bolts of electricity then he turns super sayian. Dashing past Valten , Patrick teleports to Jason's room. Who's there? Jason woke with his katanna. SS Patrick dives with a fist ready " Haaa!!!! " Oh it's you...No matter! Super sprint! Moving as fast as lightining , Jason slices Patrick cutting him badly " What do you want? Don't mess with me when im cranky , ya' got that?! We can befriend each other if you stop this maddness right now. "You stole her from me! Kari was mine! Ss Patrick kicks Jason in the chest but he recovers . " HAAAAA!!!! " Big tree ......Cannon " Saringan! Dodging it, Jason dashes ' Big. tree....cannon! It shoots at Patrick who teleports And dashes at Jason Jason jumps back and punches Patrick . Then , Jason kicks him up and punches him down and pins Patrick knocking him unconsius Jason brings him in to kari but a girl sees him.. " Jason why in the *** do you have him in your hands. Not the best way to talk to your older brother but he attacked me first. Oh yeah its still your "sleeping hour" , so thats why hes damaged so badly...katanna marks and a few brushes , I think he'll be okay. Patrick wakes up on the couch " Where am i? __________________ PSN : Fizzykid49. YO ' Momma so fat she make a sumo like skinny! STFU noob. or face Tha ' Guru!

04-14-2008	#13 (permalink)
~~Dark Skywalker~~ Banned Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: New York Chillin Like A villain Posts: 1,504 Rep Power: 0	Re: DBZ Af episode 1 The newest warriors Saringan? What is that?

04-15-2008	#15 (permalink)
~~Dark Skywalker~~ Banned Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: New York Chillin Like A villain Posts: 1,504 Rep Power: 0