|Cross-Over| Worlds collide!Naruto meets Dragonballz! - Page 4

~~JC#1~~ · 03-26-2008

I'm working on a shedule, each day of the week except for sunday I'll be working on a different fic. What day should I work on this one?

~~Dark Skywalker~~ · 03-26-2008

i dont care just get to work now

~~JC#1~~ · 03-27-2008

edit= sorry, posted in the wrong fic, lol.

~~JC#1~~ · 03-29-2008

Wow, you guys should feel special. I spend a whole week forgetting to spike my otherwise white-guy-afro-ish hair, and fopr some reason I can't sleep. I finally fall asleep watching Dragonball's Piccollo Jr. saga and reading "The Outsiders", and I gotta wake up from my perfect little world, walk ut of my room, and walk down the stairs to get to my mom's computer and then spend 3 hours typing this chapter. Just remember, this wasn't as easy a usual...Outsiders is a good book, lol.

chapter 5: The akatsuki threat fended off, a new arc begins!

Lee is holding a kunai knife against Kisame's throat, ready to slice it. Uub is behind the akatsuki menace. Kisame doesn't seem to be worried at all, but then a look of shock overcomes his face.

"ssk..." he whispers quitly under his breath.

"What?" Uub asks.

"Heh...Sasuke!" A maniacal look formed on the head of this assasin.

"Sasuke? What oes he have to do with anything? The akatsuki have never been too interested in him," Lee questioned.

"Wrong...I came here to find out where he is...Because where he is...We can find the curse mark...And where that is...We can trace it back o Orochimaru..."

"Why are you looking for Orochimaru?" Lee asked.

"Why do you think I'll tell you? Hyah!" Kisame suddenly dissapears with a ball of smoke where he was standng.

"He's gone!" Lee exclaimed.

"How come he was able to fight so well when I only sensed the average human power level in him...So bizare...Like he uses a whole different energy source...!" Trunks puzzled.

"I sense a strange different energy source within you too...Are you not using chakra?" Lee asked.

"Chakra? I don't know what that means. I use my ki energy to fight," Vegeta informed.

"what's ki energy?" Sakura asked.

"Well its...I don't really know how to explain it...King Kai taught it to Goku, maybe Goku can tll you," Trunks replied. They all looked at the pile of freezing warrirors that Uub had brought out of the house. "Uub, you couldn't even get them to some place a little warmer? And how is them being right here in the middle of the battle field 'getting them to safety'?"

"Oh, haha, I kinda wanted to watch the fight so I dumped them all here to get it over with, then I sat don and watched...heh-heh, you guys should be in a weekly fourteen page comic book from Japan, or maybe a cool japanese cartoon that an English anime translating company called Funimation edits out of its freakin' mind. For example, if Funimation wasn't so worried about kids hearing bad wrds, I woulda said f*cking earlier instead of reakin'," Uub explained, steering the topic accidently with his wondering mind.

"We were in a fourteen page manga and half hour anime, but after Funimation tried 'remastering' us a second time when their Ultimate edition was just fine, we lost our american audince, and after GT we were already hated enough, even though Funimation edited out the boring episodes and later released them as 'the lost episodes' which I think was a good move, but americans already hated us for the first two seasons and didn't watch the freakin' show. Japan started hating us too for GT, and then we basily lost all our popularity. Wanting a new show to make up for the unsuccesful GT, some fan made an April Fool's joke which eventually turned into a dojinshi that no american can find anywhere on the internet, and so instead they read the unfinished 'episode summaries' on new.dragonballaf.googlepages.com," Trunks informed. "Oh yeah, anyone reading this listen carefully: the paragragh you are reading does not express the views or opinions of JC#1 or his eventual failing comic book company."

"Wow, nice text block there Trunks, but let's get out of reality and back into he DBZ+Naruto collided world fanfic okay? So what are we gonna do about the Akatsuki guys? They're prety strong, but I think they use this..'Chakra' thing Lee and Sakura keep talking about, instead of spiritual ki energy," Uub replied. Goku began to wake up and rubbed his eyes.

"Where are we?" he asked.

"Oh! Goku, explain ki energy to Sakura and Lee the way King Kai explained it to Goku," Majin Buu said redundantly.

"Oh, well..." Goku explained ki to Sakura and Lee..."So that's what ki energy is."

"That isn't really at all different from Chakra, but we use certain hand signs to release the two kinds of chakra and..." Lee explained the difference between chakra and ki..."So...I think I'm gonna try using this ki energy." He started forming an energy ball in his hands, sweeting and strggling to use his ki for the first time. The yellow blast formed and he held it in his right hand. "So this is ki huh?"

"Yah, great job! You must be a fast learner! Are there any of thjese 'jutsu' things you can tell me about? I bet I could figure out my chakra as fast as you did your ki!" Goku said enthusiastic.

"Well, I can only do taijutsu, but Sakura knows some cool gen and nin jutsus, don't you Sakura?"

"Yeah, like the walking on trees jutsu Kakashi taught me and Naruto and...Sasuke..." Sakura looked at the ground, slightly depressed.

Manwhile, back at Chi-chi's home, Naruto is sitting at the table, with his eyes closed, looking like he's concentrating on something.

"What are you doing Naruto?" Chi-chi asked.

"Oh, sorry, I was sensing some sort of fight, but it loos like its over. I sensed some people that I know, and a bunch of other people were using some sort of different energy source than I'm used to. I thin a few of them wee knoked unconcsious for a while, but they'er starting to wake up," Naruto answered.

"You really ARE a ninja, aren't you?"

"Yep. I'm an official genin of the hidden leaf village, Konohagakure."

"My husband could be a nina...Either of my children could too, but they just...Aren't. Probably because they don't know how to become ninja, or because..." Chi-chi suddenly had a moment of realization. "Because I wouldn't let them...Because I'm so strict..." the pot ith the ramen in it started to steam. "Oh! That's the ramen, why isn't Goten here yet? He's probably...Oh no...That fight you were talking about! Goten is in it! My son is going to ge hurt! Was he one of the unconcsious pople!?"

"How should I kow? I don't know which chakra signal is his!"

"Just...The one that seems to resemble mine, I guess, but he's really strong, and chances are he's using the different energy source you were talking about!"

"He's waking up, so yeah he was knocked out for a while."

"Come on! We have to go get him!" Naruto linked his hands togethr with his right index and middle finger pointing up.

"Grab on!" Chi-chi put her han on his soulder and they dissapeared, a ball of smoke left where they once were.

"Woah! I can't believe it! I've walked on walls before but never without running to keep up a momentum and never without keeping a steady flow of ki energy running through my body! This is great, this is awesome, hahaha! Woo-hoo!" Goku was jumping from tree to tree in a forest in Jingle town, with everyone watching. The unconcsious ones were woken up too.

"Goten!" Chi-chi and Naruto appeared in the forest and ran towards Goten and the others.

"Goku? Uub? I haven't seen you guys since the tournament! What ar you doing here with everyone? Naruto said he sensed a fight.

"Naruto!" Sakura yelled in joyfull relief.

"Sakura!" Naruto replied.

~~Dark Skywalker~~ · 03-29-2008

good story

~~JC#1~~ · 03-29-2008

thnx, you're complements are getting less insulting, which either means you've been doing pot and thought you were seriously creative so you compared your false creativity to mine and then quite it and figured out that you were just high, or my fics are getting better...I'm pretty sure its the 2nd one.

ultra_blade · 03-31-2008

LoL chi-chi, great chapter though!!!

~~Dark Skywalker~~ · 04-04-2008

I would like for you to continue the story please

~~JC#1~~ · 04-05-2008

I'm leaving this joint, in your new forum DS, I might start up my fics again, but I need a little vacation first.

~~Dark Skywalker~~ · 04-05-2008

You should finsh up atleast one more good story before you do

~~JC#1~~ · 04-05-2008

You mean one more chapter or finish a whole fic? Cause I'm almost done with the Goten fic and the alternate ending fic.

~~Dark Skywalker~~ · 04-06-2008

This is the best fic Finsh this one up before you come back

**RandomPenguin** · 04-06-2008

im sorry to say but you do not have the characters charactaristics right at all which kind of ruins the whole thing i have to say around 4/5 out of 10 also your stupid pass at what i think was ment to be a joke (the funimation thing) killed it off even more... -_-

~~JC#1~~ · 04-08-2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by RandomPenguin

im sorry to say but you do not have the characters charactaristics right at all which kind of ruins the whole thing i have to say around 4/5 out of 10 also your stupid pass at what i think was ment to be a joke (the funimation thing) killed it off even more... -_-

hey that was a good joke

lol, jk, I just neede something to fill up space. As for people being out of character, everyone has said that and I wish someone would give me an example or just explain.

~~Dark Skywalker~~ · 04-10-2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by RandomPenguin

im sorry to say but you do not have the characters charactaristics right at all which kind of ruins the whole thing i have to say around 4/5 out of 10 also your stupid pass at what i think was ment to be a joke (the funimation thing) killed it off even more... -_-

Could you please work on your spelling? I can't read you your trying to get out

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~~JC#1~~ Banned Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 1,806 Rep Power: 0	Re: Worlds collide!Naruto meets Dragonballz! I'm working on a shedule, each day of the week except for sunday I'll be working on a different fic. What day should I work on this one?

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03-27-2008	#48 (permalink)
~~JC#1~~ Banned Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 1,806 Rep Power: 0	Re: Worlds collide!Naruto meets Dragonballz! edit= sorry, posted in the wrong fic, lol.

03-29-2008	#49 (permalink)
~~JC#1~~ Banned Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 1,806 Rep Power: 0	Re: Worlds collide!Naruto meets Dragonballz! Wow, you guys should feel special. I spend a whole week forgetting to spike my otherwise white-guy-afro-ish hair, and fopr some reason I can't sleep. I finally fall asleep watching Dragonball's Piccollo Jr. saga and reading "The Outsiders", and I gotta wake up from my perfect little world, walk ut of my room, and walk down the stairs to get to my mom's computer and then spend 3 hours typing this chapter. Just remember, this wasn't as easy a usual...Outsiders is a good book, lol. chapter 5: The akatsuki threat fended off, a new arc begins! Lee is holding a kunai knife against Kisame's throat, ready to slice it. Uub is behind the akatsuki menace. Kisame doesn't seem to be worried at all, but then a look of shock overcomes his face. "ssk..." he whispers quitly under his breath. "What?" Uub asks. "Heh...Sasuke!" A maniacal look formed on the head of this assasin. "Sasuke? What oes he have to do with anything? The akatsuki have never been too interested in him," Lee questioned. "Wrong...I came here to find out where he is...Because where he is...We can find the curse mark...And where that is...We can trace it back o Orochimaru..." "Why are you looking for Orochimaru?" Lee asked. "Why do you think I'll tell you? Hyah!" Kisame suddenly dissapears with a ball of smoke where he was standng. "He's gone!" Lee exclaimed. "How come he was able to fight so well when I only sensed the average human power level in him...So bizare...Like he uses a whole different energy source...!" Trunks puzzled. "I sense a strange different energy source within you too...Are you not using chakra?" Lee asked. "Chakra? I don't know what that means. I use my ki energy to fight," Vegeta informed. "what's ki energy?" Sakura asked. "Well its...I don't really know how to explain it...King Kai taught it to Goku, maybe Goku can tll you," Trunks replied. They all looked at the pile of freezing warrirors that Uub had brought out of the house. "Uub, you couldn't even get them to some place a little warmer? And how is them being right here in the middle of the battle field 'getting them to safety'?" "Oh, haha, I kinda wanted to watch the fight so I dumped them all here to get it over with, then I sat don and watched...heh-heh, you guys should be in a weekly fourteen page comic book from Japan, or maybe a cool japanese cartoon that an English anime translating company called Funimation edits out of its freakin' mind. For example, if Funimation wasn't so worried about kids hearing bad wrds, I woulda said f*cking earlier instead of reakin'," Uub explained, steering the topic accidently with his wondering mind. "We were in a fourteen page manga and half hour anime, but after Funimation tried 'remastering' us a second time when their Ultimate edition was just fine, we lost our american audince, and after GT we were already hated enough, even though Funimation edited out the boring episodes and later released them as 'the lost episodes' which I think was a good move, but americans already hated us for the first two seasons and didn't watch the freakin' show. Japan started hating us too for GT, and then we basily lost all our popularity. Wanting a new show to make up for the unsuccesful GT, some fan made an April Fool's joke which eventually turned into a dojinshi that no american can find anywhere on the internet, and so instead they read the unfinished 'episode summaries' on new.dragonballaf.googlepages.com," Trunks informed. "Oh yeah, anyone reading this listen carefully: the paragragh you are reading does not express the views or opinions of JC#1 or his eventual failing comic book company." "Wow, nice text block there Trunks, but let's get out of reality and back into he DBZ+Naruto collided world fanfic okay? So what are we gonna do about the Akatsuki guys? They're prety strong, but I think they use this..'Chakra' thing Lee and Sakura keep talking about, instead of spiritual ki energy," Uub replied. Goku began to wake up and rubbed his eyes. "Where are we?" he asked. "Oh! Goku, explain ki energy to Sakura and Lee the way King Kai explained it to Goku," Majin Buu said redundantly. "Oh, well..." Goku explained ki to Sakura and Lee..."So that's what ki energy is." "That isn't really at all different from Chakra, but we use certain hand signs to release the two kinds of chakra and..." Lee explained the difference between chakra and ki..."So...I think I'm gonna try using this ki energy." He started forming an energy ball in his hands, sweeting and strggling to use his ki for the first time. The yellow blast formed and he held it in his right hand. "So this is ki huh?" "Yah, great job! You must be a fast learner! Are there any of thjese 'jutsu' things you can tell me about? I bet I could figure out my chakra as fast as you did your ki!" Goku said enthusiastic. "Well, I can only do taijutsu, but Sakura knows some cool gen and nin jutsus, don't you Sakura?" "Yeah, like the walking on trees jutsu Kakashi taught me and Naruto and...Sasuke..." Sakura looked at the ground, slightly depressed. Manwhile, back at Chi-chi's home, Naruto is sitting at the table, with his eyes closed, looking like he's concentrating on something. "What are you doing Naruto?" Chi-chi asked. "Oh, sorry, I was sensing some sort of fight, but it loos like its over. I sensed some people that I know, and a bunch of other people were using some sort of different energy source than I'm used to. I thin a few of them wee knoked unconcsious for a while, but they'er starting to wake up," Naruto answered. "You really ARE a ninja, aren't you?" "Yep. I'm an official genin of the hidden leaf village, Konohagakure." "My husband could be a nina...Either of my children could too, but they just...Aren't. Probably because they don't know how to become ninja, or because..." Chi-chi suddenly had a moment of realization. "Because I wouldn't let them...Because I'm so strict..." the pot ith the ramen in it started to steam. "Oh! That's the ramen, why isn't Goten here yet? He's probably...Oh no...That fight you were talking about! Goten is in it! My son is going to ge hurt! Was he one of the unconcsious pople!?" "How should I kow? I don't know which chakra signal is his!" "Just...The one that seems to resemble mine, I guess, but he's really strong, and chances are he's using the different energy source you were talking about!" "He's waking up, so yeah he was knocked out for a while." "Come on! We have to go get him!" Naruto linked his hands togethr with his right index and middle finger pointing up. "Grab on!" Chi-chi put her han on his soulder and they dissapeared, a ball of smoke left where they once were. "Woah! I can't believe it! I've walked on walls before but never without running to keep up a momentum and never without keeping a steady flow of ki energy running through my body! This is great, this is awesome, hahaha! Woo-hoo!" Goku was jumping from tree to tree in a forest in Jingle town, with everyone watching. The unconcsious ones were woken up too. "Goten!" Chi-chi and Naruto appeared in the forest and ran towards Goten and the others. "Goku? Uub? I haven't seen you guys since the tournament! What ar you doing here with everyone? Naruto said he sensed a fight. "Naruto!" Sakura yelled in joyfull relief. "Sakura!" Naruto replied.

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