the predator

I'm not going to spill too much . Just telling you some basic stuff right now before I start this fic.

After gt, Goku is gone , Gohan, Trunks and Goten are the strongest fighters. Pan doesent fight anymore and neither does 18 except for defending themselves of course. Uubu is nowhere to be found. People reckon he's as strong as their elite fighters (gohan, trunks and goten), Piccolo , Vegeta, Yamcha, Tien, and kurillin are all old and so can't match the power that is of Gohan , Trunks and Goten (and maybe uub).

now for new characters. I'm only gonna get to the good guys. the bad guys are for later.
I'm just gonna say their heritage and stuff i aint describing their characters it more fun that way.

Jyron: Son of Trunks and Pan; little brother of Videl (jr), 6 yrs old, cousin/nephew to Goshi,grandson of gohan, videl, bulma and Vegeta, 5/8 human 3/8 saiya-jin

Goshi: Son of Goten and Bulla; 5 yrs old, cousin/uncle to Jyron, grandson
of Goku , ChiChi, Bulma and Vegeta, 1/2 saiyan 1/2 Human

Weye (Wei): Foster son of Tien, 5 years old, Friend of Jyron and Goshi, human

(JYRON has an older sister of 12 named VIDEL (jr))

(Yamcha has a small little girl whom is 2 years old. Her mother is none other than Kurillin's old girlfriend Marron.)


That is all. I will soon post the prolouge.

.Osmond_Fan

Woah, I love how you've produced the characters, well done, can't wait to read the fic

.Byakuya

i cant wait to read the first chapter sounds good

the predator

wow....replies already. Well here's the prolouge yeah I'm a tease.

Prolouge

Earth....a paradise to be cherished and proud of. A planet full of joy, harmony and peace. All thanks to goku and the Z fighters' hardest attempts. A place to feel secure and safe. Now is the time to test that security. Can Earth really survive without Son Gokuu?

Peril and Danger hovers straight towards Earth. It will only be a matter of time before the balance is disturbed once again and peace and serenity will become threatened once more. In the bowels of the castle-like spaceship which takes the form of our threat, lie two men. The room in which they lied was as large as a church. It was dimly lit with several torches, its background was littered with statues and monuments, a long red carpet trailing towards the room leads to the dark duo. One of them is bowing to the other. The other one breathes heavily and sits on a majestic chair, a step above his comanion. The bowing man's head rises and he faces the hidden man. The seated man spoke in a cold weak voice that would send a shiver down your spine.

"Yestran....I thank you for your continuous loyalty and you will be rewarded greatly once the task is completed." he blurted weakly.

"Thank me not, my lord I am forever in your service. To be in your presence is reward enough." replied the noble man.

"That is what I like to hear General. Vengeance will be mine but first I need to regain my..ugh strength" he said with a cough.

"I will fulfill your wish. What is it that I must do to hand you your power back?" asked the servant earnestly.

"Your aid has been very appreciated. I thank you for restoring my freedom but I still need you to restore my power so that I can rule with an iron fist once more !" he said gaining some composure.

"And how can I be of-" "Do not interrupt me...I'm getting to that " he uttered between coughs.

Several deep breathes were taken. "Master-" "Weakness...I hate it." he said and took another deep breath. "This is what I've been reduced to. Well no more.....no more..." he began and then paused again to cough and breathe. " Yestran....I will tell you my original motive once you eliminate some...threats. I was informed some scouts that there are these..." he paused and coughed once more. "ugh...warriors , the 'Z' fighters which might produce interference. I want you to gather your troops and destroy these unworthy warriors. Three of them are the main threat. I believe they belong to a race called..." he once again paused to cough and breathe. "...saiya-jin, check these meddling fools' properties on the main computer. It should provide you with the......information you need. I want you....to examine them....and see where they are vulnerable...and then proceed in destroying them. Then we I can regain my power with no interference. Now...that...that you know my motives...you can leave..." he said between several coughes.

The General stood up and faced the hall, he walked towards the marble doors and idly opened them ajar but before he could proceed. He was interrupted.

"oh...and...Yestran...don't...fail me....I trust you...don't let me change my...mind." he warned gravely through coughs. The general was slightly shocked but replied coolly.

"Yes sire. I will come by later to give you your daily dose." uttered the gentleman as he proceeded in his departure.
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Well how was it?

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Razz

I loved it. It was awsome, and it had alot of detail in it. I hope to see more of your wrighting

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Supiaynage

Awesome just Awesome your fic is REALLY GOOD i love it!!! i can't wait to see the z-warriors battle the servent!

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Akatsuki_Encore

Nor bad or neither fantastic, just a good fiction with great characters.
I like the way the story seems to progress...and I hope that you will
manage to write the fighting good.

So I can't rate, but it's pretty good. Keep it up.

.Osmond_Fan

Very detailled so far, well done predator

the predator

sorry for the long wait. Got alot on my hands. And if this chap isn't good its because im kinda rushed today. Oh and sorry supiayn, the general won't be making a scene for awhile. His lower in command will start. Anyway thx for the comments

Chapter 1: Expectations:Part I


'damn' thought Weye as he furrowed his eyebrows in frustration. The young determined child had been trying to land a blow on his comanion all day but has been utterly unsuccessful.

"Man this is boring" complained young Goshi as he phased yet again out of Weye's slow basic attack.

It was a wonderful sunny day and the two had been trying to spar in a clearing beyond West city.

Weye tried once again to nail a blow on his companion but the saiya-jin phased behind him and elbowed him softly on his back tripping him. "When does Jyron get here?" Goshi thought out loud.

Weye decided to go for a different tactic as he stood up rubbing his head. "Hey Goshi look its your dad." said Weye deviously , pointing at the sky.

The plan worked and Goshi turned looked high up. 'Now's my chance' thought Weye happily as he launched a great kick to the side of Goshi.

To Weye's awe and amazement Goshi didn't budge and the next action infuriated Weye deeply.

"Hey Weye, my dad ain't there." said Goshi turning around innocently.

"Wha-Wha?" stuttered Weye , apparently still in shock of the lack of effect his attack took on Goshi.

"Hey Weye what's wrong?" asked Goshi raising an eyebrow.

"H-How did you do that?" stammered Weye with his small mouth wide open.

"Do what?" replied Goshi in confusion.

"Block my attack."

"huh? What attack?" Goshi replied assuming that this was some prank of Weye's.

"Didn't you feel the kick I fired to your side?" Weye questioned and to his deep horror Goshi shrugged stupidly.

Goshi looked at Weye's shocked face and chuckled a little.

Suddenly out of the bushes leaped another slightly larger boy and planted himself on
Goshi. The two exchanged sonic blows and warmed up whilst young Weye moped away in sadness of his failure.

Weye staggered his weight on to a shady tree and knelt down, his back against it. He sighed in depression and let his tears fall out. His heart had been shattered once moreo as failure consumed his sensitive soul.

The 5-year old fiddled with his spiky hair as he thought and remembered all those times he had been rejected and outclassed by the two saiya-jin fighters.

"pft dumb monkeys." mumbled Weye angrily as another tear slid down his cheek.

The sad child shifted his thoughts elsewhere as he forsaw his upcoming training session with his foster father.

"I hope daddy teaches me some new tricks, then I'll show those dumb hamsters." said Weye , encouraging himself.

The content child rubbed his eyes for one final time as he smiled and went to rejoin his play mates.

Weye entered through the bushes in which Jyron first came through. he settled down there and watched his companions' white auras flared up as they sweat themselves a river.

The fight had apparently gotten serious now and the two boys were eyeing each other carefully.

Jyron hopped up into the air with great agility and soared down like a hawk but alas he crashed as Goshi phased above him.

The two wasted no time and charged at each other with ultimate force as they exchanged heavy blows.

Their small knuckles emitted large sonic waves that threw a cracking sound.

The spar went on for 15 minutes but in the end Jyron remained victor.

The two sat down their little bodies heavy with tire, but they were content and happy.
Weye strolled over and joined them. The two were covered in sweat and they breathed heavy to gather oxygen in their thirsty lungs.

"Hey Weye....where'd ya go?" asked Jyron who had missed his young friend's presence.

"Oh....nowhere." replied Weye innocently.

"You should've seen the way I sent Jyron into a tree. Its a shame you wandered off Weye, you would've laughed so hard. He had twigs stuck in his ears and his eyes went wierd. I laughed so hard I almost wet my shortsies." said Goshi smirking with glee as Jyron glared at him.

Weye smiled and chuckled at the thought of the six-year old with twigs in his ears.

"Its a shame I missed it." chuckled Weye as he smirked at Jyron.

It was a serene scene, The three small children argumenting and conversing with each other. They talked a great deal and laughed a lot too.

Jyron discussed with authority as his black hair flickered on and on. It was facing downwards like his father's but there were large spikes at the ends.

Goshi teased his companions a lot as he ruffled his spiky stiff hair. His hair resembled Weye's in a way but Weye's spikes strangely pointed backwards whilst Goshi's pointed forwards. Another difference was that Goshi's spikes were far larger than Weye's, even though the inconfident human's spikes were large as well.

They resembled each other and liked each other. They were like brothers more than best friends. They shared everything together and quarreled as well.

The three would soon meet fates that they never expected but for now their innocence and joy lives on as they make their way up like all great warriors do.....

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sorry if it wasn't what you expected. I know...boring chapter but we'll get to the action later on. Just stay tuned and again if this part is lacking any describtive material its because of my troubled thoughts. I am hasty today so don't jump all over me.

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Akatsuki_Encore

Actually I had thought of something a lil' better, and it's a little boring,
but despite that: You've got a great use of words and this is pretty good. Can't wait till the fighting part arrives, lol....

.Osmond_Fan

Don't say that Predator, it was another great chapter

the predator

thx majinkei but i know it was boring. The first chapter who has two parts left or something like that is gonna be boring but i have to write them so that the whole fic can shape up. These parts are gonna circle around Weye alot but Jyron and Goshi have major roles coming up but its gonna be mostly about the current great warriors not the kids. sorta like the saiyan saga.

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.Byakuya

Good i have been looking forward to this

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Chapter 1: Expectations: Part II

Last time on The Modern Generation Weye was outclassed by his companions and their might. He pondered away and depression filled the young child's heart. But afterwards he recovered and joined his companions. What is expected from them in the future? Find out now as the chapter continues....

The three boys talked fluently as time passed but hunger struck the three children and they didn't hesitate to point it out.

"No way daddy can beat Jyron's daddy with one kick !" Goshi argued.

"He cannot ! I've seen Jyron's daddy fight in some home videos and he kicked your daddy's butt !" replied Weye sticking his tongue out in the process.

"Hey guys I'm hungry. What do you say we go to the barbeque and get a hot dog or something?" Jyron moaned holding his angry stomach.

Then a large growl erupted which made Weye jump.

"What was that?" stammered Weye as he moved into fighting position. He couldn't be scared now. He will be much braver than his companions yes he will.

"Heh I guess I'm hungry too." said Goshi grinning wildly.

Weye sighed in exasperation. "Come on let's get a hot dog." said Jyron motioning them forward as Weye and Goshi eagerly followed him , each licking their lips in desire to feel the mouth watering taste of meat on their tongues.

The three young playmates made their way to the backyard of the Capsule corp mansion and walked through the crowd of people that were known as the Z fighters, some as former Z fighters. They occasionally bumped into one or two (only Jyron had the decency to apologize) but finally made their way to the core of the party.

"Gran'ma Gran'ma we're hungry !" cried Goshi and Jyron as they tugged on their once glamerous grandmother's skirt. Their stomachs also agreed as they made a loud echoing growl. So loud that the whole party of people looked around to see who it was.

Jyron and Goshi smiled nervously and then turned to their grandmother. "Here you go boys. Do you want one Weye?" she asked the unnoticable boy. "Yes please." he said politely to the female genius. Her hair was grey now and her eyes had become greyer. Her face was wrinkled and she had pores around her eyes, she was much kinder than before. She was no longer obnoxious except to Vegeta who needed a firm hand to control.

The three playmates wolfed down their hot dogs. But the saiyans' apetites were larger than young Weye's. So he wandered away once more.


'I wonder where my daddy is.' thought the boy his spikes brushing by Yajirobe's oversized stomach.

Young Weye trotted through the crowd and finally saw the three eyed man conversing with Yamcha and Marron. Yamcha had let his hair grow again but it was less spikier than before. His stomach had grown and he let himself go a little. His wife
was as attractive as ever, she was much more mature now but still as innocent as ever. Yamcha was proud to have such a caring wife.

"Daddy Daddy Daddy" exclaimed Weye hugging his foster father preciously as if he was going to be stolen away from him. Tien hadn't changed a bit only he slouched a little now and his aura had decreased but he was still the same diligent fighter we all know and love.

"Hey Weye." exclaimed Tien as he lifted the boy up high into the air. Their bond was beyond any father and son. He showed more love to his foster son than Goku or Vegeta ever showed to theirs and Weye doubled it and returned it.

"Are you having fun playing with Jyron and Goshi?" asked Tien playfully.

"Yeah but I wantcha to teach me some new tricks so that I can beat them." he chirped in ambition.

Meanwhile Yamcha was dumbfounded by the way his former comrade was acting. He had never seen this side of Tien in his life and he doubted that even his closest companion, Chiaotsu had ever seen it until recently.

Tien on the other hand didn't feel any change at all. He loved Weye more than life itself and he would do anything ot make his happy and satisfied. He didn't care if Weye was his foster son, he had never once thought of him that way.

Finally after half and hour had passed Tien released the child and continued his previous conversation.

Weye trotted back to Jyron and Goshi as they sat and munched on a couple of apples.

At that moment Vegeta, the saiyan prince, once glorious entered the scene. He let his hair grow back to its original form and shaved his mustashe. His hair had gone partially grey, a few grey hairs here and there. However his aura still emitted authority and pride something that Jyron had partially inherited. He walked with great
displeasure on his face and walked to his wife and the group of people she was talking to.

The three children had stopped eating and stood in fear of the noble prince. Even his grandsons were afraid of their relative. His high temper made their little hearts tremble with anxiety.

The adults discussed and soon their discussion led to the three young prospects.

"They're progressing well. I bet they'll even become greater than us." commented Trunks.

"hah I wouldn't count on it boy! At their age you and Kakarot's second born were already super saiya-jins. As for the human well....let's just say old baldy here (kurillin's hair fell out) would look like Frieza next to him. I'm disgraced to call them our successors." spat Vegeta. He had become ruder ever since Goku died, due to the frustration of failure to exceed the third class's power.

"I dunno, I think they might grow strong in the future." retorted kurillin.

"hah what do you know?! That's what you said about that kakarott's granddaughter and look at her now. She nothing compaed to Trunks and Kakarott's boy." Vegeta said finalizing his judgement as they all nodded in agreement.

Little did they know Weye had overheard their discussion was and was most displeased. He had eavesdropped eagerly and was hurt by Vegeta's predicaments. Jyron and Goshi were too busy munching their apples to hear anything so Weye decided to keep it that way. He was looking forward to his next training session so that he could prove Vegeta wrong......

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Yeah yeah i know BOOORING chapter. Don't deny it majinkei or I'll snap you out of it. Anyway one more boring chapter to go. The purpose of this part is to emit the pride and expectations they had for the prospects. Anyway one more part to go in this chapter until things start to lighten up a bit.

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Joot

Nice fic Predator, haven't heard from you in a while

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