DBZ Revenge (a Sprite Comic) - Page 2

RandomPenguin · 04-09-2008

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Originally Posted by Luke Groundwalker

There's a couple of things wrong with these comics coming from an experienced sprite comicer:
1. It's trying to be serious
2. No backgrounds, and panels aren't aligned properly
3. No use of good grammar and spelling (of course, it doesn't have to be if it's part of the joke or something)
4. Action scenes have potential and can be pulled off extremely well in sprite comics, but there's a lack of actual focus on each of the attacks that would make such things more entertaining

For pros, though?
-Uses the best kind of Dragonball Z sprites (like seriously, Dragonball Z sprites tend to look like shit)
-As said action scenes have potential

Yeah, that about covers it.

as i have seen your comic... on serebii.net i have to say you do have a point. but my comic is not trying to be serious and it just something i do to pass the time it's not at all professional and another thing is that it is done in ms paint because i find that it takes less time then photoshop...

thanks for the feedback though

Luke Groundwalker · 04-11-2008

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Originally Posted by RandomPenguin

as i have seen your comic... on serebii.net i have to say you do have a point. but my comic is not trying to be serious and it just something i do to pass the time it's not at all professional and another thing is that it is done in ms paint because i find that it takes less time then photoshop...

thanks for the feedback though

Oh man, are you serious? Man I haven't done that shit in a long time.

I have more that I didn't post on Serebii, that were, like, actual improvements on my older work (most of my older work was just pure random-fag humor). I'll have to dig them up as I don't know where they are due to stopping at approximately a year ago.

No I don't do sprite comics anymore. Thought about it, but I never pulled off any ideas, although I'm still experienced in it and spriting in general.

RandomPenguin · 04-12-2008

anyways for other people i havn't been doing comics because well i got my 360 back but they will be done at a really slow rate though

LG-i did these a year ago as well (apart from the latest 3)

burningvegeta · 04-12-2008

Oh these were something to pass the time eh? Oh well I know the feeling. Anyway they were good. Shame there going to be done at a slow rate, though it don't matter.