Design West City. [Contest]

[Island of 1,000 Condiments]

Look at Kami's Pub. Instead of a floating castle in the middle of no where, it's a floating bar above West City. D=

[Pyro Bastard]

And mine is a building on the west side of West City.

[Island of 1,000 Condiments]

Listen.

I'm not here to argue. Your design would be good for a general RPG, but this isn't one. If you want to discuss this further, go to PM.


@SSJ5Goku: Rock Lee doesn't exist in the DB/Z universe, so the last bit of your Bar has to go.

[Nikushimi]

Originally Posted by Island of 1,000 Condiments

No, I mean, it's against the board rules. D=

Fixed.(?)

[Island of 1,000 Condiments]

Sounds epic and all, but I would also like to point out what I pointed out to Pyro.

It needs a DB/Z theme. D=

[Pyro Bastard]

Better?

[Nikushimi]

Originally Posted by Island of 1,000 Condiments

Sounds epic and all, but I would also like to point out what I pointed out to Pyro.

It needs a DB/Z theme. D=

It's called "Kami's Pub". D=

Many "powerful warriors" go there.

It's situated in West City (supposedly).



D=

[Pyro Bastard]

Lol, now you know how I felt. Just add in something that pertains to the DBZ franchise (like bein' the only building Goku didn't demolish when drunk).

[Island of 1,000 Condiments]

@Pyro: Shenron's... Balls...?


@Nikushimi: Shenron's... Balls...? Wtf. What Pyro said. Give it a theme. Naming it Kami's Pub fixes nothing. Give it some epic.



Anyway, yours is, uh, fine, Pyro.

[Pyro Bastard]

Exactly, something epic. Like mine. >_>

Anyways Island, you can alter the title a little if you want. XD

[Masked_Felix]

Shenron's Balls sound appealing, given the multi floor design and what not. Perhaps the reason why it can't be typically found by the normal folk could be expanded on.

[Lazlo]

Good lord Pyro, it's a small bar not a 4 star hotel. Why not just stick a minimall in there too?

Sounds like it was designed by an architect with ADD.

[Pyro Bastard]

It was only gonna be two floors, then it expanded into five and then Minion resulted in me expanding it two more. Anyways, I just added most of what happens in the ar. This way it's just spread out, described, and not looking like one long ass bar.

[Nikushimi]

Originally Posted by Island of 1,000 Condiments

@Pyro: Shenron's... Balls...?


@Nikushimi: Shenron's... Balls...? Wtf. What Pyro said. Give it a theme. Naming it Kami's Pub fixes nothing. Give it some epic.



Anyway, yours is, uh, fine, Pyro.

Fixed nao?

I even gave a little background information on the bartender, who is suddenly able to kick arse. >_>

[Masked_Felix]

I'll give it a shot, even though I remember next to nothing about the place.

Battle Arena:

West City holds many sights and wonders to visit, but none compare to the immaculate Battle Arena. The grand structure stands in the middle of the city, able to house tens of thousands of viewers for the spectacular events such as the World Martial Arts tournament. Saiyans, Demons, Humans, Changlings, Mutants, Androids, Dragons and even some of the Kai have fought battles in the various tournaments that are held, as well as private duels. As such, the fame of such a place has spread far and wide. Warriors come from the galaxy over on a pilgrimage to the sacred arena that ends not with meditation and prayer, but the clash of fists and the cries of battle. The large facility also has grounds to host individuals wishing to spar aside from the main arena, as well as training equipment of the highest caliber for warriors who want to increase their skills.