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Old 05-11-2008   #1 (permalink)
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Default The Arekusu Chronicles #1

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Saga I:
Chapter 1

The defeat of Frieza and his Father King Cold left their planet without a ruler. Their last hope was Cooler the 'supposed' last heir to the Royal Family and the last remaning hope for their planet. After his defeat at the hands of the now 'legendary' Son Goku, the Icer planet fell into chaos.

Icers of all variety staked their claims to the throne, each one claiming to be 'a son of the royal family. 'However, deep in the frigid cold of space their indeed survived another member of the family.

Outcast when he was just five years of age he learned to survive on his own. Traveling to various planets looking for more power, more strength, so that one day he may return and overturn his planet, becoming emporer of all.

Learning of the downfall of the family he returns to his home planet crash landing in a deserted section of the planet. His ship, now nothing more than scrap metal, glows in red in contrast to the rest of the environment.

"They deserted me, they abandonded me, and know I will rule them all!
Tremble in fear, tremble all of you!" He shouts into the wilderness.

He lifts off the ground and rushes toward the direction of the palace. Landing right at the doors he locks eyes with the guards at the door.

"None shall pass under the supreme order of Emporer Frigid." The guards state. They cross their spears in the shape of an X.

"Oh? Is that so?" He takes three steps back and outstreches his arm. He lifts his palm up and begins to charge energy. His hand begins to glow purple, then the energy gets bigger until it consumes his entire hand. A black lightning develops around it. The ground cracks and sediment/rock begins to lift toward the sky. "Huaaaaaaaaah!" He yells as he lets loose the energy blast to connect with the guard to the left.

Smoke flies from the impact crater and everything that once stood there is destroyed.

Stepping over the rubble he procedes to enter the castle doors.

"Pathetic creatures, I am amazed at their lack of power. They might as well crawl under a rock and die."
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Chapter 2

Arekusu passes through the palace killing all who oppose him. He finally reaches the main throne room...

"You...Frigid...Die!" As he said the words he pointed a finger at the chest of the Emporer and unleashed a powerful beam. "Death Beam Hah!"

The Emporer springs to life from his chair. He removes his crown and cloak and before Arekusu stands a figure remarkably similar to Frieza's Final Form.

"Aha, do you think that you can actually beat me? I am the Emporer of the entire race and I will not let myself be beat by a...a...a reject." Frigid said with a smirk. With those words said he begins to power up...the ground cracks and a crater forms around him. His aura now a deep purple explodes from him causing rock to fly up and dark purple lightning arise. His body morphs as he achieves 100%. His muscles bulge, and he gets up to twice as big. "What do you think of me now?"

"Your pathetic, you actually think that you can beat me?" He said with confidence. "He's stronger than I thought, I might actually have to enter my full strength form to defeat him" He thought.

Frigid screams off the ground and toward our hero at blinding speeds.

*Crack!* Arekusu's armor broke from tremendous punch that connect with his stomach. Frigid steps back and Arekusu begins to cough up blood.

Angry at himself for not moving faster Arekusu enters his Full Strength mode. His body bulges outward and he gains 40 lbs of muscle mass. "Although, not a big increas it's significant enough to defeat this poser." He thought.

They both exploded forward and collided in the middle of the throne room. The resultant shockwave blasted the tile floor away and knocked bystanders to the walls.

"Take this! Hahhaha" He yells as he knocks Frigid backwards and begins a rapid ki blast assault on him. The dust clears and there is Frigid bloody and with several ki blast holes going through his body. Arekusu's body goes down returning back to base form.

*Cough* Blood splatters on the ground... *Gasp* "Damn you Arekusu, damn y..." He manages to say as he fades away.
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Not bad writing there, but the plot is kinda...lame. Frieza has been way overdone and there is no original angle in this. Still though its just started so I can't be up to judging it yet. Keep it up!
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Well my fav character has always been Frieza for some reason, so I thought that writing about a remaining member of the royal family would be kinda cool.

Plus, There will be a special surprise in the future.
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