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Make in bloody, intense, and include a bunch of cuss words.
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Make in bloody, intense, and include a bunch of cuss words.
^Demonic sodomy, too.

Mm-mm. Can't get enough o' that demonic sodomy...
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No. There is enough cousin sodomy as it is. =/
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OH GOOD GOD! D:

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Spam enough? jeez
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It's excellent. Leave it as is so it will retain it's classy style. Actually, it may be worth it to make the chapters a little shorter. Bite size has it's merits. Or, in a witty computer homonym, byte size.
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It's excellent. Leave it as is so it will retain it's classy style. Actually, it may be worth it to make the chapters a little shorter. Bite size has it's merits. Or, in a witty computer homonym, byte size.
What do you mean by " classy style" . Thanks any way for replying and giving your opinon.

Actully this fic is more ancipeated than my other one, not like im doing it fot that i m just saying.

Oh yeah and look for my name around the " Creative writing section
. I have a 3 dbz fan fics planed and 2 naruto fan fics.

Revenge: Sasuke uchiha is just starting out at the ninja acdemey.
One day after coming home, he discovers his famliy has been muradered.
Ill give a hint: It's not who you think it is. Once there, he meets a kid named naruto uzimaki and much more. They become best friends and watch out for each other's backs.

High school life in the leaf village: Sakura and friends have been transfred to a boarding school. The problem is that Sasuke and friends also transferd to that same school. Not admitting there feelings, the group does constant pranks on each other. What they dont realize is that there both going to a sleepover planed by neji. Will they admit there feelings?

Love sickness: Trunks briefs and Goten Son go to the same middle school.
Being together since they were 5 , it seemed nothing could break there friendship. That is intill a new girl transfers to their middle school and trunks falls in love with her. When things go to far , Bulma takes him to the doctor. After seeing a little someone with her, Goten and Trunks compete to try to win her heart. Who will win? Trunks or goten?

Demise of the earth: When a space pirate and crew comes to earth, the Z fighters aren't worried. That is untill the crew capture there beloved ones
and plans to destroy the earth. Join goku, vegeta,trunks,goten,piccolo, and Zia on the verge of saving there beloved and the earth.

The Z fighter's do jail time: When a officer arrets Goku and his family along with a sneky trunks and vegeta, they are put into a jail cell. When they are forced to fight for thier freedom, the Z fighters must plan a break out if they want to see the sky again before they lose it.

Save him!: A code lyoko fanfic.
When a teen William dunbar goes to lyoko, he gets traped and controled by a virus. The group dosent realize it untill william imprisions yumi
and the group has no chocie but to deactiviate the tower before a fast william tries to tell the government.

Yeah ill be busy for a while....i want to finsh Ken 10 Vs Kevin 11 : fight to the finsh ! though. So 10 more chapters...
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What do you mean by " classy style" . Thanks any way for replying and giving your opinon.

Actully this fic is more ancipeated than my other one, not like im doing it fot that i m just saying.

Oh yeah and look for my name around the " Creative writing section
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Revenge: Sasuke uchiha is just starting out at the ninja acdemey.
One day after coming home, he discovers his famliy has been muradered.
Ill give a hint: It's not who you think it is. Once there, he meets a kid named naruto uzimaki and much more. They become best friends and watch out for each other's backs. Sounds too much like the manga.

High school life in the leaf village: Sakura and friends have been transfred to a boarding school. The problem is that Sasuke and friends also transferd to that same school. Not admitting there feelings, the group does constant pranks on each other. What they dont realize is that there both going to a sleepover planed by neji. Will they admit there feelings? Sounds really gay

Love sickness: Trunks briefs and Goten Son go to the same middle school.
Being together since they were 5 , it seemed nothing could break there friendship. That is intill a new girl transfers to their middle school and trunks falls in love with her. When things go to far , Bulma takes him to the doctor. After seeing a little someone with her, Goten and Trunks compete to try to win her heart. Who will win? Trunks or goten? " "

Demise of the earth: When a space pirate and crew comes to earth, the Z fighters aren't worried. That is untill the crew capture there beloved ones
and plans to destroy the earth. Join goku, vegeta,trunks,goten,piccolo, and Zia on the verge of saving there beloved and the earth. Meh.

The Z fighter's do jail time: When a officer arrets Goku and his family along with a sneky trunks and vegeta, they are put into a jail cell. When they are forced to fight for thier freedom, the Z fighters must plan a break out if they want to see the sky again before they lose it. Couldn't the Z fighters just force there way out considering they can destroy planets and stuff.

Save him!: A code lyoko fanfic.
When a teen William dunbar goes to lyoko, he gets traped and controled by a virus. The group dosent realize it untill william imprisions yumi
and the group has no chocie but to deactiviate the tower before a fast william tries to tell the government. I know nothing about Code Lyoko.

Yeah ill be busy for a while....i want to finsh Ken 10 Vs Kevin 11 : fight to the finsh ! though. So 10 more chapters...
My two cents.
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LOL....i dont get it... I dont know what yout talking about...sorry
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Chapter 3 Ken 10 returns part 2

Danielle smirked" Yeah how could we! she said sarcasticly
Devin smirked back " Yeah whatever just fix me and Ken something.
" I'll be sure too ...haha"Danielle and Ken were cracking up

Danielle gives Ken introctions " Ok were are the eggs?
Ken raced to the refrigerator "Here they are...." he replied
" Ok now...here are the spices...a little bit of salt and now we wait.
Danielle smiled
That was it for Devin who happened to be in the living room, he planned to sneak a peak at the food.
" No way they are keeping me from there...uh oh! Devin tried to stop himself before he bumped into danielle.
" And were do you think your going, mister? Danielle eyed him
" Uh.....i dont know? Devin closed his eyes
" KEN!!!!!! Breakfeats ready! dainny yelled

ok thats it i promise prt 3 will be longer, ok guys?
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Chapter 3 Ken 10 returns part 3
Devin jumped from the couch where sat 4 minutes ago rubbing his head.
" Hehe., it sure smells good! devin said sniffing
" Well i'm glad you think that because you keep on going , you aint getting nothing.
Danielle wasn't mean to any one but devin. She just natraully hated him.
Ken ran down the stairs " Wow, you made it impossible to smell Ken commented
" What's wrong with him? Oh..... danielle wishpered in ken's ear.
Devin went and got his hoverboard and jumped of the hill when outside.
" Well guess i'll just have to find some fast food..or something. devin twisted and jumped of the board to land on the ground
A explosion shot up the sky and a fire started from a nearby building
" Augh, im not ken but i can help somehow. Devin looked around for a fire hydrant
" I'm in luck ! Devin puts he hands on the fire hydrantand his body turnsblue
" Hmm....this is strange, but whatever. Devin rushes inside
The fire was just a trap to hopefully atract Ken, but instead Devin fell right into it.
Suddenly a cage shot down shocking Devin. Devin puts his hands on the bars and absorbs it and then tries to bust out but can't .
" c,mon....wait! Devin pushed his watch and the Ken' s omnitrix beeped
" Devin's in trouble! Lets go! Ken and Danielle run to the door
Jumping out off into the highways, Ken and Danielle hit there watches
A white green alien appeared which had tentacles with spikes. It was mudium height
and had green eyes.
A white blue alien appeared and it was meduim hight and had white and blue legs with a blue and white suit.
Silyvian looked at Cloner " So...a clonevian..agh ! She pouted as they landed
Cloner winked " Whatever babycakes! Cloner happened to be a wise guy but was serious when the time called for it.
" Your lucky i'm not in my solid form! Cloner winked again
" Chill out honey , want some fires with that? Slviaian chased Cloner who was running very fast " Now....lets see! Ah! Cloner slashed one of hios tenecles-hands at a street pole and swung around and swooped up the kid from the ledge
" Thanks Ben 10,000 ! the girl hugged Cloner
" Actully im Ken his son...Cloner sighed
" Really? I never seen that alien before...ya sure? the girl eyed Cloner
" Noone elese in the universe owns another omnitrix- Ouch! Slyvian punched cloner in the arm
" Who's that? though you said none elses had tha watch thingy! The girl pouted
Cloner let out a sigh as it was hopeless wasting any time with the girl
" Um excuse me but me and my friend here gotta go, ok? Cloner said in the best polite way possible
" Hmm...lets go hold on. slyvian had a vison where Devin was
" Ok Cloner swing me over there s fast as possible!
" Sure anything for my wubby dubby! Cloner actully strectched back far when Slyiana tried to hit him
Cloner made what he did best - clones . The clones swung Cloner over to where a de transformed Danielle sat
" I still feel like i wanna hit someone....Danielle got up
Cloner turned green and then dissappeared back to ken " Yeah...that someone was cloner. Ken ran inside as soon as Danielle dived at him and then he helped her up.
Chapter 4: Cloner and slvia : Crazy team!

Devin tried to break out but it was hopeless " Let me go!
A dark figure appeared . Two more apprared .
A flash came and Devin was set free .
" There...i kinda regret it but your my....friend said Danielle
" Yeah whatever...shouldnt you be hero or something? Devin eyed them
" Why? Does it matter ? we saved you. Ken said a younger ben image was over him
" No reason.....haha! Devin laughed
" Somethings odd....Ken said again a ben image shadowed him
" Yeah you are acting weired. Danielle eyed him
" Um nothing, lets get out of here before - cold!
" I knew it ...i scanned you but your levels are to high for a mutant.
Lighlar lifted the Andriod up in the air and smashed it in the air then on the wall.
Xlavier appeared when ken hit the button " mmm.. what can i do?
" A excelent choice. Your a Pyromiter . You have control of fire and ice .
Lightlar turned around to answer
" I -see-you-figured-me-out-. But-you-won't-get-away-with- beoom!
Xlavier put his hands on the ground and then when it had the fake it inclosed it a pool of fire
" Give it up! Tell us where the real devin is! Xlavier strated to close the pool of fire
"Ok-The-one-you-seek-is-in-the-third-room-to the right. Xlavier droped the fake
" Hmm...i'll scan him to see if it knows any more information . Lightlar scanned
" Ken, Kevin 11 is alive.
The watches beeped and Danielle and Ken ran to where the fake told them devin is.
" Was that thing telling the truth? ken asked
"I don't know. One thing is for sure- Kevin wants us here.
Danielle looked at her watch. It was green while ken's was white.
The duo reached the door but Ken cantionlessly recomened they didn't make a move till the watches recharged since it would take some serious sneaking to get inside.
Finaly , the duo turned their heroes and snuck inside the vent.
Cloner was Ken's choice because he was he wasnt very big but not tiny sized . Danielle picked Slyvian because she could change her size.
" Alright, i think its there Cloner whispered
" Be quiet...they can hear, and we cant take them even with that clonning ability. Slyvia smirked
Cloner defended himself " Lets just keep moving hotshot, babycakes ain't the coolest word, eh?
" The vent ends here. You'll have to go down there and distract them while i go and get devin. We'll meet up at the outside corridor. Cloner noddded even though his race was more wise cracking then wise but he wasn't an idiot
Cloner busted the door open and slide down which he didnt even realize he did " Hmm...i should clone myself. Im not very familiar with this alien.
Cloner's clones nodded
Meanwhile, slvia was having problems of her own. The entrance was blocked off since it was guarded and to get in you would need to have your dna scanned. And since the whole gang was scanned it was imposibble to get in without a valid dna sample of a emplolee.
" Hmm...there has go to be a way...lightlar would have been a better chocie but for some reason, she was blocked out. But there has go to be a way.... A vison came to slyvia and she blinked when it was over.
Knowing what to do , she turned liquid form and slide to a guard making him slip and he hit the dna sampler. Quickly turning liquid form , she shot up the wall when another guard came which was MUCH bigger than the one before.

Cloner Had to fight his way and use stealthly manuvers to distract them
Boom!!!
A explosion hit Cloner blasting him into a wall.
His race didnt really go good with anything hot so it burned his skin
Cloner resembled himself and then climed a wall like spider man would and he shot his tentacle which hit a guard. Cloner shot back up the wall and back to using his newfound power: Wall crawing. He crawled the wall till he saw a guard and while sticking to the wall , his feet turned into a tentecle and knocked the guard back .

Slyvia saw devin and she still in lquid form slid across the wall devin ripped the tape off his mouth " Well...it's you.
" Shut up. Just tell me how did you get into this ? Slvia moved closer to devin
" I saw a fire and i wanted to stop it and then i heard a cry for help so i helped.
A flash appeared. Lightlar appeared " Hmm....i know what they are doing.
Devin, there trying to use you dna to bring your father back. Other thing is , someone intellegent is behind this. Only one that knows about the omnitrix. I think i know. Its.....Negiative 10 .
Aalien ran through the door.It was shock slash.
" Im not sure....scan him.
" It's him. The dna in this jar explains it. It's impossible if it's that fake, unless the used his dna to create the clone.
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