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Old 03-18-2008   #1 (permalink)
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Default MFG One-Shot Competition

Alright, this section is getting a little stale, so I'm throwing another contest. The requirement for entering this contest is to write a One-Shot fiction, whatever style, theme etc. Original or from an existing anime or other world (book, movie etc), it doesn't matter. Limitations are as follows:

1) It has to be new, as in, not posted in MFG before.

2) While your work can also be a part of a greater story, what you post as an entry must be able to stand alone as an individual story.

3) Your entry has to be between 1,000 and 10,000 words long. Nothing below, nothing above.

And now, for the interesting catch of this competition.

Upon entering, you will have to post a sentence. It can be virtually anything (within logic, of course - you can't post a bunch of random nonsense), however, it has to be something that doesn't relate to any existing universe (example, you can't write "Kisame's Samehada sliced right through Naruto's chakra"). You have one week to do this. When the week is concluded, I will randomly assign each person who enters one of the phrases submitted (A person can easily end up with his own sentence as well, so be careful what you post ;>_>). Each writer will have to use that sentence in the opening paragraph of his entry.

As I said, you have one week to enter and post the phrase you want (until the week ends, you can change it as many times as you wish). Once this is done, you are going to have plenty of time to plan and write your One-Shot.

To evaluate the entries and decide on a winner, I will assign two members who want to be the judges. Just post here if you're interested, but you have to have proven that you yourself are a decently skilled writer in order to be selected as a judge.

Part one of the contest, the submission period, ends one week from today - Tuesday the 25th.

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Entrants:

Name: Null
Sentence Provided: "The Wizard looked down into the deep swirling abyss, wondering just where exactly the fish had gotten to."
Sentence Assigned: ?

Name: Shirogetsu
Sentence Provided: "I looked into his stone cold eyes, it appeared I was too late, he had already been long dead, I wasn't quick enough to the kill."
Sentence Assigned: ?

Name: Island of 1,000 Condiments
Sentence Provided: "The midnight sky sparkled in blood as my blade tore itself through my victim's throat."
Sentence Assigned: ?

Name: The Electron Zone
Sentence Provided: "Anger is a gift that no one can take away, it is possesed and controlled by one; only you can handle the life that you bear."
Sentence Assigned: ?

Name: Ultimate_Gohan
Sentence Provided: "The quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog."
Sentence Assigned: ?

Name: Kurushimi
Sentence Provided: "The final rays of the sun dissappeared behind the horizon, leaving the landscape in utter darkness."
Sentence Assigned: ?

Name: Xyex
Sentence Provided: "The only difference between reality and fantasy is your point of view."
Sentence Assigned: ?

Name: Amerowolf
Sentence Provided: "The bird who would be born, must first break the world down around him."
Sentence Assigned: ?

Name: Eragon
Sentence Provided: "The snowflakes danced as they descended, their purity collapsing upon the filth below."
Sentence Assigned: ?

Name: Gosan
Sentence Provided: "His eyes bulged out and his jaw dropped, staring at the piece of paper in disbelief."
Sentence Assigned: ?

Name: Beautiful Illusion
Sentence Provided:"His hand covered her hip, blade shimmering with a strange fear in his hand, and a gaping crimson hole where her heart had once been."
Sentence Assigned: ?
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I'll enter this, just for fun. My sentence:



"The Wizard looked down into the deep swirling abyss, wondering just where exactly the fish had gotten to."
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I'll enter this, just for fun.

As will I. My intention isn't to win either. Just to see if my imagination will hit a slump and be shitty or awesome.

My sentence: "I looked into his stone cold eyes, it appeared I was too late, he had already been long dead, I wasn't quick enough to the kill."
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"The midnight sky sparkled in blood as my blade tore itself through my victim's throat."

Hmph.
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I'll try...i guess

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Sentence: "The quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog."
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Yes. Lets write sentences that aren't grammatically correct!

In a writing competition. D=
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Meh, I guess I'll join.

Sentence: "The final rays of the sun dissappeared behind the horizon, leaving the landscape in utter darkness."
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Haha. This could be fun, and a nice break from my mountains of fanfiction (possibly). I already see a couple sentences I wouldn't mind getting. XD

Alright, my sentence: "The only difference between reality and fantasy is your point of view."
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Sure why not.

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Well, surprisingly enough, we hit 8 entries in a day. I don't think there are too many more people active here, so I may start assigning sentences before the week is over (while not preventing more people from entering, of course), so that you can all start working on your entries. But I'll give it a few more days.

Just in case you were wondering, you can do slight edits to the sentence given to you if it doesn't fit your narrative style / point of view (ie, changing present to past tense, first person to third person - and vice versa - etc), but that's as far as you can go with alterations.
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I'll enter, if thats alright. I think I need to get some practice at writing again..

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Nice twist in the competition JAIF, this should be fun (and hopefully motivational for me).

Sentence = His eyes bulged out and his jaw dropped, staring at the piece of paper in disbelief.
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I think ... I'll enter this - I haven't been writing lately at all, due to school ... but I figure I could do it again. I don't wanna slip out completely, so I'll do this.

"His hand covered her hip, blade shimmering with a strange fear in his hand, and a gaping crimson hole where her heart had once been."

I've been listening to A7X too much ... xD
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Well, for now, eleven is a good number. By all means, if anyone else wants to join, you are free to do so, and on next Friday, I'll randomize the sentences from those who joined past this point. But, for those that have joined now, I'll give out the randomed sentences so you can begin writing. Don't worry about time - there's going to be plenty. Remember, you must include the sentence you are given in the opening paragraph of your entry, and you can only edit them to fit your narrating style, nothing else. Below is who gets whose sentence, and what that sentence is. I'll update those into the main post shortly.

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Null gets Island of 1,000 Condiments' sentence.
"The midnight sky sparkled in blood as my blade tore itself through my victim's throat."

Shirogetsu gets Eragon's sentence.
"The snowflakes danced as they descended, their purity collapsing upon the filth below."

Island of 1,000 Condiments gets Kurushimi's sentence.
"The final rays of the sun dissappeared behind the horizon, leaving the landscape in utter darkness."

The Electron Zone gets Ultimate_Gohan's sentence.
"The quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog."

Ultimate_Gohan gets Gosan's sentence.
"His eyes bulged out and his jaw dropped, staring at the piece of paper in disbelief."

Kurushimi gets Null's sentence.
"The Wizard looked down into the deep swirling abyss, wondering just where exactly the fish had gotten to."

Xyex gets Beautiful Illusion's sentence.
"His hand covered her hip, blade shimmering with a strange fear in his hand, and a gaping crimson hole where her heart had once been."

Amerowolf gets Shirogetsu's sentence.
"I looked into his stone cold eyes, it appeared I was too late, he had already been long dead, I wasn't quick enough to the kill."

Eragon gets The Electron Zone's sentence.
"Anger is a gift that no one can take away, it is possesed and controlled by one; only you can handle the life that you bear."

Gosan gets Xyex' sentence.
"The only difference between reality and fantasy is your point of view."

Beautiful Illusion gets Amerowolf's sentence.
"The bird who would be born, must first break the world down around him."

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Also, there are still two positions open for whoever wants to judge. That aside, get to work, and good luck.
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