My 1st fanfic:DBZ:what happened to Goten?

[JC#1]

Originally Posted by ultra_blade

Kk, I get the first made up part, but even the second reason.

"2. Gohan hasn't been keeping up his training since the Cell games."

It's Super Saiyan 2 we're talking about here. SUPER SAIYAN 2, o well. Super Saiyan 2 owns. =)

Yeah, SS2 is always the best (well until they screwed up SS3, and then SS$ if you count GT) actually, that was 3 points, the very first one was made up, and the last two (the ones I listed "1., 2.") I didn't make up, it sounded like you thought the first one in the list was made up last minute, so I just felt I should make that clear.

[ultra_blade]

Nah, lol, I mean the first reason was good, so was the first second reason. O well.

[JC#1]

I'm leaving this joint. In DS's new forum, I might start up my fics again, but I need a little vacation first

[JC#1]

Kay, I'm gonna go ahead and finish this fic before leaving. Anyone who wants to read the rest of my fics, check out DS's new forum sometime soon.


Chapter 12: Fic finally, preperation for the 25th Budokai Tenkaichi!

1 year after Goten goes Super Saiyan...

Gohan is now 15 1/2 years old. Goten is 8. Goku is training in other world. Gohan hasn't been training at all, until Goku tells him that he'll be back for te 25th Budokai Tenkaichi. Chi-chi refuses to train Goten any longer, so he and Trunks train together. Trunks is 9. Vegeta is still training him. He teaches Goten what he's learned from Vegeta whenever they're training together. Goten has been trying to teach Trunks to go Super Saiyan, but is so far unsuccesfull. He also teaches Trunks some stuff he learned from Gohan.

Trunks and Goten are at a park. They are behind some trees, where Bulma and Chi-chi won't see them, and Goten is at the super saiyan stage. He is trying to teach Trunks to reach super saiyan. He powers down to base.

"Trunks, watch me and fallow. Release ALL of your energy," Goten instructed. He and Trunks, simultaniously, released their ki power. Trunks reaches super saiyan, finally, with a glowing golden aura close to his body.

"I did it!" Trunks yells in joy, as Goku does in other world fused with an alien species. "I learned the fusion technique!" Goku is pleased.

"Now you have one more thing to learn before entering the Budokai Tenkaichi. Super Saiyan three..." an alien informed.

Back at the park, Goten and Trunks are playing tag, but it is a bit more extreme than usuall tag. They are in their base forms so they don't have to hide from their mother's. Goten is it. He's chasing Trunks in circles, when he suddenly dissapears and reappears infront of Trunks, but when he tags him, he realizes it was an after-image.

Meanwhile, Great Saiyaman is catching a man in the air who fell from a building. I keep showing up to save the day...But I need training for the tournament! That's it...I'm gonna have to forget saiyaman for a while, and focus on my training. Watch out dad...You've got competition this time.

And so concludes what happened in the world of DBZ, between two major battles. Gohan thinks all he has to worry about is common school troubles and training for the tournament, but little do he and his friends know, they aren't the only ones entering the tournament with more than the average human's power...Yet even though the DBZ universe is in danger for now, the Z fighters will alway prevail, and as long as there is good in the universe, there will be a sappy ending like this one, where Goku and/or his friends have saved the world once again, although in the case of this fic, the world was never in any danger.
edit= wow this is short...Let's just say this was a small conclusion to the fic, where it isn't really supposed to be a whole chapter, lol

[SSJJason]

Goten! W00t !! your top ten of my book now my friend

[JC#1]

lol Have ya read Version 3 of the fic on DS's forum? Its basicly the same thing but spellchecked and stuff. DS says he's gonna shut own the forum. If you've joined you should show up there again, try to prevent him from doing that.

[SSJJason]

Whats the fourm called? Oh and what's your username there?

[JC#1]

I'm JC#1, lol. I think he calls it "The DBZ and Naruto forums". I'll PM a link to you, because if I post it here, then some of the bad MFG people might join.

[SSJJason]

ok