Joot's Raps/Poems

[Joot]

Well, when I think of one, I'll post it here. I have one so far...

Me - By... Me

I’m your special guy and you put no one above me.
Even when you mad at me girl, you still love me.
When you are cold and sad, girl you want to hug me.
And when you lonely and horny, you want to f**k me.
Even though, sometimes, girl you really bug me.
That doesn’t really matter, because, girl you still my honey.
And no one on this world loves me like you love me.
And remember girl; I am your man and not your buddy.

[Recon]

Surprised you didn't do this earlier. I can't rap unless i'm coming at somebody. And I can't post em' cause offensive. But not bad, but I didn't like it that much.

[Shirogetsu]

Ya showed me it i said it was good and i do like it, i stick by that.

[Recon]

Just for refrence it's okay 7/10. I just don't favor it is all.

[Joot]

QUOTE(mega cartman)
Surprised you didn't do this earlier. I can't rap unless i'm coming at somebody. And I can't post em' cause offensive. But not bad, but I didn't like it that much.

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You probably can't rap at all, j/k. Why are you surprised that I didn't do this earlier? And the second one will be more... hardcore, I just don't write about stuff I don't experience when it comes to rappin'. So don't except any stuff about some killin' people, smokin' weed, and s**t like that foo'. I ain't 50 Cent foo'.

[Recon]

Don't get me started on 50 cent. I like when rappers rap about real stuff like Kanye west, and Game. But I'll definantly read your next one.

[Joot]

Well, what do you want the next one to be about. I already am thinkin' about one for struggles in life, but can't get inspired so... Any ideas? Twitch, I saw you readin' it and you always have good ideas, got any?

[Recon]

Make one about ya' neighborhood, Rappers, past life etc.

[Joot]

Boy, if you only knew how calm, chill, uninspiring and boring my neighborhood is... The next one will be about my past in Elementary school... probably.

[Recon]

Hmm. Not a bad idea.

[Joot]

Readers will say: "O_O... OMFG!"

Insignificance…
(Subconscious of a Misunderstood Kid Part 1)

Have you ever felt insignificant as a kid?
I have felt it first hand, because I did
I was lonely on the inside, but within, were the emotions that I hid
And for those emotions to come out, is was I’d forbid
I tried to act hard, that is what I did
I was trying to get higher, on the masculinity grid
But my sanity and common-sense, was about to skid
To be a man above men, is what I bid
I wanted to be on top, but my level was only mid
Now can you believe, this the subliminal thoughts of a kid?
Well you better believe it man, because it is…
Now this is where the tale, really begins
This is when all my thoughts and charisma, and all my mental capacity, really slid
It was a normal, calm, like it usual is
At a regular school, where a kid, can be a kid
On the bench, alone, everyday, is where I’d sit
Thinking of what I could have done to become so unpopular, “What come I’ve did?”
And a ball, on my leg, that’s where it hit
I looked down as the ball rested near my shin
I thought to myself, “What the f**k is this?!”
When the ball collided with my skin, I got really pissed
The touch wasn’t hard, but you know how it is…
When you are a little kid in a big world, and you feel like s**t,
But life is too short, and you shouldn’t feel like this…
Rushing after the ball, were some naïve kids
This is the worst thing, that they could have did
I erupted in a ball of fury… I really had a fit…
And for a little kid, I was quite intelligent
I knew words that they didn’t understand, or couldn’t even comprehend
I wrecked and destroyed their little hearts, their hearts within
They ran away, ball still near me, and the feel of control began to tremble, within my skin
For this was a feel I never felt, and I wanted to feel it again…

(To Be Continued…)

[Recon]

Wow. Never would've guessed you were such an eccentric kid then. Doesn't really show now. 8.5/10. Damn good.

[Joot]

Actually, this isn't based on me, I just made it up... ^__^

[Recon]

Oh. I knew that ahem.

[Joot]

Sure you did, anyways, next part should be up by tommorrow.