Jay Halsey (Vega)-vs-?

[Jay Halsey]

Hi I am giving out a open challenge...I am going to be a character from my new DBZ writing on Creative Writing.Here's techniques.Oh and we will battle on Planet Namek

Kid Vega
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MOVES:

Kamehameha
Super Kamehameha
Spirit Bomb
Instant Transmission
Kaio Ken x1-100
Stealth Surge

[burningvegeta]

Hmmm okay then I'll take this challenge I've been waiting for one for ages. I'll use my custom character: Kran: Eis Krieger a Konatsa-Jin raised on Planet Namek. If thats alright with you. Heres his bio, description, attacks, and abilities are all there: (feel free to look, though if you want to be surprised don't) http://anime.myfavoritegames.com/com...s-krieger.html. Oh and if you don't mind I'll ask a Moderator to judge this. Once its finished that is, or someone who does quite a bit of reading anyway.

[Jay Halsey]

k u go first

[burningvegeta]

From the green heavens Kran’s space craft plummeted into the emerald stream of Planet Namek’s vast rivers. It softly floated while white steam drifted from the crafts injuries. The warrior once banished from the peaceful Planet Namek had returned.

Kran dropped out of his small space craft in a comical fashion. The battle worn space craft was no bigger than he was, his Earth clothing was drenched in lime green substance. He swam to the shore. He stood firm, while the wind strongly blew in his soaked orange hair. He quickly patted his body for his Magic Beans, whilst looking around at his surroundings. “Not much has changed, not…at all.” Kran finished patting himself down and began to stear at the large pillar in the distance.

[Jay Halsey]

*Back on Earth*Vega was just getting done with the training with Goku. He had in the hyperbolic time chamber.He walks out in kaio ken form and puts a smirk on his face as he senses the powerful chi of Kran.He then puts his fingers on his head and teleport to planet Namek.He then appears out of nowhere in front of Kran...Then he stomps on the planet's surface and a huge chunk of the surface rocketed into the sky.Then Vega looks at Kran and smirks...

[burningvegeta]

“Wow” Kran’s mouth stayed open in amazement, as he stared at young man stood inches before him. Kran steps back almost stepping back into the water. He places his hands at his waist and preposterously grins at him, while placing his legs shoulder length apart. Whilst grinning Kran watched his opponent subsequently Kran shifts his eyes from the man’s face to examine his body.

He was no Namekian. Though Kran could sense his blazing power level, “You certainly don’t do subtle do you”. Kran remained calm standing relaxed; he continued to look into the man obviously awaiting battle eyes.

[Jay Halsey]

...Vega looked at Kran with much beleif of victory,"You look stong...But you're no saiyan.I'm the next icon of my race...My granddad has trained me just for the opportunity to beat you.I'll be nice and give you the first move."

[burningvegeta]

As the words came from this Vega’s mouth Kran continued to smile smugly. “Slow down buddy,……boy these Nameks really know how to throw a welcome home party. Gee” Kran crossed his arms, still staring at Vega. “Bitches” Kran’s mouth wasn’t the only thing that had radically changed since his departure on Namek he was an entire different being.

The warrior was surely confident, and now Kran was certain he wanted to battle him. Dramatically Kran’s face dropped quicker than lightning; his face became serious at that moment he stood upright. “I’m…warning…you…only fools have stood before…and…are willingly to fight me” Upon the cold warrior that had almost transformed in personality, his Power Level grew terrifically the water behind him began to clash. At an instant the warrior that stood before him made his move…

[Jay Halsey]

"...I am not nemekian as you can see I am not green.I'm a saiyan a.k.a long descendant of goku the one who saved the nemekians.And I really insist you go first...I don't want to kill someone I have no advantage against in an instant.Me killing you in one hit would be a waist of time."Ok how abut a preposition.If you win...I won't go Kaio Ken for 10 minutes.Go or I will leave and fight my grandfather.Heh heh"

[burningvegeta]

"You just don't know if your coming or going do you pal" After constructing the words Vega had spoken Kran remember the one known as Son Goku, from his former master whom he had killed on Earth. Kran’s tense face dropped "…and your telling me your one of his descendants. The Son Goku” Kran took his stance preparing for battle.

"It seems we both have people we wish to attend to here…I'll tell you something for nothing" Kran bowed his head into his chest than arose with anger upon his face. "Nobody comes to me and talks bullshit, coming up here with your fancy words, what the hells a Kaioken anyway? You know what dude I'll take your preposition." Kran's Power level began to rise steadily, a light green aura began to appear faintly around him "Just tell me how I'm suppose to win?"

[Jay Halsey]

Vega puts a smirk on his face and stares at Kran,"The only way you an win is by killing me.Don't worry I'll be ressurected."Vega stands still then all of a sudden a huge red blast of energy bursted out of his body."After 5 months of training in the hyperbolic time chamber.I doubt Kaio Ken times 100 will hurt me....Ready when you are..."Vega then stares at Kran even more..."Whoa...I sense your power level has just overcame mine by 3,000...Kaio Ken X200!"

[burningvegeta]

Whilst Vega was speaking “What the hell?” Kran whispered. He looked at the red warrior puzzled more than anything. Kran looked at his back; he touched his back frantically as if he had forgotten something. Kran stopped trying to reach for his damp back and gazed at his space ship for a few seconds. He then turned his attention back to Vega. “Dude you full of rubbish, the Hyperbolic time chamber was destroyed a long…long time chamber” Kran’s green aura still was faint though in Namek’s intense sunlight from it’s multiple suns the sky made the flames from the aura extraordinarily noticeable, waving up and down like a tornado around him.

Upon Vega’s last words, he realised what was said about him; “Whoa...I sense your power level has just overcame mine by 3,000” Kran thought to himself that even in this small charge of his power he was already stronger than his Kaioken even though Kran could sense the power the new aura had taken upon the warrior, in terms of power Kran was not phased. “So you can scrutinize power levels eh?”

Kran was still wet, though his aura was slowly drying him. Kran’s aura increased, he tried to estimate what his new battle strength would be, and he increased his power by another jump. He power doubled. Kran smiled at the ease, as this was nothing but child’s play to him.