Graphic teams and Assessment.

[Teecee]

Heh, I didn't know you were having difficulties.

My bad.

[auntie_rannie]

...okay so this is what i've come up with. a bit too dull i'm afraid but well...
still some problems with my network... it just has trouble with foreign websites...slow like hell...sobs. didn't get to read the whole tutorial because of that...

[The751]

Well, I've added more color. Took off blur and tried to make a red to blue thing. Im going to make it fade but for now what do you think?

[Teecee]

I can't really comment on text, lol. The stock placement is good, and you've acquired a direction of flow. The stock quality is pretty low as well. =\ Other than that, work on colors and lighting. Especially lighting. The way you shadow and highlight your tag gives it depth, but it also gives it a sense of realism. GJ overall.

[auntie_rannie]

Originally Posted by Teecee

I can't really comment on text, lol. The stock placement is good, and you've acquired a direction of flow. The stock quality is pretty low as well. =\ Other than that, work on colors and lighting. Especially lighting. The way you shadow and highlight your tag gives it depth, but it also gives it a sense of realism. GJ overall.

um...i'm not exactly an english-speaker so...there are some terms i just don't understand...
what's the meaning of stock/stock quality/GJ?
thanks~

[Teecee]

The stock in your tag/signature would be the image of Trunks you used. The quality of the stock is poor, or the picture of Trunks you used appears grainy/dirty. GJ simply means good job. =]

[auntie_rannie]

Originally Posted by Teecee

The stock in your tag/signature would be the image of Trunks you used. The quality of the stock is poor, or the picture of Trunks you used appears grainy/dirty. GJ simply means good job. =]

thanks!!! i did make the stock kinda dull...guess that didn't work huh~hehe~~~
i'll try better next time! aza aza fighting!

[The751]

some feedback?

[Goku]

Well I will give you some feedback just incase.

Good tag and a big improvement on the last, I think the colours could be more fitting and could do with a tad more blending however its very good I think for a beginner. Lighting is good, and could do with some text.

Not adding text I feel is cheating as it can make or break a tag. This is not directed at you by the way just a general thought. A true graphic designer can make pictures just from text so its relevance is big. Not to much for tags. But if you look at teecees current. The text is a really nice feature of the tag.

[Raven]

Originally Posted by The751

Well, I've added more color. Took off blur and tried to make a red to blue thing. Im going to make it fade but for now what do you think?

I like it. But I suggest adding a one pixel border, along with some nice typography and making the render flow better with the background. It isn't horrible but the render pops out too much imo. A render should always flow with the background and not work against it.

[Engel]

Originally Posted by The751

Well, I've added more color. Took off blur and tried to make a red to blue thing. Im going to make it fade but for now what do you think?

Yo, sorry bout the late feedback mate. Didn't notice the message and have only been on for skittish moments.

Big improvement from before, nice idea with using the stock for the colour change. Bg looks interesting, typo isn't always needed, but it will be interesting to see what/where you come up it.

I'd say just a lil bit of foreground action to add a little more depth and it will be a good tag for some early work.

[burningvegeta]

Made this ages ago...and Sempai what do you think of my signiture as well?
-I've almost got the hnag of the Pen Tool, Sempai.

[Kei]

I have a question.

...Wtf is a "typo"? There's no text on 751's sig. >_>

[Masked_Felix]

Typography. Also known as "Text", in layman's terms.

[Kei]

Oh, si, I see.