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Default make up an AF villan.

in Dragonball and Grand tour there is a wide varity of villans. make up a new bad guy that will make his/her appearance in AF what he looks like, his technics, spechal abilities, and how he is defeated.
Cell 2.0 - was the computer in gero's lab really destroied? or was there still some working parts? in an even deeper part of Gero's lab lies a computer that has all the data of gero's personallity installed in it. and he has been wacthing. he saw the powers of his compleat cell, and how they were totally outclassed by later entities. Now through years of reserch he has finnally done what was thought to be impossible, made a new Cell. this cell has a differant ability though, it never reaches full power. with chamilion camoflauge he is able to absorb most of the Z fighters - including goku, gohan, trunks, and vegeta! Now it is up to pan, bra, ubb, and goten to stop this terrifing menice.
Cell 2 proves to be more then a macth for the fusion of ssj2 Bra and ssj2 Pan, and is in the middle of destroying Goten when Ubb unlocks the hidden power of kid buu from within him. Using his destoruction ball, he is able to annhalate Cell 2 while pan and bra distract it with a full power kamehamea and bra's buster galik gun.
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Look: has two red eyes, two legs, two arms. Real appearance was blocked because of his clothes. Kind of like Jin Kazama's clothes from Tekken 4.
Techniques: His fighting style is forbidden. As soon as someone strikes him, he just stands there and the opponent usually blows up in just a mini-second.
Special Ability:
  1. There were only two special ability known and that was to put his hand towards somebody and then the person slips and falls into a portal that leads to eternal suffering.
  2. He can power up to the current powerlevel of his opponent without his regular powerlevel in it.
How he was defeated: He never died. He has been watching everyone for two thousand years. He is locked up in another galaxy using everyone's ki two thousand years ago. His gate to come back loosens every second.
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Dunno his name. But he's a super demon from another dimension.
Look: Large blue humanoid, with a red mohawk. His eyes would also be red and so would the color of his energy. He would have sharp teeth and his pupils would be slits.
Abilities: His special abilities would include demonic power. Anything that touches him meets instant death, only if fields of chi could protect the person touching him. He would have the ability to regenerate parts lost in battle
Power/Attacks: His attacks would be mostly ones that cause instant death, like lazers, blades and disks. He also would have an attack called "Hell's Flame" that instantly roasts an opponent.
Clothes: Clothes would be similar to samurai armor, but only the bottom, The top would be a shirt and vest. Cape: Possible....... He would also posess earrings, several on each ear.
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I would go on a similar tangent to DTV. I'd go for Cell, but I'd make it the original Cell.
So he looks the same. Basically, what happened was that one cell survive, except it was so damaged that it had to remain in space and recover over the decades. As a result, when the regeneration process was finally complete, he was a lot stronger, and had tapped into more of his potential abilities.
Cell had perhaps the most potential of any DBZGT villain. This new version allows him to untap powers he possibly had the ability to possess, but did not. This includes the ability to transform to the various SSJ levels, the Genki Dama technique, Dragonball Creation (all types), and Namekian fusion. He can also absorb the abilities of anyone who he can touch.
The new and improved Cell would begin his attack by making his way back to Earth. He could sense the strength of the Z fighters, so he decides to take on the rest of the universe to build up his power levels. He would encounter many alien empires with strong fighters, and wipe them out, raising his power level and hidden abilities.
I haven't quite yet figured out the exact chain of events, but I thought it would be fitting if Cell was defeated by the combined efforts of the Son Go family.
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Viz
Look: Large, masculine body with huge muscles a sword in left hand named "Dubbing Stick"
Abilities: Has the ability to stop and make up new names for attacks and can dub your voice, making your attacks and voice sound much gayer than they really are.
Power/Attacks: He can slice you and rearenge you into new forms that make you look gayer and will disappoint your fangirls and fanboys.
Clothes: He wears nothing on top, but on bottom he wears all-american sweat-pants like the ones worn by Rex in Napoleon Dynamite.
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Look: Small, short midget that dances around.
Abilities: He can create filler arcs and non-canon movies that can confuse you and may lead up to your suicide by /wrists.
Power/Attacks: He fills you in with clay and then records you then alters the video for multiple filler arcs in Naruto, Dbz, and sometimes even Bleach.
Clothes: He wears nothing on top but wears short that say midget power on them.
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Prince Cold

Story: He is the real first son of King Cold. Long ago, King Cold and his wife Queen Polara had a son named Cold after his father. However he as he grew he trained accessibly and became as strong as his father and one day, attacked him as to take over his father's empire, King Cold fought off his son and banished him, and he was never spoken of again. Later Cooler and Frieza were born, but they were not told about their older brother. Prince Cold went on about his planetary traid and training on a new home planet he named Planet Cold. The planet has 1000 times Earth's gravity. He trained obsessively and raised his power level greater to that of his Brother's combined. After King Cold was killed, Prince Cold returned to Planet Frieza to regain the throne that was rightfully his, however when he learned that his father and brothers were killed by a Sayain, he went to Earth to get revenge and destroy Goku.

Look: Like his brother Cooler he prefers to stay in his 4th form. In this form he looks similar to Frieza and Cooler (More similar to Cooler), but he has slightly different armor. He also has a scar over his left eye, which he recieved from his father's sword in the battle long ago. And his skin is a dark blue color.

Abilities: Transforming and Adavanced Psychokinesis. He can transform into the 5th form introduced by Cooler as well as a Full Power 5th form that he refers to as a 6th form since his armor and body structure are changed and his power level and muscle mass are greatly raised.

Power: In his 4th form his is as strong as a Super Sayain, Full Power 4th form as strong as Super Sayin 2 etc. At his final 6th form he is as strong as a Super Sayin 4.

Attacks:

4th form- Psychokinesis (Psychic Paralyzing, Psychic Moving of objects/beings)

Energy Beam (Brings hands by sides then thrusts them out launching a purple energy blast)

Death Beam Rush (Rapid Fire Death Beams with both hands)

Cold Cannon (Brings hands out to center, spreads them up and out then thrust them back to center fireing a large red energy blast)

Full Power 4th form- Psychokinesis (Psychic Paralyzing, Psychic Moving of objects/beings, Psychic attacks)

Death Disc (Spreads arms out and raises his forearms and forms a black and blue disc of energy that he throws that cuts through anything. Can launch multiple discs)

Cold Star (Brings hands out to center, and brings them over his head while forming an orange energy ball then throws it)

5th form- Psychokinesis (Psychic Paralyzing, Psychic Moving of objects/beings, Psychic attacks, Materialization)

Cold Star (Brings hands out to center, and brings them over his head while forming an orange energy ball then throws it) (Stronger version)

Death Blade (Brings both arms to one side, and puts his palms together, and a short beam of energy forms that can cut through anything)

Death Cannon (Raises hands above head and forms a large Death Ball then thrust arms down to center fireing a huge energy blast)

6th form (Full Power 5th form)- Psychokinesis (Psychic Paralyzing, Psychic Moving of objects/beings, Psychic attacks, Materialization)

Death Blade (Brings both arms to one side, and puts his palms together, and a short beam of energy forms that can cut through anything)(Stronger larger version)

Death Cannon (Raises hands above head and forms a large Death Ball then thrust arms down to center fireing a huge energy blast)(Stonger version)

Emperor's Aura (Forms a large ball of energy around himself that burns anything that touches it)

Black Hole (Raises one hand above head and gathers an extremely large amount of energy into a very small ball above in hand, this causes a series of chain reactions causing the ball to become huge and form into a Black Hole, he throws it and it absorbs everything around it) (He usually teleports right after launching the attack so he doesn't get absorbed into it)

Death: He turns Goku into stone before he is able to transform into a Super Sayain 5, he launches a Black Hole into the Earth's core causing the planet to begin to implode on itself. The other's use the Dragon Balls to wish everyone to another planet just before the planet implodes on itself. Prince Cold escapes with his henchmen on his space ship. However on the other planet the other's get Goku back to normal and turns into a Super Sayin 5, uses instant transmission to find Prince Cold who has stopped his ship outside Earth's atmosphere to watch the destruction of Earth, yelling "DIE STUPID MONKIES, NO MORE MONKIES HA HA HA!" as he is yelling, Goku appears and swiftly and easily kills Prince Cold along with his henchmen.
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King Zimma



Appearence:

Height: 10 feet

Skin: metalic silver ( like ice shenron)

Hair: long spikey and black (like radditz)

Build: Super buff and ripped (like broli)

Head- Face like evil buu with a third vertical eye on forehead, 2 horns like omega shenron,

ears like picollo's and horn like bones on chin also kind of like omega shenron.



Story: A powerful tyrant from another universethat thirsts fighting. He finds himself jumping universe to universe challenging the strongest fighters. In his immortal boredom he finds himself in our universe , then the milky way galaxy ,and he finally reaches earth for he senses Vegeta and the other remaining z warriors.

Zimma arrives a month after goku fused with shenron and the dragonballs.

Piccolo is still in Hell.

Zimma Finds Vegeta and attacks him with a very weak attack. Vegeta senses that this freak has a low energy.

So vegeta punches through the foolish creature. Vegeta thinks it's over. Zimma laughs and heals himself. All these galaxies and this

is the strongest being in this pathetic universe. Zimma new this wasn't the extent of vegeta's power but it was enough to tell him

that he would have much more fun if the fighter was stronger. Zimma wanted this to be a good fight so he told he would let vegeta bring as

many fighters to help and give him seven days to prepare. Zimma rose his powerlevel so high vegeta flinched in fear for a second.

He new there was no way seven days would make a difference even for his ssj4 form and the rest of the z fighters. Zimma corrected himself

" 7 years. It will only be 7 days for myself, I can't wait any longer thant 7 days , but it will be 7 years in your time."

Zimma left with an instant transmission like dissapearence and vegeta rushed to start the training.

Vegeta gathered the Z fighters and told them of the situation. " We have seven years for the fight with this thing, it's energy it's different than

anything I have ever felt." Right then Kibito Kai appeared and told them everything He knew about the monster known as King Zimma.

Kibito Kai invited all the Z fighters to join him and elder kai to train as a Kai.

Vegeta, Trunks, Gohan, Goten, Majuub, and Pan all leave with Kibito Kai to train.

Seven years pass and Zimma returns .

Vegeta Fights first .

"Brave I see." smirks Zimma

"I have become far stronger in these seven years you foolishly given me !" replied vegeta



Vegeta became a SSj4 then A Super Saiyan 5. The fight went on for a long time. But finally Vegeta crumbled and was knocked out.

Gohan stepped up , and became SSj3. Gohan put up a good fight but it still wasn't enough he was bruised and broken.

Goten and Trunks decided to take him head on at the same time. Majuub entered the fight at this time also

Goten and trunks both became ssj3 and pan enters the fight. Pan is smacked away in minutes . Seeing this Majuub gets enraged

and pumbles zimma with some heavy blows. Goten and trunks seem to turn the tides as they Fuse to Super Saiyan 3 Gotenks.

Zimma bursts his power up so high that Gotenks stops in his tracks. Majuub gasps for breath as he spits up blood.

Sensing the battle Tien, Krillin, and Yamcha all land with fresh senzu beans from karin's in hand .

Gohan, Vegeta, Trunks, Goten, and Majubb all went all out at the same time.

Zimma burst into a stronger state and played with the Z fighters making them think they would win.

But finally he had enough and he let them have it.

At the same time he fires his Magna Cannon Gun attack at vegeta blowing vegeta's left arm and both of his lower legs off.

The ssj5 falls to the ground knocked out.

Trunks, goten , and ubb all fall similar fates.

Trunks takes a beam in the heart.

Goten gets stabbed in the stomach by a horn

and ubb gets punched through the stomach.

This all happened in mere seconds.

ALL OF YO GET OUT OF HERE! yelled Gohan to Pan, Krillin, Tien, and Yamcha

Enraged Gohan's ssj3 power exploded and he hit zimma with everything he had.

Zimma was badly injured, or so it seemed.

Zimma healed and then teleported behind an exhausted gohan, with one slash gohan lost his left arm.

Zimma then hit gohan into the ground.

Seeing this Pan exploded, and became a Super Saiyan.

She completely annhilates Zimma with a Super Kamehameha.

Krillin, Tien, and Yamcha still had enough senzu beans and saved Vegeta, Gohan, Goten, trunks, and ubb.

Vegeta was fitted with Capsule Corp cybernetic legs and arm made by bulma. Thanks to research of Android 18.

Gohan Declined for a robotic arm.

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Mine is Ultra Buu. Buu got pissed of because Satan was killed by Red Ribbon Bandits trying to take over Hercules City. Buu's anger caused Buu to create another Evil Buu. Evil Buu is much more intelligent than the other Evil Buu because Mr. Buu was much smarter. Evil Buu conquers Mr. Buu, but doesn't absorb him, he just kills him. Then Evil Buu searched for the most powerful warrior, which is Goku. Goku is absorbed and he adopts his clothes, a longer horn and gray skin. He was strong, but he absorbed Goku in his normal form so he wasn't that powerful. I just want to clarify that this is after Dragon Ball Z. Vegeta tries to fight him and is very successful after becoming a Super Saying 2. He, then, is absorbed and he adopts clothes like Vegito. His horn is long and he is very powerful. So this is his Ultimate Form.


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Dragonball AF

Team of three Sedians, a race of vampire were-apes.

In there normal apperance they look like supersaiyan 4, but far evil looking. They have very large pointy ears.

lack tails, sharp canines, slit pupils, and retractable claws.



Ixion

Height- as tall as gohan

build- like gohan

Hair and fur- black , hair on head looks like ssj4 goku

Skin- grey

eyes- all black with red ,vertical slit pupil

role- Leader of the sedians

Quaoar

Height- as tall as brolli

Build - like brolli

skin- dark red

hair and fur- light grey, hair like broli

eyes- look all white ,with slate grey iris, no eye brows, namekian/ssj3 like ridges

role- controlled muscle, Lord Ixion's right hand man, more muscle than brain

Varuna

She is Lord Ixions love interest

hair and fur- deep red, hair like ssj3 goku

height and build- like sepia from bardocks crew

eyes- black pupil with red iris

role- support

It is 8 years after goku fused with the dragonballs and shenron. And one year after king Zimma (see my last AF villan post)

The sedians arrive to earth with a mission to expand their race. They have the ability to bite any humanoid

and turn them into sedians. They turn may cities and villages to sedians. The news airs live coverage . Bulma sees it and tells vegeta.

who is training with pan in a capsual corp made hyperbolic room. Trunks and gohan are also training. Goten stopped training . And ubb

is living with his people.

They all join together at dende's look out. They also get krillin, yamcha, krillin, andoid 18,master roshi , and all the other friends

and family fo the z fighters.

Vegeta, Pan, Gohan, Trunks, Goten, and Ubb all go to face the Sedians to stop there invasion and spreading infection.

Vegeta beomes a ssj5 , Ixion notices that he is a saiyan.

Ixion tells of how the sedians are a mutant race of Saiyans, from an ancient ancestor , that laned on the planet of Sedia. And through evoltuion made adaptaions over years of seperation on the planet sedia.

Gohan , trunks , and goten all become ssj and face the sedians.

But it isn't enough.

Vegeta and pan stay back because Vegeta senses the Sedians to be much weaker than his ssj 5 form, and he lets gohan,goten,trunks have there sparring.

Gohan , trunks, and goten become ssj 2 .

The fight seems to go toward there favor.

Ubb enters the fight and really seems to turn the tides, until....

He gets caught by Quaoar and Varuna infects him with the sedian dna bite.

ubb then helps Ixion get goten , then they all get gohan , then trunks.



Vegeta becomes ssj 5 and says he will end it for he is much more powerful than the sedians, he tells pan to leave because he may have to injure or kill gohan, goten, ubb, or trunks.

But she says she wants to help so he won't have to resort to that.

The sedians make a larger surprize. They transform. Into large Were apes just like a saiyan , but satanic looking with horns, and spikes on the spine. They also have larger fangs and talons on the fore arms. " uughhh they trasnformed, but with out tails!, and the moon, no where in sight!"

(the sedians gather energy from the moon no matter where they are and they lost there tail as a weakness because of adaptaion they can change on will )

Each of the sedians became 1,000 times stronger in there new forms. Out numbered and out matched the cybernetic ssj5 vegeta retreaded to dende's look out with pan. Bulma and everyone on dende's look out headed for capsule corp where bulma had a space ship . they all got on it and left with one plan in mind, make it to namek , for dende said maybe the namekian dragonballs and the namekians could help.

The evil Z warriors led the sedians to the lookout but just missed out , then they got to capsule corp just late of seeing what they had done.



The sedians figured it was nothing to worry about and claimed that the earth would soon be 100% sedian in hours.



once landing on namek, Dende told the elders what had happend on earth.

The elders agreed to help as much as they can.

Vegeta tohught of what they could wish to help, kakarot was out of the question, for shenron was fused with goku and could not be wished back.

Dende came to vegeta and told him piccolo could be wished back. Vegeta thought it to be a very good idea.

So that is what they did.

Once being brought to life on namek Piccolo was sensed to be more powerful then they ever could have imagined.

Piccolo explained how he faught Cell and frieza every day and how he defeated everyone in hell all the time as he trained.

ONce learning the situation Piccolo asked vegeta ... How do we stand on power against these sedians.

Vegeta told him that they would need to be thousands of times stronger.

Piccolo and dende divised the plan of fusing. Piccolo asked all the namekians to fuse.

They where hesitant at first but they new that piccolo and dende where the past and present guardians of earth.

They also new they owed earth for the earth dragonballs and earth warriors had helped them on many occasions.

Dende was the first to fuse with piccolo , then fallowed the rest .

Piccolo had amazing power.

Vegeta was impressed that the namekian had out done him again like in the past.

" You have done it again namek, your people's ways , still baffle me, you namekians far surpassed my ssj5 form. "

" this is just the tip of the ice berg" said piccolo, He was surpressing his ki to its lowest degree

Vegeta was shocked, then we will have no problem defeating the sedians.

Vegeta, Piccolo and Pan took a space ship to earth and arrived in 6 days.

They confronted the Sedians.

Gohan stepped out, "piccolo, you're alive, that won't last long, us sedians will kill all those who oppose us !"

"gohan , your under an evil transformation"

Gohan-" no I am a sedian, its the natural way, my eyes are now finally fully open, I can see this power is the strongest in the universe. "

Pan- Dad! please stop this! uncle goten, trunks, ubb!

Vegeta- they are not themselves pan, watch them closly, dont hold back, if they get close put them out"

Piccolo - "enough"

Vegeta became ssj5 , pan went ssj

Pan faught goten

Vegeta took on gohan, trunks, and uub

Piccolo faced the Sedians.



Vegeta and pan quickly knocked the evil z warriors out. and joined piccolo in the fight.

Piccolo Faught Quaoar , Ixion, and Varuna.

He easily dispatched them.

Take you controll off of earth!

Ixion denied and transformed into a Oorta ( a sedian vampire were ape)Quaoar and varuna transfomred also

Piccolo"- you are all foolish , now prepare to die. "

Piccolo went full power

Vegeta- ughhhhhhhh amazing, piccolo, you are several times stronger than these fools, now squash them!"

Piccolo Killed Quaoar and Varuna ...

Right as he was about to hit Ixion, Gohan flew into piccolo's path.

Gohan grew red fur and a tail , we became a ssj4 .

" Gohan step aside!"

No piccolo, Lord Ixion,, he is my new father.

Goten and trunks also get up and become ssj4..

Vegeta fights them as a ssj 5 , along side pan.

Gohan still stares at piccolo

Ixion- Green man, face it. he is my son, and he will die for me

Piccolo fights gohan , knocking him out .

Then he knockes out trunks and goten.

Piccolo places his hand out and he opens it at Ixion.

Goku is Gohan's father, And I am Gohan's Father.

You will never replace us, now die ....



Piccolo desentigrated Ixion with a massive blue energy blast ...

once dead, everyone under his control was returend to there normal selves.

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Great story I was on the edge of my seat.Keep it coming guys!
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Hey thanks Sword of Geddon, I hope you have enjoyed my af story line so far.

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DRAGON BALL AF



Queen Kold

Mother of Freeza and King Kold's wife.

Looks just like final form freezer , but more femine, and she has small horns like first form feezer,

but her feet are not monkey like

She wears an out fit just like zarbon



Icer

In his first form he looks like Vegito with two black horns, white hair,light grey skin, pointy ears, completly white eyes, that have one black line going down each side of his face. He wears black saiyan armor and black under armor

Icer is a creation of Queen Kold's best scientists. Queen Kold arrived to earth Durning the fight with King Zimma.

Her Men managed to gather genetic information from King Zimma, The Sedians, Vegeta, Piccolo, Gohan, and Ubb.

The clone was to be a combination of all these and her own , thus Icer was born. This new son's sole purpose was to avenge the

death of the Kold family, and bring forth the new age of the Kold Empire.



A month has passed sense the terror of the Sedians.... (see my last AF post)

But a new Evil has planned an attack on Earth and the Z warriors are the victoms...

Bulma talks to vegeta. She tells him that a large object is just behind the moon,

She says she has been studing it since they returned from namek (from my sedian saga).

She has satelite photos , he can tell exactly what it is.

" It's Queen Kold's battle ship!..." "I thought I killed her! When I was looking for kakarot , just after the battle of namek!"

" Well she's here now!"

" She Shouldn't be any threat to us , Her power level can't be above 1,000,000, even after all this time."

" How are you sure hun? "

She was weaker than Captain Gynu all those years ago, and his max was around 120,000...

I can't beleive she lived, but no matter She will fail no matter what she is panning on doing...

Right then Vegeta senses her land out in the desert area. And he rushes there.

Moments later ...



Uncanny, this is the same place Goku and I faught when I first came to Earth...

Vegeta landed by the ship , vegeta was surprised to see that Pan, Gohan, Trunks, and Goten where also there already.

The door opened and Queen Kold came out.

" What do you want Queen Kold? "

" oh not to much prince Vegeta. "

Gohan stared ... "Uhhh she looks like freeza."

Goten: Man he must have been uglier than I imagined from dad's stories, haha...

Gohan smiled, yea dad never was good at describing anytihng outside of fighting.

Piccolo landed.

Queen Kold: Looks like everyones here.

Vegeta: Get on with what you want to say , so we can kill you... Your lucky I find this to be enjoying, but I grow tired of lack of action.

Queen Kold: Ohhhh, there will be action very shortly , and it will be enjoying.... Only to me.....

Trunks: You talk big.... I can sense everyone on that ship and no one can cause any concern to us.

Piccolo: He's Right you're the strongest, But I can feel you have a secret, your masking something....

Right then Piccolo's eyes widened...

Piccolo:.... I can sense it faintly....

Vegeta: What are you talking about?

Piccolo: It's very dark and filled with hatred... It's power is growing very fast....

Queen Kold: Why that's My son, he would like to play, Today is his birthday, and you are the best presnts a mother could ask for.

Right then Icer appeared behind everyone.

ugggggggggghhhh errrrrrrr... Vegeta sensed Icer's power..

Vegeta: He's so fast

Piccolo: I watched him the entire time. He's fast but he's not faster than my eyes.

Icer lifted his head up to show his evil smirk.

Icer: That's me taking a morning walk green man, don't talk me into running , Can you see this?

Right then Pan was in his arms.

Piccolo: hmmmm, I see.... Let her go.

Icer: Say pretty please!

Piccolo extended his arm and punched Icer in the face knocking him off Pan.

Piccolo: TO BAD your eyes aren't as fast as your mouth is.

Icer: that's it ! YOU ALL WILL SUFFER!!!!!!!

Piccolo Threw off this cape and helmet.

Vegeta Bursts into ssj4 and then ssj5

Gohan, Goten, and Trunks all become SSJ4

Pan became ssj

Queen Kold : Icer , please Son, Play nice... But remember make them suffer, then kill them .

Icer: yes mother...

Queen Kold then got into her ship and took off .

Icer: This is going to be fun. 6 little friends to kill.

Piccolo: Don't count on it.

The warriors all got in battle stances and stood in a horizontal line facing Icer 200 yards away

Piccolo charged him first.

The fight was very one sided.

Piccolo smashed Icer to the ground. and then shot a blast into icer.

Piccolo: That should be it.

Icer than stood up and healed his entire body.

Piccolo: WHAT!

Icer: You see I have you and King Zimma's DNA, Which means I can heal like nothing you have seen before.

Piccolo: who's king Zimma?

Vegeta: he was a powerful being we beat a year ago! He did have remarkable healing abilitiies, greater than Cell and buu!

Piccolo: This will we tougher than I thought... We will have to work together.



Meanwhile....



Queen Kold has dispatched Her strongest men all over the world to just cause chaos and destuction. She told them to have fun and kill anyone.

But that's not what happend. Her first man was killed by Krillin in front of a shoe shop , He was shopping with 18 and marrion.

Her second man was killed at a baseball game by Yamcha , he and paur went to watch his old team play in the championship.

Her third man was killed in front of a dirty magazine store by master roshi. Her Fourth man was killed by tien while him and chiotzu

vistited Launch.



piccolo and the other z warriors continue to fight Icer. Time after time they knock him down, but he gets back up.

Piccolo: This isn't working....

Icer: Thanks to Vegeta's dna, I become stronger as the fight goes on, the hard you hit the stronger I become, Soon I will Completley out match you all!

Vegeta: ERRRRr enough with the jabbering ! Time to end this ! Gohan, Piccolo, let's shut this punk up!

Right then ubb arrived.

Pan informed ubb on the situation.

Piccolo raged on with devestating attacks with ssj5 vegeta and ssj4 gohan following.

Piccolo used a full power blast, Vegeta bombbarded icer with blasts, and gohan used his one handed mazenko.

Icer seemed to be losing for a brief amount of time.

Icer: hahahaha, I see that's the extent of your power, If I wasn't invincible, it would have killed me, but now you're all drained.

Icer's broken body healed once more, hahahahaha.... Now Iam stronger than all of you weaklings combined.

No one can stop me...

Right then Majubb used his chocolate beam!

Icer dodged it and was suddenly behind ubb.

Icer: So foolish, Attacking me? You're the weakest one.

Icer put his hand to ubbs back and shot a beam straight through him.

Enraged Pan yelled out ...

Tears streamed down her face....

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO make it stop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! Pan burst into a ssj2 for the first time.

ICer's eyes widend.... YOu have power girl ... Interesting, and very impressive, but you lack my concern, a power still that low causes no fear in the kold heart.

PAN: YOU HAVE NO HEART! YOU'RE A MONSTER!

Pan started punching Icer in every way possible, kicking him in combos as fast as she could .

KA.... MEEEEEEEE... HAAAAAAAAA.... MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEe..HAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!

Pan hit ICER with her strongest kamehameha.

when the blast cleared he had a slightly scratched and burnt body.

Icer: How did you manage to kill King Zimma?

Icer went to hit pan with a powerful punch , but right then vegeta , piccolo , and gohan kicked him away.

Gohan: Pan you did your best, Grandpa Goku, would be very proud.... But you should leave, take ubb to the look out, get him a senzu , his ki is falling fast... But he will be okay...

Pan listened to her father.

Piccolo then talked to Trunks and Goten telepathically...

GOTEN, TRUNKS, use the fusion technique, it's the only way to defeat him now. SSJ4 Gotenks is our last hope.

Vegeta, gohan , and will hold him off, gather all your energy, and make sure to do the dance right.

that's exactly what happend.

Icer: you are all foolish! how do you expect to win!?

FUUUUUUSIIIIIIIIIONNNNNNNNN HAAAAAAAAA!

SSJ4 Trunks and ssj4 Goten fused to become ssj4 Gotenks.

Icer Looked at Gotenks in shock...

Icer: WHAT! that power, impossible! It is greater than mine!

Vegeta: Gotenks has this won, he's at least 100 times stronger than Icer...

Gotenks: That's right, Meet your doom, We are the ultimate fusion, now prepare to die!

Icer: I didn't think I would have to push this far... I have a surprise.

Gotenks: Go ahead and surprise me.

Piccolo: NO FINISH HIM NOW!

Right then Icer began to transform

his horns grew longer on his head, his hair looked ssj4, he grew black ssj4/sedian fur all over his body, his build became larger, his muscles larger and more defined, the lines going down his face mecame larger , he grew a third eye like zimma, his eyes turned black and had brows like piccolo, his teeth became pointed , his canines larger, he grew large retractible bone blades out of his forearms,, and a tail like freeza.

Gotenks: His power Just became 1,000 times stronger....

Piccolo: He's ten times stronger than you gotenks!!!!!

Gotenks: Don't worry piccolo We can defeat him with out 10 times finishing Burning Kamehameha Buster!

Gotenks Started to charge up the attack, but icer was to fast, he nailed Gotneks in the stomach with his forearm blades.

Icer: Wow, Iam dead.... Oh no wait, that idiotic move was to slow to gather, so it's you're death...

Gotenks fell , and piccolo caught him.

Icer: MOTHER!!!!!!!! I have avenged our family... And as soon as I kill these three , the Kold empire will rule the univer once more!

Piccolo held gotenks and healed his chest.

Gotenks opened his eyes... Piccolo....

Piccolo: I healed you gotenks, a little trick thanks to dende... He always was a talented namekian brother.

Icer: WHAT! You cheated!!!!!!!

Vegeta: That's too bad for you punk, Gotenks is a saiyan also, a ssj4 , and now he will have gained an enormous power boost!

Gohan: Gotenks, finish this guy!

Gotneks: RIGHT!

Icer: your ownly two times stronger than I am !

Gotenks: This is not the extent of my power.

Icer; errrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr this can't be!!!!!!!!! ..... YOU LIE!

Gotenks: Nope

Gotenks started to gather energy electricity rapidly surged all over. His aura bust into a large fire.

Icer: errrggghhhhhhh he's 100 times stronger than me!

Right then out of desperation Icer teleported to gohan and bit him, draining the saiyans ki.

MORE energy I need more!

Gotenks: it's no use , you will pay for do that to Gohan, there's not enough energy on earth for you to keep up with me now!

Icer than bit Vegeta and piccolo.

Gotenks.... " that''s it ICER Your done for good."

Right then Pan and Ubb Arrived with senzu's .

Icer Flew towards ubb and pan to still there energy.

Icer: IF I Still their energy I may be able to transform into my Final form!

Gotenks appeard mid way and shoock his finger in icer's face

GOtneks: You have not behaved, now it's time out for you....

Gotenks Burst his energy as high as it could go and then he focused as hard as he could.....

Vegeta: Amazing, I never thought I would see the boy's so powerful.

Gotenks: Happy birth day Icer...

Gotenks became a ssj 5.

Vegeta: Icer is done for....

Vegeta ,Piccolo, and GOhan layed on the ground watching the battle.

Gotenks wasted no time , he knew 5 minutes would burn up fast as a ssj5 and he would have to defeat icer before the fusion wore off.

Gotenks this is my ultimate attack ready, it's just for you, don't blink you may miss it.

Gotenks surrounded Icer with afterimages all around him he was inclosed right int he center of a globe of ssj5 gotenks

then all the images started to do a kamehameha.

Gotenks: THIS IS MY 100x Kamehameha!

Icer, shot beams at the images, but it was futile.

All the Gotneks shot their kamehameha at the same time , engulfing an enclosed Icer in a giant blue energy ball.

Icer: GAhhhhhhhhhhfshafhdahrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrrrrrrR NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!1 UFAHDSGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!

Icer was completly destroyed, nothing was left of him... The battle was over.

Gotenks landed and de fused.

Pan and Ubb gave Piccolo , Vegeta, and Gohan senzu's.

Vegeta Rushed off to take care some unfinished business.

Vegeta found Queen Kold's ship coming down.

Vegeta raised his hand and then his index and middle fingure, the ship exploded ... Thus finally bringing an end to the

Kold Empire......










































































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Another awesome episode of your series Supertien! I'm telling you AF can exist in fanfiction form. I'm going to do one next I think keep it coming man!
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Back to the subject of AF villians....

I think that there should be an evil version of Goku.
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