Dragonball AF comic

saiyanseth24 · 10-22-2006

Yesterday I started the comic of all comics dragonball AF weve waited longe enough it will take a while but, i just stated yesterday and i'm on pg.4 already. If anyone has any ideas or comments email me at saiyanseth24@AOL.com[vegeta]

JammyBleached · 10-22-2006

Care to share a page for us so we can la- I mean see your work and idea?

saiyanseth24 · 10-23-2006

Well then you create a page and well compare.Lets see how good the big mouth can do.
You're relatively new, so I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and ask that you read the rules on responses on this board.
http://mfgforums.com/forums/post/3847.aspx
http://mfgforums.com/forums/post/3847.aspxAbide by them. -The Chibi Kiriyama

JammyBleached · 10-23-2006

Lol.
Well we have had 3-4 instances like this before with someone saying "i mad3 ah AF com1c" but when we ask to see something, that person dissapears and never replies. And normally their ideas lack any sort of originality.
So i asked you this time who has taken it upon himself to do what others have tried and failed to do before. And still you fail to provide any kind of info/proof of what you have but instead bark out a back lash remark. The best you could of done was provide something back to shut me up showing off, if you have any, your amazing talent in ideas or drawing and concept capabilities enough to brag about. That would of been a better reply.

saiyanseth24 · 10-24-2006

I would show proof if I had any sort of printer or scanner but i don't so i'll tell you. My story takes palce 150 yrs. in the future King Yemma for their noble deeds to the universe has given the z-fighters eternal spirit life. In the Underworld(HFIL) king Yemma is holding a tournament to see who the strongest villian is.in the first round of the peliminarys i have cooler fighting cell.In the second round I have Frieza fighting bardock.Bardock turns into a super saiyan and defeats frieza easlily. The winner of the tournament gets a second chance at life.
So what do you think I don't think it's to bad a follow up to one of the greatest graphic novel creaters ever????????

Vegeta-the most powerful sayajin · 10-24-2006

That sounds like a good theme but its missing one important detail...reason. Why would King Yemma decide to free one Villian at all? If you think up something just add that in and you've got yourself a pretty good story.

saiyanseth24 · 10-24-2006

Thankyou for pointing this out to me this is where i am stumped and is the reason I can't continue the story.Any Ideas?

Vegeta-the most powerful sayajin · 10-24-2006

Well, you could say it's tradition. Like every 1,000 years a tournament takes place to decide one person to be freed from HFIL

Buttah · 10-24-2006

Im not trying to say that you plagerized that idea but I could've swore I read something similar to that a year or two ago. It was actually pretty good too....

Vegeta-the most powerful sayajin · 10-24-2006

Maybe you've heard it before because its some what of a cliche. Lots of stories use similar plots.

saiyanseth24 · 10-26-2006

So who do you think Bardock should go against next (this would be the semi finals)
O by the way I didn't copy anyones story i spent all day trying to think of a start.[kakashi2]
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Frieza I'm coming for you, you murderous self serving traitor it's over!

10-22-2006	#1 (permalink)
saiyanseth24 (1) Earthling Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 6 Rep Power: 0	Dragonball AF comic Yesterday I started the comic of all comics dragonball AF weve waited longe enough it will take a while but, i just stated yesterday and i'm on pg.4 already. If anyone has any ideas or comments email me at saiyanseth24@AOL.com[vegeta]

10-22-2006	#2 (permalink)
JammyBleached (22) Super Saiyan 3 Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: England, UK Posts: 2,322 Rep Power: 9	Re: Dragonball AF comic Care to share a page for us so we can la- I mean see your work and idea? __________________ "Try our Brew and i bet you won't sue!"

10-23-2006	#3 (permalink)
saiyanseth24 (1) Earthling Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 6 Rep Power: 0	Re: Dragonball AF comic Well then you create a page and well compare.Lets see how good the big mouth can do. You're relatively new, so I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and ask that you read the rules on responses on this board. http://mfgforums.com/forums/post/3847.aspx http://mfgforums.com/forums/post/3847.aspxAbide by them. -The Chibi Kiriyama

10-23-2006	#4 (permalink)
JammyBleached (22) Super Saiyan 3 Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: England, UK Posts: 2,322 Rep Power: 9	Re: Dragonball AF comic Lol. Well we have had 3-4 instances like this before with someone saying "i mad3 ah AF com1c" but when we ask to see something, that person dissapears and never replies. And normally their ideas lack any sort of originality. So i asked you this time who has taken it upon himself to do what others have tried and failed to do before. And still you fail to provide any kind of info/proof of what you have but instead bark out a back lash remark. The best you could of done was provide something back to shut me up showing off, if you have any, your amazing talent in ideas or drawing and concept capabilities enough to brag about. That would of been a better reply. __________________ "Try our Brew and i bet you won't sue!"

10-24-2006	#5 (permalink)
saiyanseth24 (1) Earthling Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 6 Rep Power: 0	Re: Dragonball AF comic I would show proof if I had any sort of printer or scanner but i don't so i'll tell you. My story takes palce 150 yrs. in the future King Yemma for their noble deeds to the universe has given the z-fighters eternal spirit life. In the Underworld(HFIL) king Yemma is holding a tournament to see who the strongest villian is.in the first round of the peliminarys i have cooler fighting cell.In the second round I have Frieza fighting bardock.Bardock turns into a super saiyan and defeats frieza easlily. The winner of the tournament gets a second chance at life. So what do you think I don't think it's to bad a follow up to one of the greatest graphic novel creaters ever????????

10-24-2006	#6 (permalink)
Vegeta-the most powerful sayajin (15) Super Namekian Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Sitting in a secluded room Posts: 421 Rep Power: 4	Re: Dragonball AF comic That sounds like a good theme but its missing one important detail...reason. Why would King Yemma decide to free one Villian at all? If you think up something just add that in and you've got yourself a pretty good story. __________________ Current Manga Being Read: Naruto, Bleach, One Piece, YuYu Hakusho ---- Incase you're wondering this is V-TMPS

10-24-2006	#7 (permalink)
saiyanseth24 (1) Earthling Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 6 Rep Power: 0	Re: Dragonball AF comic Thankyou for pointing this out to me this is where i am stumped and is the reason I can't continue the story.Any Ideas?

10-24-2006	#8 (permalink)
Vegeta-the most powerful sayajin (15) Super Namekian Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Sitting in a secluded room Posts: 421 Rep Power: 4	Re: Dragonball AF comic Well, you could say it's tradition. Like every 1,000 years a tournament takes place to decide one person to be freed from HFIL __________________ Current Manga Being Read: Naruto, Bleach, One Piece, YuYu Hakusho ---- Incase you're wondering this is V-TMPS

10-24-2006	#9 (permalink)
Buttah (2) Farmer w/Shotgun Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 11 Rep Power: 0	Re: Dragonball AF comic Im not trying to say that you plagerized that idea but I could've swore I read something similar to that a year or two ago. It was actually pretty good too....

10-24-2006	#10 (permalink)
Vegeta-the most powerful sayajin (15) Super Namekian Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Sitting in a secluded room Posts: 421 Rep Power: 4	Re: Dragonball AF comic Maybe you've heard it before because its some what of a cliche. Lots of stories use similar plots. __________________ Current Manga Being Read: Naruto, Bleach, One Piece, YuYu Hakusho ---- Incase you're wondering this is V-TMPS

10-26-2006	#11 (permalink)
saiyanseth24 (1) Earthling Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 6 Rep Power: 0	Re: Dragonball AF comic So who do you think Bardock should go against next (this would be the semi finals) O by the way I didn't copy anyones story i spent all day trying to think of a start.[kakashi2] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Frieza I'm coming for you, you murderous self serving traitor it's over!