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The Arekusu Chronicles #1
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Re: The Arekusu Chronicles #1
Not bad writing there, but the plot is kinda...lame. Frieza has been way overdone and there is no original angle in this. Still though its just started so I can't be up to judging it yet. Keep it up!
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