Re: Savages under God
Lol, Divine America. Hmpfh.
Anyway. I enjoyed this. Even though it sort of lacked... well, an in-depth meaning. Or something. But you pictured the WW2 climate very well, with attention to detail. Although, an admiral would never adress a deckhand with the suffix "-san", probably. Other than that, a few small flaws here and there, but nothing major.
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