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**JAIF** · 05-11-2008

Lol, Divine America. Hmpfh.

Anyway. I enjoyed this. Even though it sort of lacked... well, an in-depth meaning. Or something. But you pictured the WW2 climate very well, with attention to detail. Although, an admiral would never adress a deckhand with the suffix "-san", probably. Other than that, a few small flaws here and there, but nothing major.

05-11-2008	#2 (permalink)
JAIF Moderator Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: The Black Tower. Posts: 5,518 Rep Power: 38	Re: Savages under God Lol, Divine America. Hmpfh. Anyway. I enjoyed this. Even though it sort of lacked... well, an in-depth meaning. Or something. But you pictured the WW2 climate very well, with attention to detail. Although, an admiral would never adress a deckhand with the suffix "-san", probably. Other than that, a few small flaws here and there, but nothing major. __________________ Join! MFG's Unique Pokemon Game!