Gosan

Just finished reading this, and I must say it was worth it. Now, writing from a girl's perspective was an interesting start which made it stand out already from the others. You got the main character's emotions described will to the point that I seemed to feel the same emotion, the story completely drew me in. It started getting a little boring around the mid section, since it looked pretty predictable to me and too fantasy happy.

But man I did not see the ending coming, that was a great twist that sent shivers down my spine, or maybe because it's just the morning coldness in my room lol. Regardless, that was the best part out of the whole thing in my opinion. You did a great job with this, keep them coming and I look forward to reading more of your work.

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