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(29) King of Soul Society
Join Date: May 2005
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Re: Post A Short Story/Poem
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Originally Posted by The Green Dragon
Jay and Toni had to be careful, the forest was a dangerous place. Not only that, but the realm was unidentified by the Elders. All they knew was Ben was around here somewhere, they just needed to grab him and go... simple. However they could feel the evil presence around them. Jay continuosly starred at the trees.
"I don't trust them" Jays' expression appeared worried.
Toni turned back, "What the hell do you mean? You don't trust them? Your not supposed to trust trees man. Forest plantation isn't the sort of thing you ask to mind your flat or to book a holiday."
Jay gave Toni a stern look "You really think these trees are like the ones back home?"
Toni nodded with assurance "Of course, so they're a bit crooked."
Jay sighed "Alright, we'll go with your opinion for a little while. But I've got that feeling..."
Toni butted in "THAT feeling? Ooh no don't start that again. Last time you had THAT feeling it was after 7 pints and you were spewing in my sink."
Suddenly, the two heard a sound of a hedge rushling. The duo became subconciously alarmed. Toni turned his head to stare at Jay once more.
"Alright maybe we'll go with your instinct for a little bit."
Jay grinned.
As the two proceeded, one of the trees acted and turned to monitor there movements before shifting back to their stationary status.
Jay and Toni didn't notice this, and pushed on to find Ben.
How long did it take to write, and was it planned or spontanious. I really like it!
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Ah,thanks ^^ glad ya lik =) and when I wrote it .. .I think it took about an hour. xD and yeah ... it was spontaneous - I sometimes do that to remember dreams ... thoughI guess itcould be planned because I kinda dreamed it first ^^;;
And same to yours, it was cool, sine ya gave an idea of a plot, but being a snippet, it still left me wondering. =) and same question - was yours planed or spontaneous? (cool if it was the latter!)
An a little something I cooked up a while ago ... hopefully I haven't already posted it. O_O ... June '07, I think I was going through ... a separation anxiety period. xD
 A reflection shines,
And I hate it.
How can one be beautiful in every way,
When the one who sees it hates to be themself?
I look in the mirror,
I despise what I see.
I am not perfect.
I don't try to be perfect.
But for his sake, I am determined to be.
He says it's true, my want not to
Makes me so.
I am held as the one in his eyes,
But there are others,
Much more wonderful than I could hope to be.
Look upon this pale face,
And don't let me know what you see,
Because I don't care.
All I want to be is his,
All I do is for his sake.
What should I be?
He loves me for myself,
But I can go so much further.
A fine line, I'm walking it...
I don't want to ruin what we have.
I admit,
I've never felt this way before.
I admit,
He holds my heart in his hand,
And will, for a long time to come.
And if he breaks it,
He'll have the two hearts,
One of which would have been mine.
Hopeless.
I am.
Hopeless.
I'll cry for him,
Because I am in love.
And he is the one thing...
I never want to loose.
I would risk more than creation allows,
All for his sake.
Never leave me...
I will never leave you.
I am soulless, because my soul,
It resides with you.
Perfection is the one thing I do not strive for...
And yet, I will give it all for you.
Love.
It can drive you mad, with happiness.
I am insane.
I am insane, for being all he loves and more...
Forever.
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I so need a new sig ...
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Vicky says:
You think I'm so sex mad ... what if I was to go completely the other way? xD
Andrew says:
The world would implode. >_>
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