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Originally Posted by Vivi
It's okay man, not a big, just was letting you know.
And Jason:
"Devin you really think I'm that stupid? Give me that squirter!" Danielle screamed in a vivid tantrum.
As Danielle suddenly dived through the air at Devin, he slipped on some water, slamming his head down on the hard cement ground. With a groan he reached his hand up to his shaggy head, feeling a massively swollen lump.
Danielle's face turned beet red as she shook with incredible laughter. "What's wrong Devin? Need ideas for good-"
After you work on your grammar and spelling, you can begin adding description such as that. If you need any pointers you can always ask me.
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Thanks...i'm just learning how to wright fics.
Starting from this point, my fics will include descriptions, and better spelling. You can help me work on it if you want...