Eragon

Ciing my opinion so, please, don't get pissed: this 'Saviours' race sounds a lot like saiyans... really, to much, in my opinion. They have a sharingan eye, similar transformations and physiology , and, to be perfecty honest, he haracter names sound un-DBZish; I'm not gonna comment on how alien they are, since it's your race, but... using regular everyday names like Pam and Jason for DBZ... just doesn't feel right, in my opinion.

My recommendation is to change the Saviours race a bit, to make them more distinct from other races.

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