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ultra_blade · 04-18-2008

Hmmm... I read the first chapter and I liked it it could use a bit more detail and all but if you have it so squished up like this it'll be really annoying and since you have it on Bold it's gonna be even more of a drag.

I think you should start it fresh and add some description and detail to your story, space it out and don't use Bold Letters. Or you can just do that from your next chapter and on. =]

04-18-2008	#18 (permalink)
ultra_blade (11) Student of Lord Kaio Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Melbourne, Australia Posts: 172 Rep Power: 3	Re: DBZ Af episode 1 The newest warriors Hmmm... I read the first chapter and I liked it it could use a bit more detail and all but if you have it so squished up like this it'll be really annoying and since you have it on Bold it's gonna be even more of a drag. I think you should start it fresh and add some description and detail to your story, space it out and don't use Bold Letters. Or you can just do that from your next chapter and on. =]