Luke Groundwalker

There's a couple of things wrong with these comics coming from an experienced sprite comicer:
1. It's trying to be serious
2. No backgrounds, and panels aren't aligned properly
3. No use of good grammar and spelling (of course, it doesn't have to be if it's part of the joke or something)
4. Action scenes have potential and can be pulled off extremely well in sprite comics, but there's a lack of actual focus on each of the attacks that would make such things more entertaining

For pros, though?
-Uses the best kind of Dragonball Z sprites (like seriously, Dragonball Z sprites tend to look like shit)
-As said action scenes have potential

Yeah, that about covers it.

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