Re: DBZ Revenge (a Sprite Comic)
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It's pretty generic plot-wise. You should also make more creative backgrounds. You do have a very good intuition in that you position the sprites so it looks like an actual fight (and not a clunky mess of kilobytes). Action had good flow and your usage and positioning of chi-blasts were nothing short of 1337.
Err...6.25/10. I've seen better, but you have potential. And I have done things like this myself, but I don't want to get back into it (I was Son Goharrato's apprentice).
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Originally Posted by SuperTien 
AT also made Piccolo very strong from just being on kai's for a short time and doing hardly any training, AT makes characters as strong as he wishes them, giving them a numeric number holds them back from doing anything.
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