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Neji_hokage · 04-08-2008

Dragon ball Af episode 3 A truffle's revenge!

After taking over June's body ,Razor plots to take over valten and get
to son goku for his Revenge! Will he succecced? Valten dosen't hope so

" Hey wait a second says valten
" Yeah somethings wrong Valten smirks
" Yet again you always have to state the obvious eh?
" Yet again you better shut up before ill will! Valten looks at patrick
Razor stands there looking at patrick and valten
Then Valten gasps " get out of June! "
Charging Valten kicks Razor which shocks him.
Ahhhh!!! he says in June's voice
In a flash of a light a explosive wave hits Patrick
and in a blink of a eye, he exits her body and goes into patricks
" darn it!!
Then Razor-Patrick puts his hands on his forehead " Solar flare!
" I cant see!
" Man he seems to be going after grandpa....I have to go there before he does !
And just at that Valten dashes up to the sky and flies off.
When he gets there he discovers a shocking discovery!
Videl and Grandma Chi-Chi are dead !
Valten screams " NOOOOOOOO!!!!!
His Hair gets pointy his eyes sting with lighting and he more musclar . With this newfound power and hatred , Valten flies off To the plains just in time for battle thats starting.
In the Plains SS4 goku is pounding Patrick
" I got more to show you SON GOKU!!!!!!!
His muscles get bulger and he get red yellow boots , jacket , gloves and wrist pads.
Final form Razor sqweezied out of Patrick making him look like a pancake .
Valten arrivies just in time and yells "I WON'T FORGIVE YOU MONSTER ! ILL KILL YOU IF IT'S THAT'S THE LAST THING ILL DO! Charging, Goku and Valten pummel Razor
and are soon joined by patrick.
SS Patrick , SS2 Valten, SS4 Goku all charge up a kamehameha and let razor escape to his ship.
NOW!!
Letting go the Massive wave , it shoots Razor into the sun!!
Well thats taking care of" says patrick
" Well i guess so...
Because of how good you guys did im gonna take
you to the amusement park!
YEAH!!!!!
C'mon lets go!

Sneak peak for next epiosde:
A black haired boy came back from the tunnel entrance, smiling.
" well the coast is clear!
A girl, A boy, A boy, A boy, A girl snuck out the tunnuel with weapons

Author's note: Ill try to make the chapters longer but
like i said i dont feel good. I also try to include more sneak peaks. cho!@

04-08-2008	#10 (permalink)
Neji_hokage (20) Super Saiyan 2 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Humping sakura in my bed Posts: 1,247 Blog Entries: 3 Rep Power: 41	Re: DBZ Af episode 1 The newest warriors Dragon ball Af episode 3 A truffle's revenge! After taking over June's body ,Razor plots to take over valten and get to son goku for his Revenge! Will he succecced? Valten dosen't hope so " Hey wait a second says valten " Yeah somethings wrong Valten smirks " Yet again you always have to state the obvious eh? " Yet again you better shut up before ill will! Valten looks at patrick Razor stands there looking at patrick and valten Then Valten gasps " get out of June! " Charging Valten kicks Razor which shocks him. Ahhhh!!! he says in June's voice In a flash of a light a explosive wave hits Patrick and in a blink of a eye, he exits her body and goes into patricks " darn it!! Then Razor-Patrick puts his hands on his forehead " Solar flare! " I cant see! " Man he seems to be going after grandpa....I have to go there before he does ! And just at that Valten dashes up to the sky and flies off. When he gets there he discovers a shocking discovery! Videl and Grandma Chi-Chi are dead ! Valten screams " NOOOOOOOO!!!!! His Hair gets pointy his eyes sting with lighting and he more musclar . With this newfound power and hatred , Valten flies off To the plains just in time for battle thats starting. In the Plains SS4 goku is pounding Patrick " I got more to show you SON GOKU!!!!!!! His muscles get bulger and he get red yellow boots , jacket , gloves and wrist pads. Final form Razor sqweezied out of Patrick making him look like a pancake . Valten arrivies just in time and yells "I WON'T FORGIVE YOU MONSTER ! ILL KILL YOU IF IT'S THAT'S THE LAST THING ILL DO! Charging, Goku and Valten pummel Razor and are soon joined by patrick. SS Patrick , SS2 Valten, SS4 Goku all charge up a kamehameha and let razor escape to his ship. NOW!! Letting go the Massive wave , it shoots Razor into the sun!! Well thats taking care of" says patrick " Well i guess so... Because of how good you guys did im gonna take you to the amusement park! YEAH!!!!! C'mon lets go! Sneak peak for next epiosde: A black haired boy came back from the tunnel entrance, smiling. " well the coast is clear! A girl, A boy, A boy, A boy, A girl snuck out the tunnuel with weapons Author's note: Ill try to make the chapters longer but like i said i dont feel good. I also try to include more sneak peaks. cho!@ __________________ PSN : Fizzykid45. Your weak..