JAIF

...colorful, is the word that best describes this. I liked the way you painted out the brutal rapefest between the guards and Kisame. Also, I enjoyed the attention to detail, especially in the first part with the guards, as well as the stark contrast between it and the poetic feel in the first paragraph. Quite a good piece of work, albeit a little short, admittedly. I didn't expect the Daimyou to die so soon. As always, your strong point is your talent in painting the images you need to liven up the story. Keep this up, I want to see what happens next.

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