Beautiful Illusion

Proof-read the one you've finished. You never know where, some weeks/months along the line, you'll think 'hmm, maybe I should add this.' or 'I can develop that.'

I've seen what you've said in your threads, about this being the best you can make it - believe me, when I first wrote Dragonball KK, those were my thoughts, too. If you really want, I'll link you to the original fiction -_-

There's always room for improvement, because your writing style and judgement changes over time. So take a bit of a break, but keep checking out whatever you finish, there's always stuff you'll end up wanting to tweak. It's like an unwritten rule. xD

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