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Default Re: My 1st fanfic:DBZ:what happened to Goten?

Every week on Tuesday I'll be working on this fic, every week on Monday is the Krillen killing #18 one, every Wdnesday is Goku's journy, every thursday how DBZ was expected to end, every friday the Naruto DBZ crossover, ever Saturday is DBAF, is that good? I'm trying to start up all my fics again, sorry for being away from this one DBAF and the Krillen one for so long.

chapter 10: Gohan against Vegeta: Goku?

"So Vegeta, whaddaya say? How 'bout a match?" Gohan provoked his soon to be opponent.

"Hmpf, sure, but this time I'll win. I've been studying up like you suggested," Vegeta answered.

"Well the kiddies are still fighting over in the air, so how about we make this one a ground match?"

"Fine, no flying above five feet or you lose."

"Any more rules to make or is this good?"

"Just stay out of the way of Goten and Trunks. First one to lose consciousness loses."

"Loser has to carry the winner home on his back when he wakes up." Vegeta nodded in agreement. Gohan turned super saiyan and then Vegeta mimicked the move. Vegeta noticed that unlike when Gohan was a child, his hair actually stuck up into the air when turning super saiyan. He couldn' tel if Gohan had gotten stronger or if it was simply because his hair is naturally spiked. The answer was a little of both. Gohan had gotten stronger do to getting older, but because he hadn't been training, he also got weaker than he had stronger. Vegeta reaized this after sensing his opponent's power level.

"So, you haven't been training?" he asked.

"Yeah, I'm always too busy studying. I bet I could still beat you though," Gohan replied. Suddenly, in Vegeta's eyes, Gohan had been changing into Goku, and back again, repeatedly. Vegeta was reliving his fight towards Goku. Instantly Gohan had punched him in the gut. This caught him by surprise because Vegeta was distracted by the vision of Goku using the triple kaio-ken attack against him.

"*cough* not fair, heh-heh...Sore loser!" Vegeta instantly recovered and drove his fist across Gohan's face. "I had also been studying my memories of Kakarott's fighting technique. As a result, I have learned the kaio-ken attack!" Vegeta was soon covered in a purple electric-like aura. "I've learned that he can also use a super kaio-ken, in which he is a super saiyan while using the technique. You see, Kakarott was not the only one to fight me with that technique. I had faught someone once before that used it, and I developed a counter-attack. I used it in my original fight with your father. However, he was able to use a kaio-ken trriple attack, which I didn't know was even possible at the time, which had tripled his power level. But now that I have learned the technique also, I can mix it with my counter for it and become unstopable!"

"I've always wondered why I always just sit there and listen when my opponent is talking, but starting now, there won't be any more talking!" Gohan said with a grin. He charged towards the saiyan prince, planning to slug him in the face, but his fist was caught.

"Now! Super Kaio-ken times four!"

What? I didn't know it was possible to multiply a super kaio-ken...

Vegeta charged toward him at the speed of sound, causing a sonic boom, and threw his fist at the enamy, who was holding his hurt ears. Gohan recovered after stepping back, and dashed to continue the fight. As soon asw he got to his opponent however, he had been hit in the gut. Before the half-bred wariror knew what hit him, the prunce had flipped opver his back and delivered a powerful thrust of the foot into Gohan's spine. Gohan yelled in pain as the enamy once again struck a blow to the chin, this time with his knee. He fell forward slightly, but recovered and stepped back a little.

"You're not the only one who knows the kaio-ken! My dad also taught it to me when he got back from planet Yardrat! Now, Kaio-ken times--UGH!" Before Gohan could use the special attack he was kicked across the back of the head. But I thought he was infront of me!?

"After image technique...Gah!" Vegeta seemed in pain. I didn't know times four could be such a strain...It must be combining it with super saiyan and my counter attack that causes the attack... He brought the purple-ish red-ish and yellow-ish aura in a few inches, closer to his body, powering down. "Okay, so I can only use times two, but it is still enough to beat you!"

"Shut up! Super kaio-ken, HA!" Gohan spiralled himself off the ground and onto his feet, then punched Vegeta in the gut, only to see his fist had been caught by Vegeta's palm. "Okay, times four!" It shouldn't be so much strain if I'm not using that counter Vegeta developped.

Gohan mimicked Vegeta's earlier moves, punching him in the gut, flipping over to kick him in the back, and landing to land a strike from the foot to his jaw.

Meanwhile, in the junior fight of thier family members, Goten was continuously shootng tiny Kamehameha like yellow energy balls at his opponent, Trunks, but each one was being dodged. Trunks then shot upward dashing towards Goten, still avoiding the beams, and punched his enamy in the gut.

The nexty chapter will have more actiopn, this one was just kinda starting it back up. See ya in one week! The next chapter'll also be longer, so get ready for some reading!
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