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Default Dragonball: Goku's journy

This tells the story of some stuff that happened (but of course never really happened) while Goku was training for the 23rd Tenkaichi Budokai tournament.

note= I am now only going to be writing fanfics and not attending other threads because I've realized people just don't like me. If you respond to this note with an insuilt (which someone probably will like "Gee, ya just noticed that?") than I won't be replying and will simply continue with the fics.

chapter 1

Hhhhm...Goku seems to get stronger when he heals from serious injuries... Korin thought to himself. Goku had just beaten the evil king Piccollo, and he, Yajirobe, and Korin were on Korin's tower.
"Okay! Now I'm off to find my power pole and I'll meat you guys back here!" Goku informed with joy do to the fact that even though Piccollo killed Shenron, he may still be able to bring back his murdered friends.

Goku was on a mission to revive Krillen, Choutzu, and Roshi, who had been killed by the evil king Piccollo. The problem was that Piccollo also killed Shenron, so Goku would not be able to use the dragonballs. However, Korin has indormed him that using his power pole, he can get to a floating tower above Korin's, where the guardian of the Earth, Kami, lives. Kami had created the dragonballs, so he should be able to bring them back. But Kami will not see Goku unless he can beat his assistat, Mr. Popo, in a battle, and Mr. Popo may even be stronger than Goku! So Goku chooses to stay and train at Kami's lookout tower, until he is strong enough to beat Mr. Popo. Surprisingly, Kami emerges from his building on the lookout and re-creates the dragonballs for him. Goku is grateful, but notices Kami is very similar looking to Piccollo. Kami informs Goku that he and Piccollo had once been the same person, but that in order to become the guardian of Earth he had to expel the evil within him.

Then Kami gives bad news to his monkey-like friend. It appears Piccollo re-created himself in the form of his child, Piccollo Jr. This new reincarnated Piccollo has one goal: Defeat Goku in the 23rd martial arts tournament and take over the Earth. Now Goku must learn to control his spiritualo energy, sense the energy of others like he had done once in order to find Piccollo, learn the moves and skills that Kami and Mr. Popo have to offer, and continue training until the 23rd martial arts tournament where he and Piccollo will finally fight face-to-face.

In order to find the unnecasary movements in his running, Mr. Popo is evaluating while Goku runs in a circle around the lookout.

"No Goku! You don't need to pump your arms so much, just slide the arms, not the shoulders. One shoulder should never be infront of the other. Remember the bell excirsice? Your body is jiggling back and forth, which would make the bell create noise, while if you just slide it in one direction, itn wouldn't make any noise, and you wouldn't have any excess movement!" Mr. Popo instructed. Goku did as he was told. "Yes Goku! That's it! I was begining to think you would never get it right!" Goku stopped and smiled, eyes closed, holding the peace sign.

"So what's next? More mind training?" Goku asked.

"Yes, you still have to master your spiritual energy, and once you've done that, I'll teach you some moves. Then we shall fight again, and see if you're ready. Remember Goku, we all have spiritual energy, you just have to connect it. Go ahead and continue meditating, try to sense my or Kami's energy level, and I'll come back to see how you've done," Mr. Popo instructed. Goku sat down and closed his eyes. He relaxed all the muscles in his body. His breathing slowed. He felt something in his stomach. He could feel his power. It was overwhelming. It reminded him of the feeling he got when he used the Kamehameha. He felt exactly like he was doing a kamehameha that second, except that he was calm...Relaxed...And then he felt the feeling spread across his body, and even aroung his body in a small area he could feel it and then he could see it. He saw a blue aura surround his body, while his eyes were closed and he couldn't see anything else. Then he extended it. While his core power shrunk, more energy was being generated into a streem of blue aura energy, which connected to someone else's. He saw that within this other aura was Kami. He noticed that the feeling was a little stronger. It was stronger and the aura was bigger because Kami was a little stronger than Goku.

I can feel it...Just like how I found Piccollo that day...There! Goku then sensed the child reincarnation of Piccollo. He...He's not quite as strong as his father...I can take him! I can do it! I can do this and save the world right now before he gets stronger! I know I can! I have to...NOW! "FLYING NIMBUS!" he called.

To the East nimbus, go!" Goku commanded. They flew off into the East.

"What-? What is he doing! He couldn't be going to face..Oh no...Goku! Stop!" Kami was sensing Goku's power and then ran out of the temple yelling for him to stop. Goku just continued flying. Oh no...I feared this might happen. He thinks that he can defeat Piccollo, but he doesn't have fullk control over his spiritual energy yet. I pray Piccollo doesn't know that he is Goku, or else he will try to avenge his father. Goku doesn't know that the power level he feels varies depending on how much of the power is being released. Piccollo was only releasing a smaller amount, but if Goku shows up he will unleash all of his wrath upon him. Kami thought to himself.

Goku is flying over a forest. He senses something below.

"Down there nimbus! He's a mile or two that way," Goku pointed, "Just drop me off here so that he won't see us on our way there," Goku informed.

Goku! Don't try to defeat him! He's too powerful! Kami communicated telepathically.

"Naw, he's not all that strong! I sensed his power level, it isn't as big as mine!"

Goku, he was surpressing his power! He obviously has more experience then you!

Goku stood on his nimbus, thinking of what to do.

Goku?

"Nimbus...Take us down,"

GOKU! No, don't!

Will Goku fight Piccollo, or will Kami and Mr. Popo stop him in time? Will Goku's progress in his training go to his head? And if they do fight, how could one win if the story goes on in the 23rd martial arts tournament? All this and more, next time, on DBGJ!
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