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**JAIF** · 03-23-2008

Sorry, but, I'm going to delete some of your posts here. This isn't the Gas Chamber section, so spam isn't allowed here. Please keep posting to commenting on the story only.

On a more-related issue, I read through your fanfic JC and I found it rather enjoyable. Add more to the description and length, fix the grammar / punctuation / syntax errors, and add a wider range of vocabulary, and you're good to go. Shouldn't be too hard.

03-23-2008	#35 (permalink)
JAIF Moderator Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Piercing the Heavens and stuff. Posts: 5,852 Rep Power: 63	Re: Worlds collide!Naruto meets Dragonballz! Sorry, but, I'm going to delete some of your posts here. This isn't the Gas Chamber section, so spam isn't allowed here. Please keep posting to commenting on the story only. On a more-related issue, I read through your fanfic JC and I found it rather enjoyable. Add more to the description and length, fix the grammar / punctuation / syntax errors, and add a wider range of vocabulary, and you're good to go. Shouldn't be too hard. __________________ Empty until further notice.