Island of 1,000 Condiments

About Semi-colons: You think so? Thanks, I'll keep that in mind.

About 'Hundreds:' Typo. Thanks for pointing it out.

I have a general idea where I want to go with the rest of the chapter. However, there are a number of tasks I still need to complete. First, I need to fix the mistakes you pointed out. Then, I need to write up descriptions for the individual characters. The main cast should be 4 -5 characters, followed by a few who come in later on. The description of Reproda Lucidus is simple enough. I have a vivid image of the streets in my mind. It's just the matter of characters. The Master Baron needs a name which I'm considering to include in the previous article or not. A few advisors and other supports will need to be done eventually. Though, that's not my biggest concern. My biggest concern is how I write everything beyond 001. The first chapter should open up the city of Reproda Lucidus. Beyond that, I have no idea. I don't know if I want to follow the main cast or jump to another aspect of the city. Then, I'll need to figure out how I want to organize the chapters? Arcs / Sagas, maybe? However, right now, I'm thinking quite a ways into the future. For now, I just need to work on a strong first chapter. Something to catch attention.

Bah, ramble. =/

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