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Originally Posted by The751
Well, I've added more color. Took off blur and tried to make a red to blue thing. Im going to make it fade but for now what do you think?

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Yo, sorry bout the late feedback mate. Didn't notice the message and have only been on for skittish moments.
Big improvement from before, nice idea with using the stock for the colour change. Bg looks interesting, typo isn't always needed, but it will be interesting to see what/where you come up it.
I'd say just a lil bit of foreground action to add a little more depth and it will be a good tag for some early work.