So i'm guessing you two are with me... from memory. If not, then pay no regards to what I say >_>
I'll just say it all in simply bullet points, not much of a good typer.
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Originally Posted by The751
What I've come up with. Didnt add any C4D's though. |
Nice stock placement, though its too fuzzy/shaky and hurts my eyes.
Too much negative space (black space/emptiness), the colour just suddenly drops off. Colours match the stock though so good job there, i'm guessing smudge bg?
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Originally Posted by Gosan
Eh? *is in Engel's group* The random selection seems, rigged =/ j/k. But I am looking forward to learning the art of Engelism from you Engel-sensei, please look after me XD.
 
Yeah, I just wanted to start off with something simple and plain to start off ... |
As you stated, very simple, nice dark to light work, though the stock is of low quality and looks blurry/out of focus. Text doesn't really do anything... though I just generally hate text as I can never get it right myself >_<
Colour suits the stock, seems like a decent base to build some more off.
Pretty tired so not my best advice sorry; hmm, well fire some questions at me or something. Have a looksy in the pinned tutorials topic here as well, I remember some being some decent in there.