Re: Worlds collide!Naruto meets Dragonballz!
I still think it should be spelled out the normal way "two" instead of "2", and "Power Level" instead of "PL". There were other minor spelling errors as well, but I don't care so long as I can understand them.=)
I know that I'm sounding annoying but you need to spend a bit more time before you post your fic's, theres no need for you to rush, take your time, spell check it, then proof read it. Don't worry too much about the fans, post it when you think its ready they'll enjoy it more.
I know it might be tough holding three fic's at a time maybe you should finish one then start on another no need to push yourself, that way you can have time for everything.=D
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