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Default Re: My 1st fanfic:DBZ:what happened to Goten?

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Originally Posted by Ultimate_Gohan View Post
Oh, ok then. I can't wait for the next chapter!
you don't have to anymore, here it is=

Chapter5: 2 years of silence on Earth...A short training Session in Other World(changed the name a little)

5 Years have passed on Earth. This is about 2 years before the World Tournament, and before Buu shows up. In Other World, less time has passed however. King Kai has agreed to take Goku with him to meet Grand Kai at his Kai reunion if Goku can go SS2.

Goku is powering up, releasing all of his energy into the air. He is about to reach his limit, but he is not getting any stronger because he is not building up his energy, he is releasing it into the air.

"No, no Goku. Don't release your energy. Build it up inside of you. Once you have it built up to the maximum that your body can endure, let it go and release it, then you will transform. But don't release it until your body has overflowed with the energy!" King Kai commanded.

Back on Earth, Gohan (who is now 15 years old not counting the year in the hyperbolic time chamber) is talking to 5 year old Goten.

"So that's how we beat Freeza" Gohan concluded. Gohan had bean telling Goten about his adventures for a long time ( see the video game Idainaru Goku Densetsu for details on these stories ) and others have been helping him tell the stories. The suspensefull part for Goten is finding out how his father died.

They were in their room ( They share a room ) and Gohan was sitting in a desk with papers infront of him.

"So what happens next Gohan?" Goten asks. "Well now I have to get back to studying, the I'll tell you about how Tunks-"

"Trunks was there too?" Goten interrupted. "Well not the Trunks you know, this one was him from a future world," Gohan explained. Gohan got back to studying. Gohan turned around and Goten was gone. Outsie, Goten was training with his mother, Chi-chi.

"Okay Goten, there is a...A thing...In your stomach. It is your energy source. You can use it to make your punches and kicks. That's the basic thing about it, but I've seen people do much more, like making wierd balls of energy and throwing them at people." Chi-chi explained. Goten created a yellow ball of energy in his hands.

"Like this?" Goten asked.

"WAH-!?! How did... Well yes, like that. Now all that I know how to do is focus energy into my fist or foot and make punches and kicks more effective. Try it on that tree over there."

Goten took back the energy from the ball. He winded his fist back as it began to glow. He released the fist of fury on to the defenceless tree. The tree broke in half.

"Yeah...I guess I'm a pretty good martial artist after all..." Chi-chi said, amazed at Goten's strength. "Hey, try focusing the energy into a ball again, but this time, use ALL of the energy you can and yell 'Kamehameha!' okay?" Chi-chi suggested. Goten created a blue ball of energy and yelled out "KAMEKAMEHA!"

"Goten, it's pronounced KameHAmeha, not kameKameha...And your supossed to throw it..." Chi-chi corrected.

"Oh, okay!" Goten said as he threw the ball at a tree and said "kamakameha" again.

"Well you pronounced it wrong again, and you don't nrelly throw it... you kinda make it...Extend.. Stretch and explode," Chi-chi once again corrected.

"Oh, like this?" Goten said as he recharged, blowing Chi-chi back a little, and created a Kamehameha wave that blew up a row of trees.
"Wow...The student has surpassed the master..." Chi-chi stammered.

Back at other world, blue lightning surrounded Goku's body, Goku's hair grew a little, and he yelled very loudly.

"That's it Goku! Now just release it and you'll reach the next level of Super Saiyan!" King Kai said while being pushed back by Goku's energy.

"HHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!!!" Goku yelled as he released all the energy and became a Super Saiyan 2.

"I call it... Super Saiyan 2!"

Next chapter:Super Saiyan Goten

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