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Originally Posted by Ultimate_Gohan
Hmmm, the story seems good but you should focus more on Goten instead of SS2 Gohan and Vegeta fighting.
Anyway, good job!
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Well know that the fight is over, Goten is going to be, like the main character. Up until now it has been like a prologue or something, ya know, like getting you used to the feel of this fanfic. The course of the story starts to change DRAMATICALLY in the next chapter.