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ultra_blade · 02-09-2008

That was good, the fighting and all but it still needs to be longer. I loved every part of the fight, i like how Vegeta can withstand Gohans Super Saiyan powers. Cant wait for the next chap.

02-09-2008	#6 (permalink)
ultra_blade (11) Student of Lord Kaio Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Melbourne, Australia Posts: 166 Rep Power: 1	Re: My 1st fanfic:DBZ:what happened to Goten? That was good, the fighting and all but it still needs to be longer. I loved every part of the fight, i like how Vegeta can withstand Gohans Super Saiyan powers. Cant wait for the next chap.