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Originally Posted by Island of 1,000 Condiments
If your Sage is actually Velox, this Fiction would be win.
Very winful.
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Remind me what Velox is like again and I may consider it. I already had ideas for the Sage however, so you'll have to bare with me.
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Originally Posted by Pyro Bastard
Granted you're a good writer, this kinda sounds cliche. It could be good, but by that plot outline, it sounds like something that has been done multiple times.
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I can see why you would get that idea, but trust me, that is the most basic of basic plot outlines. The main character isn't an orphan, if that helps reduce the clichéness of it all. Hell, I've even been considering making the stereotypical wise, old sage into a young woman who has inherited her father's scripts. But that's just concept.
Looking back over it, I have presented it in a fairly cliché manner - I'll fix that, don't worry.
As far as Lucia goes... I can't really tell you what happened to her without ruining possibly one of the largest parts of the plot I've thought of so far. All could change, though - remember, this is pretty early stages.