JC#1

I try to make it long, and when I finish it it looks really long but after I post it it is looked at from a different angle I guess you could say.I'll try to make this one long enough for you=
chapter 3:Goten's strange birth
Gohan was flying over the ocean.He had just been at the Kame house.Now he's on his way to capsule corp.
Bulma, you're supposed to be part of a rich family, so please have a check ready when I get there!Gohan thought.
At capsule corp, Vegeta is on his bed, staring towards the ceiling.Suddenly, he has a flashback of the first time he fought Goku.
*"HAHAHA!Kakarot, you fool!No low-level could defeat an elite like myself"Vegeta says in his flashback.
"Even a low-level can surpass an elite if they train hard enough," Goku said.*
"And then he spared my life...He humiliated me!And against Freeza..."
*Vegeta's flashback:Vegeta is on the ground, coughing up blood.
"Kakarott, you must let go of your feelings...They'll get you killed!"
"I can't!I can't give up who I am, not on the battle field, because when I'm fighting, my feelings are my guide"Goku says.*
"And then that green freak surpassed me!I had finnally thought that I had reached the pinacle of Saiyan power, and then Kakarrott managed to stay in Super Saiyan form for days!I thought that the worst was here...And then his stupd son defeated Cell and doesn't even know how to access that form so that I can compare my power to it!And now I can't have my final battle with Kakarott until I'm-"Vegeta was cut off by a thought in his head.He jumped off of his bead and raced through the hallway.He found Bulma.
"Bulma, you need to know that you will never see me again"Vegeta told her as a scarred look overcame Bulma's face.Vegeta pointed his hand at his face, focussing energy into a blast.Suddenly, Gohan ran through the door.
Huh?Wait--That is the answer!Kakarrott's son!If I can beat someone more powerfull than Kakarrott then that proves who's stronger!Vegeta thought as he aimed the blast away from his face and towards Gohan.Suddenly, Vegeta saw what Gohan's situation was by reading his mind.
"Boy, you can have what you need if you defeat me in a fight!"
"Wha--What!?!"Gohan stammered.
"You heard me!"Vegeta replied.
"Okay then"Gohan smirked.They walked outside.Gohan went SS full power, and Vegeta got so exited that he ascended to USS2, which he did not know limited his speed.Vegeta was still holding the blast, which he had been constantly charging up.He thought that Gohan wouldn't expect the blast to be so powerfull, but it seems that he had been sensing the blast's power the whole time.
Gohan charged at Vegeta and the blast was released.Gohan dissapeared from the blast's way and reappeared behind Vegeta, kicking him in the right shoulder.
"I didn't even feel that!" Vegeta laughed as he grabbed Gohan's leg and threw him at a nearby tree.Gohan stopped himself just inches away from the tree.
"Well now that I know how much force I need to apply," Gohan begin as he charged towards Vegeta a second time,"I can really do some fighting!"
Gohan punched Vegeta in the4 face with the exact amount of power Gohan calculated he needed, based on the amount of force he used to kick Vegeta and the amount of resistance Vegeta seemed to use.vegeta stepped back as his nose started to bleed.
What!?!He is far more powerfull than me even in this new form!Vegeta thought.
Oh no...I punched him as hard as I can and nothin' but a nose bleed?Gohan thought.
Inside the building Bulma got a call.
"Gohan!You better go back to the hospital and meet your new baby brother!"Bulma shouted.
"Wha--Yes!I knew it would work out somehow!"
"Hold on!We still have a fight to finish!"Vgeta reminded Gohan.Gohan turned around to face Vegeta and they both began to smile.Gohan powered up as much as he could.
Vegeta began to as well.
"hhhhhaaaaaaaaa!!!"
"HHAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!"
Vegeta just had to have more dramatic of a yell.
They each charged at eachother with all the power they had!Gohan was charging much faster, but if he was headbutted by Vegeta with all that strength, he would be a goner!!!
Who will win?And will the loser be penalized...PERMANITELY?More next time as speed and strength colide!And what's the little cutie's name?
Next time:Gohan's true power...released!

So how do you like?BTW, DBZ movie 9, Bojack Unbound, fits in the middle of chap. 2 between the Cell games and Goahn waiting outside the emergency room.edit=Woops, I guess it was too short again.