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Default Re: Lone Wanderer: The Story of Corey (OC, Extreme AU, Crossover)

Someone PLEASE comment. It's no fun. And don't delete this post. I have a story that needs writing!

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Chapter 2: First Day of School: Part 1



The teen walked down the sidewalk, the inanimate grey concrete not giving any form of reaction, mainly because it couldn’t respond. The sky was beginning to light up with the sun’s rays, creating a nice sunrise view, marveled to all who appreciated the small things in life. Sadly, Corey Uchiha was not one to take in the small things in life at the moment, only seeing what is truly important in life, such as making friends.Making a left at the plus-shaped intersection, soon, a building became visible to him. Since he had been walking for a short time, the doors were still closed to all. Oh, and this school accepted students of all species, as long as the species were at least with human characteristics. These species included but were not limited to hedgehogs, foxes, and echidnas. Now, why the holy hell am I mentioning these species? Why, that’s what this city was: <st1:Street w:st="on">Station Square</st1:Street>. The building was an impressive three-story high building, with the first floor being that of the fourth, fifth, and sixth grade classes, the second floor being the seventh grade classes (Corey’s classes), and the third floor being eighth grade classes. The structure stretched across the block, amounting to half of the side of the block that the boy was on. Now, <st1:Street w:st="on">Station Square</st1:Street> “Middle” School was massive mainly due to the size of the indoor Football Stadium located parallel to the gym/basketball court. The auditorium was also a part of the mass on the other side. Insanely enough, this thing amounted for half of the taxpayers’ money.His legs finally finding ground near the entrance, Corey sat on a bench and waited for the students to get into the building. He simply sat there, studying the fine details of his shoes without really thinking too much of it.
“Hey, who are you?” called a voice, most likely a male, to the boy, causing the black eyes to gaze upon the originator. He had shorter hair than the boy, his face was almost similar to that of Corey’s, and he looked almost like Corey, minus the choice of clothes. While Corey preferred gray, green, and red, this character preferred black, red, and blue. Most interesting, however, were the pale blue eyes of the boy before him. There was no sign that he even had a pupil, making him unique from the rest. Aside from the eyes, this one could pass for Corey, given the circumstances. “I’m Corey…” before the youth could utter another word, the pale-cerulean eyed one continued.“You look just like me. Anyway, my name is Zach.”the other preteen stated, offering his near-look-a-like a hand. While they maintained the eye contact, Zach noticed something about this one’s eyes. He’s got to be related to me somehow. And his coal black eyes have a ring around the pupil. He must be an Uchiha. But the Uchihas were supposed to be completely wiped out! This guy must be from the same timeframe as I am! But… I’m a Hyuga. Before any more words could pass between the two kids, the bell rang. A blue blur lashed into the building, startling the two kids. Even more surprising to the two, a red echidna with a white crest on his chest, a yellow fox with two tails and white chest fur, a black blur, and a pink hedgehog wearing red soon followed.“Seems like the freak show is in town…” Corey muttered, walking past Zach, the “Hyuga”, as mentioned in his thoughts, and into the building. As he did, he took out his schedule. First period-Room 205 on the second floor, seven minutes to get there. Then my second period is in Room 207. Short walk. Following that is a long walk to the other side of the building to 230 for period three. Period four is 201, and Period five is my lunch. I brought my own. I packed it. Then, period six is room 200. Then, I have to go back to room 205 for reading in seventh period, and end it all up with room 209 for eighth. Piece of cake.And so, Corey entered the main building, and made a left up the staircase, walking slowly up the stairs to not trip his other peers… strangers to him. He noticed that Zach made a right up a staircase too. Wonder if he’ll be in the same class as me… was the last thing Corey thought on the matter before reaching the top. The checkerboard pattern floor was black and white, the school’s colors. Backpack in hand, he made a right at the top, and toward rooms 200 to 215. Continuing to the end of the hall, he stopped three-quarters of the way, and looked to his left. Room 206. Then, to his right. Room 205. Bingo.Making yet another right, Corey entered the room, for his English Class. After four periods passing (his English class, his Math class, his Science class, and his Social Studies class), with him figuring out to open his locker door, meeting his teachers, and mainly going through the student Code of Conduct, what to do, and what not to do, it was time for Corey’s lunch period. Since the lunch student number was so big, Corey and a bucketful of students got dumped in one group that ate after exercise, while the remaining students were dumped in the other group, that ate before exercise.Corey sat with a brown lunch sack in his hands, waiting for the signal to switch lunch groups.The first part of his school day (condensed) had ended… but what would become of the second part? </BLOCKQUOTE>
I'm sorry, but I don't really want to type out his classes, unless it's a plot event. (i,E, Corey having to go to the bathroom, loses direction, and finds plans for world domination (laid out by *gasp* Metal Sonic) which really is what happens). Now for the powerlevels.<BLOCKQUOTE>
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(New) Powerlevels:Zach (relaxed): 10,000Zach (base): Roughly 324,500</BLOCKQUOTE></BLOCKQUOTE>
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