Gosan

Now I understand why your advice is so good, you have incorporated all that in your own fiction, which turned out to be not the best, but hey it’s still fantastic.

Your use of words, description and battle sequences makes it mind gripping and I like the new characters and character development you put into it.

Nice that you gave the humans more attention since most fan-fictions don’t nowadays. I look forward to the next chapter. Keep it up Predator! Keep going!

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