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ultra_blade · 07-19-2008

Awesome chapter, I read this yesterday but couldn't post anything because my internet died somehow =[... but now it's back =]. Although I noticed a few grammar errors in this chapter that were really annoying me for some reason, like on the last sentence you had:-

"I think things are about to get difficult." Bardock said as he fought not hard to get sucked into the twister himself.

When it should have been:-

"I think things are about to get difficult." Bardock said as he fought hard not to get sucked into the twister himself.

There were also two other things that seemed to piss me off but I lost them =S. Aside from that I love the fight so far, Bardock and Goku are so cool and awesome atm, and are they Super Saiyan or Super Saiyan 2? I'm not really sure. Anyways I'm expecting an awesome next chapter from you. I really enjoyed reading the power levels even more so than reading the fic but was really disappointed not to see the power levels of those who competed in the other world tournament and waiting till chapter 47 is waay too long =[. Oh and how long is this Saga gonna be?

07-19-2008	#122 (permalink)
ultra_blade (11) Student of Lord Kaio Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Melbourne, Australia Posts: 172 Rep Power: 3	Re: Altered History - Saga VI Awesome chapter, I read this yesterday but couldn't post anything because my internet died somehow =[... but now it's back =]. Although I noticed a few grammar errors in this chapter that were really annoying me for some reason, like on the last sentence you had:- "I think things are about to get difficult." Bardock said as he fought not hard to get sucked into the twister himself. When it should have been:- "I think things are about to get difficult." Bardock said as he fought hard not to get sucked into the twister himself. There were also two other things that seemed to piss me off but I lost them =S. Aside from that I love the fight so far, Bardock and Goku are so cool and awesome atm, and are they Super Saiyan or Super Saiyan 2? I'm not really sure. Anyways I'm expecting an awesome next chapter from you. I really enjoyed reading the power levels even more so than reading the fic but was really disappointed not to see the power levels of those who competed in the other world tournament and waiting till chapter 47 is waay too long =[. Oh and how long is this Saga gonna be?