JAIF

Ah... well, I'm not too much into this kind of stories, but for what it's worth, it's very well written. I only saw it once, but italicizing usually looks much better than capitalizing for emphasis. I also like the depth of your description and the smooth quality of your narration. It's pretty great, all said. You are perfectly allowed to type "shit" normally though ;>_>. Unless you don't want to, of course.

Oh, and I added the topic prefix "Original", and removed it from the title.

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